The Girl, the Spider and the Spear

The first few dozen chapters can only be said to be pretty good. It gets better and better from behind. The character of the protagonist was also quickly established. The story is not the kind of travelogue, but the kind that has a grand narrative. There is currently no male protagonist, I hope there won't be one in the future.

I read it all night. The main characters have distinct and likable personalities, and the protagonist is very cute. The story is also well organized, with several clues developing simultaneously, but it is not confusing to read. The most important thing is that although there are constant twists and turns, they all have a good ending. It is not burdensome to read. I hope the author did not lie to me.

Overall, Xihuanfeng is well written. However, some of the plots are a bit stiff and deliberate, and the plot progresses too fast. You can consider adding plots to supplement the content of the novel. Currently, I still rely too much on the main plot. You can add appropriate branch plots, such as teaching the children of the territory to learn magic in the recent chapters. If the author has time, he can draw a map to supplement the world view. The protagonist's love line has not yet been determined. Is the protagonist Lily? Who will she be with? My dear little roommate Corvina, the lovely princess Dalia, or the spider princess? Looking forward to this kind of plot

Single or married?

Become a god. Classic Western fantasy, with a reasonable plot and good attention to detail. Deep feelings. The author's writing style is very good, and he can establish a basically complete character image with just a few pictures. That group portrait style. Absolutely

A novel with a pure Western fantasy background that is rare in Tomato nowadays. It can be seen that the author did not use AI to write the article. It is already rare in the Tomato Internet literary world where AI is rampant. But there are still some problems. For example, some plot connections in the early stage are stiff and the writing style is sometimes a little immature. However, the author has also made obvious progress during the writing process. For example, the part about Ning's mother is a satisfying storyline. Finally, I wish the author to work hard and write more wonderful stories [top post]

It has a very special setting and the plot is very smooth and attractive. The heroine is a super big spider and is very cute😻

I would like to know what the devil spider looks like. Is it an ordinary spider? How do you use it as a weapon?

Come on! This article clearly shows the author's intentions. It is much better than those articles that are written in a rambling manner and mixed with AI assistance for the sake of traffic. It is a rare piece of clear flow ~ Come on, author!

The best Western fantasy novel I have ever read. It met all my expectations. The plot is fascinating and the characters are well described. It makes people look forward to the subsequent plots. The only flaw is that sometimes the plot connection is very stiff, but it's not a big problem. Also, I want to know who the heroine's CP is. I like both Princess and Myrtle [Like]

It looks good, the battles are well written, and the plot transitions are very natural. [Like][Like][Like]

Well, I feel that the writing is not very clear sometimes, but it has a nice feeling. It seems that it is not a problem in Tomato. The plot is quite attractive. I think this, Spider-Man should be similar to the human form, more inclined to the human form, and not the kind lying on the ground. The main character's IQ is online and most of the supporting characters are not stupid. There is nothing poisonous at the moment. You can read it. When there are more chapters, I will add a follow-up review [Love]

It's very interesting, but the introduction and cover are too plain and unattractive. The content is very classic Western fantasy (mixed with a little bit of Japanese style), and the rhythm is also good.

Full marks, a touching adventure novel. Ignis the Spider is both handsome and cute!

I feed myself off books [crying] A very slow-burning book, the writing is smooth and logical. In my opinion, it is an excellent light novel. I hope the author can stick to it.

The author's writing is really great [shy][shy][shy]. The outline of another world simply jumps out on the page through his capable writing. The cuteness of the protagonist, the arrogance of spears and arrows, and the image of the elf girl are all portrayed very well. I really hope everyone will read it, it is a fine level!

It's a shame that no one reads such a beautiful book.

I don't know if I'm single or married, I hope I'm single Chapter 60 Two sensitive points in just one hundred words [face covering]

I like it, it's very good [blowing kiss] but I'm still a little confused now

Yes, at least among the Tomato fantasy books I've read, it's pretty good, but no one reads it.

It's so good-looking. Why doesn't anyone watch it? The plot is well developed, and the heroine's baby is also very powerful and strong. But um... I really can't imagine the appearance of the spider demon. I feel that the description of the appearance is not very detailed. Maybe my imagination is limited. I hope the author can explain it [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

A very exciting coming-of-age western fantasy novel. So far, I don't see any particularly big flaws. It's pretty good for people to read it. It's in Tomato. I hate serialization😭😭😭

It's still a Western fantasy

The plot is well written and the characters are well described.

It's getting more and more exciting, author, come on

So awesome, I couldn't help but watch it in the middle of the night

I have to say that the author's writing skills are quite profound and impressive.

Nice! A Western fantasy novel with an interesting setting. [Sending Hearts] Personal feeling score is at least 9.0.

The writing is very good, the relationship between the characters is clear, and there are no poisonous points so far ~

It's a very interesting book. It's probably a single. It might be a bit boring in the early stages. I still want to see the protagonist transform into a human form more often.