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Emmm, although it is a fanfic, it is quite enjoyable to read, because the characters we help are all characters we like, but the protagonist must have his own story, what he wants, and how to develop the way of guardianship. If you are just a spectator, there is no need to use the armored man as a camera. After all, you have traveled through time. Seize the body, this is the fact that all the beings in the fifteen realms have been taken away, so is there still a bigger trouble in Tianwaitian? From this point of view, whether he protects the story or develops it, there is no need to rest on the original work. The development in the original work develops normally, and the protagonist must have his own story style. I give five stars because it's fun to watch. I write this because I want to see the protagonist be flesh and blood and not just a barrage voting machine [laughs]

I can see the author's intention, the text is also very good, and the story is also step-by-step. Come on.

Personally, I feel that this is a very good Kenlai fan novel. The author really writes it with great care. Many chapters are seven to eight thousand words in length. The concept of each chapter is also very good. The character setting is relatively close to the original work. The protagonist is also well portrayed. It is really amazing to be able to write such an article after being busy with daily life and work. [Like][Like][Like]

To be honest, this is my first book review. The wording of the article is very clever. The fan fiction of this sword is really very close to my heart. I am very selective in reading books. I have found several books, but none of them can suit my heart. This book is really good. I will continue to follow it. The author has to work hard. I rely on you to read the sword of the sword in the foreign persimmon. ^·×·^

At present, I feel that the author's writing is very good and you can read on.

The plot is very in line with my ideas. I like it very much. Keep writing and update more every day.

Very good, has its own ideas and is very comfortable to watch

It's considered a very good one among the Jianlai fanfics.

Good looking, can be read carefully

It's lively and interesting. Netizens who like to come in can watch it.

Will you persist? I like it very much.

It's very well written.

It looks great, come on

Five-star praise gives it a boost

It's really good

Maybe for some people, this book is not good to read, but I think it's okay

Good to watch, love to watch, watch more, follow it

The story is well written and the writing style is also good. I hope I can keep writing.

This book is awesome, no sauce, the writing is not laggy, it's a great fanfic! [Send heart][Send heart] There are too few fanfics for Jian Lai 🍅, I think this one is okay [laughing]

Very beautiful, I just wish I didn't have to be in charge

There's nothing wrong with it. The writing is good.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Super pretty. Real

Why was it taken off the shelves?

No, why are my books gone?

It's so beautiful, why was it removed from the shelves?

I originally wanted to give it five stars, but I was worried that it would be too early, so I gave it four stars and one star to give the author encouragement.

This book is really well written, I just hope it doesn't break as soon as I write it. This one is really good, come on

It's great. I've never reviewed a book before. This review is because I don't want the author to give up.

It's pretty good among Jianlai fanfics.