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This is the purest time-travel article [face covering] There are no inexplicable villains and sponsors, and it only focuses on the horror game itself [face covering] There is no unnecessary emotional kidnapping, and it only focuses on describing the details [like] It is much better than those articles that deliberately stir up emotions.

It's pretty good to watch, and the plot is okay. At least it fits my mind of "why the focus is so popular because of horror", rather than hastily and NPC blowing up the game. The plot is also quite immersive. The supporting characters are high-profile, don't cause trouble, and obey instructions [plus one on the bookshelf]

I originally thought it was a cliche novel, but the design is really interesting. It is different from the novels where the protagonist does something, and then the supporting characters scream crazily without even explaining the essence. I look forward to it ^ω^

It's still okay, and I finished reading it relatively smoothly. The characters are three-dimensional and the plot is compact, but the ending is too sudden.

Nice! Don't mess with the heroine! ! ! The male protagonist can just focus on his career! ! Please! ! ! The plot is really well written. It shows the completed plot and story to everyone, so that everyone can have a sense of involvement, rather than general descriptions. The readers are confused as they watch passers-by in the plot praise and praise the game. Good reviews

I was a little scared after watching it, but I hope there will be more optimization of the thriller plot. I don't really want to see a slap-in-the-face plot, so I need to write more plots.

To be honest, it's quite good, but I was a little panicked when I read it. I looked back from time to time when I read it at night. It's much better than other novels, and it doesn't have any ink. Other novels require dozens of chapters to complete each level.

It's a pure horror game article, with no other clutter. The protagonist is more like a tool man, and the whole article talks about the game. (Quietly: It's best to listen to it when you're sleeping at night, it feels good~ [laughing and crying])

The writing is very good, but the scenes described are not scary at all. Come on, look forward to it

Wow, it's quite rare and quite beautiful. I feel like it's really interesting to write about the story of players' clearance. Lu Zhixing, who is the plot analyzer, Professor Chen, who is the older generation's rule abider, Brother Long, the soft rice but tough ghost bride strategy expert, and Ms. Lancet, the forensic doctor, all have their own characteristics, and the cooperation between them is also very interesting. The supporting characters are well-cast. ୧•̀ꇴ•૭

The writing is pretty good. The world view is grand and it should be popular if written like this. The sense of immersion is better than other similar ones. After all, you will know if it is good or not after reading it [Top post][Top post][Top post]

Pretty good. Although not that scary. But the story layout is okay. It's okay to watch. It's just that something is missing, and the intention and purpose have become unclear.

Ah ah ah, author, you'd better publish the next one as soon as possible (ノ=Д=)ノ┻━┻ It's very good-looking, but to be honest, there is quite little plot. Most of the words are describing the plot in the game, but it is also very well written. There are still some shortcomings in the writing. For example, the content of the game produced by the protagonist, how can I put it, it just feels that the perspective is too single. I just summarize the important points in one sentence and then complete the level (this is just a personal feeling, it is not easy to describe). It feels a bit overwhelming (?) [Awkward laugh] The most important thing is that the author suddenly ended it, a little bit reluctant to let go, it is really good to watch But it's okay to say that you can't accept it (for me), it's just normal, just like you know that your friend is going to leave soon, so you don't have a particularly big reaction to his (her) departure [Thinking]

Very good, this is one of the few good novels, come on There is currently no poisonous point. The only poisonous point is that the author is afraid that the update will be too slow. No one in the production team can rest like you. Let me calculate this for you, author. You write one word per second. One hour is 3,600 words. There are 24 hours in a day. You can eat for 6 hours, take a bath for two hours to give you enough ideas, give you another hour, and give you two hours to go out and play in the remaining 14 hours (readers are still very interesting). In this way, you can write 36,000 words in a day, which is almost 3,000 words for one chapter, which is almost 12 chapters.

The type is okay. Brother Long and a young guy appear in it. There are quite a lot of descriptions of the old man. The details can be more rigorous and not scary. The dungeon ghost in it has emotions, can resolve hatred, and exchange hearts for hearts. The young guy has the illusion of a deputy male protagonist. If the novel is replaced by a horror recovery or a strange dungeon, it will look like the male protagonist. This novel is a bit like making the game similar to a novel. The article is a bit short. I am very curious about the follow-up of Brother Long. The author is too short and not enough to read.

