Quick Travel: the Male Protagonist Is Snatched Away by a Vicious Female Supporting Character Again

It's okay, the writing is pretty fluent, and the early plot is smooth, just to create a feeling that she needs to have something with the male protagonist because of the strategy goal. In fact, the female protagonist has no feelings for the male protagonist, and she only does these things to fulfill the original protagonist's wishes. Everyone's reaction is very real, and it fits the psychology of all walks of life. I have only read the first world. In the later period, the writing power is a bit lacking, and everything seems rushed. It is also a common problem with short stories. The writing style is very slow in the early stage, but in the later stage, the change of the male protagonist is a bit abrupt, and the breakup with the ex-girlfriend is also hasty and decisive. It is not well described, but it is understandable if it is the first world. Many authors use the first world to practice and adapt. It's my habit to give it a five-point rating. I like the writing style. I look forward to the author writing more works. I hope it will get better and better. The heroine's personality is quite good. She is indeed noble and cool. She has a guiding feeling. People will like her without having to do anything. The early stage shaping is okay, but the later stage is a bit messy and rough. I feel that the people around me are the same as the male lead. I don't have friendship or lovers. I'm satisfied. Whether it's identifying the heroine or identifying the heroine, I need to spend more time writing this aspect of the plot, otherwise it will feel wrong. Generally speaking, the things I wanted to create in the early stage of the first world were broken down in the later stage, resulting in a low evaluation. I hope that subsequent worlds will pay more attention to this aspect of the details. I still like the tone of this book.

Ah, I didn't expect the trend in the comment area. It turns out that everyone doesn't like this. I quite like the heroine's character. In many seduction articles, I don't like the kind of seduction in which the heroine is too pushy and licking. However, it is true that the plot after the male protagonist confirms his feelings is a bit short, and it is a bit too high for the male protagonist. I didn't expect that after seducing the male protagonist, she really wants to have sex with him. According to the female protagonist's personality, it shouldn't be.

It's good-looking. It's different from the capture stories I've read before. In this story, the heroine lets things take their own course, and then the target male protagonist is attracted to the heroine as she is. She doesn't feel wronged or has to change her personality in order to complete the task. It's quite interesting to watch. Moreover, the second world starts off by being indifferent to the heroine and then becomes more arrogant and harsh in her goals. In the end, she doesn't succeed in getting the upper hand. I really like it. I like it. The one who is famous is the puppy-shaped male protagonist's cousin who goes well with everything [sending my heart]

It's not bad, but the men who want to capture every world are so good at pretending. I hope the author can torture them a little more harshly. There are two guys in the online dating world that are so funny. But it seems that some men are unclean.

Yes, the heroine in the first world is the eldest lady, which fits the character, but the second heroine still has the same bland look and is tired of it. But the best thing about the second world is that the heroine did not marry the original hero, but married his cousin, allowing the original hero to work tirelessly as a mistress. What I like most about this book is that although it is a guide book, the heroine has no sense of humility and is always self-centered. Just like in the first world, the hero does not like the smell of cigarettes, but the heroine will not quit smoking for him. It's just that this novel is not sweet and the writing is a bit bland, so I don't like reading it.

Five-star praise is given to the hard-working author Although it is also a quick travel guide But the heroine is not forced to be with the hero I guess the male protagonist in the first world is happier. He is the only one who succeeded [face covering] The heroine disdains lying But it's not like he's stupid and says everything. Half true and half hidden [face covering] Maybe because she is a fox She values fidelity more than chastity So the last male protagonist was really miserable [face covering] I was dumped because I tried to get married in the middle. Finally reborn various behaviors The heroine guessed the cause and effect again [face covering] Chose his brother again [face covering]

Frivolous banter, easily pierced - the disguise of calm The bewitching breath wraps around the ears - eroding the mind Harsh whispers, wanton teasing - secret throbs The ambiguous pull, the deeper sinking step by step - the sober sinking

I think overall it's pretty good. It would be nice if the first world had more sweet stories. The second world is very good. It would be nice if the third world didn't accept the boy who had many girlfriends.

I don't know why the rating is so low, I almost missed it! The heroine completely poked me! I like articles like this! Although she is the single female protagonist in the guide, she never wrongs herself. Who said that the guide must be with the male protagonist! So cool!

I can't say what's wrong with it, but I always feel like I'm a bit sadistic about a girl. It's a pity to throw it away if it's tasteless. I finally understand why I feel a little bit sadistic about female characters. Sometimes when others are malicious, the heroine will not fight back in time, or sometimes she feels there is no need to get involved with the female supporting characters but chooses to indulge. The second world was quite unsatisfying in the early stages, but it got better later on. It was okay, and I felt that the writing was improved compared to the first world. I can't stand it. I can't understand the heroine of the online dating world being with a dirty man. I'm so sick of it.

It's okay. The world of online dating is the most interesting. There's more of a feeling of ambiguity and pulling. The other worlds are almost boring [making faces]

The mature female protagonist is a relatively new character. Her strategy is based on the perspective of human nature, coupled with her unique personal temperament, which is light and energetic. Those male protagonists have gone from being prejudiced at the beginning to begging for the table later, and there are also male protagonists who have succeeded in taking the role.

The writing is very good. The heroine is a vixen and has a charming physique. Everyone likes the heroine. She is as simple as eating and drinking. She is not stiff and rigid. Her attitude towards men is also very interesting. She is very frank and never lies. She is very artful with language [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It's so good. I like the heroine very much. The plot is very smooth and natural [like] much better than similar novels [facepalm]

I don't know why this book is rated so low, it should be a 9. The author's emotional handling is very delicate, and the heroine handles the whole process with ease. It's really enjoyable to read. It's a guide, but it's not the kind of damn male-loving literature that makes the heroine a dog licker. The only shortcoming of my five-star review is that it's too short [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] It's not enough.

Not bad, the heroine is really free and easy, she is a queen of the sea, she doesn't bother to plot against others, and she never maliciously competes with women. There is no fixed male protagonist, and the male protagonist falls in love with her willingly. She is really suitable for starting a harem!!!

Very interesting, the plot is very interesting

It's beautiful, but it's too short [almost crying]

No ups and downs, dry I was wrong. After listening to the comments, I went to watch The World of Online Dating. This world is beautiful. The other worlds are indeed a bit boring. Come on.

It's very good. The heroine is not wronged and takes revenge on the spot if she has any grudges [Like] [Like]

It's so good that I finished reading it in one sitting and am waiting for updates! The heroine is very charming!

Finished reading it in one sitting! So pretty! ! ! It's a pity that it seems to be over [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

The first world looks good, I like bad women

It didn't end too quickly, I still want to see Jiang Zhengfeng get jealous [face-covering][face-covering][face-covering]

It's pretty good, but the ending is a little too quick.

I quite liked it, but it ended too quickly

I really beg you, the writing is so beautiful, do you know how uncomfortable it is for me to watch it from early morning to six in the morning? [Shocked]

It's very nice, but the rating may have been lowered maliciously.

This book is really different. The protagonist will not "flatter" to please the target, but just be himself, and then others will be attracted by the charm of the protagonist and surround him.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. I like it. Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. I like it.