"Our animal system is in decline. Fruit abilities are simple and useless to develop. The upper limits of ordinary species and ancient species are extremely low. Fantasy beast species are difficult to find and awakening is difficult."
——Excerpted from "The Diary of Demon Lord Chen Yao"
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Chen Yao traveled through time and became a sickly boy picked up by Garp. He had been hanging out with three little ones since he was a child. After Luffy chose to become a pirate, he chose to join the navy with Garp, and at the same time, the gears of fate began to turn.
Many years later.
On the Red Earth Continent, on top of Mary Qiaoya in the Holy Land, Chen Yao, who was wearing a white navy cloak, looked at the panicked Tianlong people below and laughed mercilessly.
"Are you bastard Marines going to rebel?"
Facing Wulaoxing's question, Chen Yao chuckled and drew his sword.
"The Navy has never been the Draconian's dog. It wasn't before, and it won't be now."
Reader comments
Decisive killing, collectible golden fingers, very good, and no ambiguous plot. The protagonist is addicted to cigarettes (I don't like it personally), Luffy is the third brother, and the golden fingers have some side effects - his animal nature is strong, and he is dominated by animal nature, but he can exercise his will. The protagonist is also lustful, and a little introverted. He is embarrassed to speak in front of strangers, but there is a chapter that says that the protagonist only knows a little bit about One Piece, but later he can speculate on Luffy's sailing status...
It looks good so far, but Golden Finger should be strengthened, either by merging all the fantasy beast species, or by giving a gift that can be taken away at any time, because there are so many fantasy beast species on the protagonist, what's the use? At present, it doesn't seem to have much effect, so I only use one or two occasionally, and don't use the others. They all passively strengthen themselves. Isn't it too wasteful?
Give yourself a score
The killing is decisive, and the golden finger is quite novel. It has a good idea, you can check it out.
Ok ok ok
It's okay. It's well written and can be read. Just not too cruel to Momonosuke. It would be better to be more ruthless.
Decisive killing, collectible golden fingers, very good, and no ambiguous plot. The protagonist is addicted to cigarettes (I don't like it personally), Luffy is the third brother, and the golden fingers have some side effects - his animal nature is strong, and he is dominated by animal nature, but he can exercise his will. The protagonist is also lustful, and a little introverted. He is embarrassed to speak in front of strangers, but there is a chapter that says that the protagonist only knows a little bit about One Piece, but later he can speculate on Luffy's sailing status...
It looks good so far, but Golden Finger should be strengthened, either by merging all the fantasy beast species, or by giving a gift that can be taken away at any time, because there are so many fantasy beast species on the protagonist, what's the use? At present, it doesn't seem to have much effect, so I only use one or two occasionally, and don't use the others. They all passively strengthen themselves. Isn't it too wasteful?
Give yourself a score
The killing is decisive, and the golden finger is quite novel. It has a good idea, you can check it out.
Ok ok ok
It's okay. It's well written and can be read. Just not too cruel to Momonosuke. It would be better to be more ruthless.