There are ghosts among the blue bricks and black tiles, and a solitary lamp sways the obsession of the past life. Players shuttle between carved window lattice and faded charms, and every step they take is stepping into the puzzle of centuries-old grievances. Chinese-style horror is not only a visual shock, but also a trembling memory in the cultural blood.

The good news is that the plot is coherent, the plot is very compact, there are no superficial parts, and it is finished. Bad News ended so suddenly, it felt like I had played a very fun demo but the official version was far away.

It's quite interesting, the pace is very fast and there is no ink, but there are only about 50 chapters, which is too few [shocked] It was a bit unpalatable at the end, it felt a bit ink-stained, and then I felt that the game was a bit uninteresting.

It's good. It doesn't describe the players as idiots who only exclaim and sigh. Instead, it has its own character traits and highlight moments. Overall, it's a good novel. Good luck to the author.

The plot is okay, it's pretty good to watch, it's a game but it can be said to be made by the system. The best thing is that the world is holographic and it's a very real experience. Hahaha, the male protagonist doesn't have many roles, and the less he plays towards the end. The later copies can be said that the male protagonist is missing, and the ending is a bit rushed. The foreshadowing in the front is about a ghost market, but it only came out twice. I don't know if there will be a second part. It's very interesting but there are too few.

It's a pretty good book. The main plot is cliché but the writing makes up for it. The plot has ups and downs, but the only flaw is that some of the foreshadowing is ended without recycling. It can be seen that the author has a certain understanding of horror folklore stories, and has a strong imagination. The narrative content is novel enough, and various Chinese horror elements are mixed together. Unfortunately, it is a bit short. Three hundred thousand words, friends who want to pass the time and read books can try [Blowing Kiss]

The whole book is really good to read, but the ending is too hasty. I didn't read enough😋 Each character has his own plot, and there are no common horror writing routines. Although the title of the book is about the feeling of a time traveler making a horror story, the whole book is a group portrait. Highly recommended! Finally, I beg the author to publish the next book as soon as possible

It looks good, it doesn't feel scary, but it feels very immersive. The author will update it quickly. It's not enough.

It's okay, but a bit scary. By scary, I mean it's not a cliche novel. It's short, refreshing, and good-looking. Everyone who appears in the book also has their own role, but the author remembers the next one and can't leave a half-ending... (If it comes out, I'll give it five stars directly. Currently, it's four stars for encouragement [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [giving heart])

After reading it for so long, I feel that the author is not writing a game but a real world where ghosts are rampant [face covering]. The protagonist is the big boss behind the scenes, and Lu is the protagonist. But I really enjoyed watching it. The plot in the game is so interesting. (Unfortunately, I heard about eunuchs) It's really good-looking. The writing has some minor flaws but it doesn't have much impact. It has the flavor of a group portrait [because the protagonist doesn't exist at all [face covering] The existence of the protagonist may just be a guide], each has its own highlights, and every supporting role has flesh and blood (the old rule is that those who abandon the plot will be counted from three stars down)

The writing is quite good, in Chinese horror style, from small games to online games, the overall connection is very good, and the writing is compact. But! ! When it's time to go to the next copy, it's over! Why did the late emperor collapse in the middle of his career before he started his business? ! ! !

It is very beautiful. Every story described in it is very innovative and has a strong sense of substitution. It has some novel story themes and its content structure can also be strung together. If it can be written further and strung together into a huge story, the content structure will be better. I look forward to the author's follow-up and the next one. I hope there will be a next one. The author's writing is very good. I have read so many such online horror stories. This is my favorite novel in this genre by the author. It is really very good-looking. Every story is very novel. I recommend everyone to read it. [Shy][Shy][Shy] The author must not give up on this book. Make more extras or start a second book. I will always follow you [Shy][Shy][Shy]

It felt pretty good, and most of what I wrote was about things in the dungeon, but it ended very suddenly, and it was only a big dungeon, so I didn't read enough. It feels like the protagonists are not the creators, but the ones who get through the levels. The players cooperate well, the plot is not sluggish, the characters are well created, and the plot is compact.

It's beautiful. The more I watch it, the more I'm fascinated. Every copy is connected and the characters are well created. However, it ended suddenly and it's not enough to watch. Is there a second part for the author? I'm very curious about the next copy.

This book has a great world view. I have rarely read novels that moved me so much. I have read too many cookie-cutter novels. This one is quite unique and highly recommended.