Female Majesty: the Little Succubus Has to Work Hard Today Too

To be honest, I think the author's top priority is to finalize the main category of the article. You say it is a male channel, but it is not a fighting and daily life. But you say it is a female channel, but daily life is not sweet. After all, the female protagonist has not had to eat or confirm the relationship until now. The boundary is very awkward and cannot be reached or lowered. If it is a male channel, it will have more adventures. If it is a female channel, it will have more daily desserts. If the author just writes for fun but I didn't say it, but if you want to gain readers, you still need to change it. The outline can be faster. The worst I can do is start a new book after I finish writing it, and I'm afraid that it will be too watery in meaningless places, which will lead to difficulty in updating the data. Most of the entire article is a very watery inner monologue. It can be appropriate, but too much monologue will make the article seem long, watery, and drag the rhythm completely. I can't take it in. Finally, with so many comments, I still hope that the book will be better, and it's not a nitpick. When I am typing, I lie in bed and play TikTok. How good is it? Why am I commenting here? It's because I like it, so I am willing to take the time to give some suggestions.

It's a sweet story. It's psychologically delicate. I just don't know how the male protagonist will behave when he finds out that the female protagonist is not that strong.

Single or many? Seriously, it's important to me

The protagonist is like a dragon in one punch [face covering]

Fortunately, it's just because it was overemphasized before and there were too many psychological descriptions. Just like in this book, there are some things that don't need to be emphasized many times. Just stop at the psychological descriptions.