The Girl, the Spider, and the Spear

The first few dozen chapters can only be said to be pretty good. It gets better and better from behind. The character of the protagonist was also quickly established. The story is not the kind of travelogue, but the kind that has a grand narrative. There is currently no male protagonist, I hope there won't be one in the future.

It's been a long time since I paid my respects to the chef — "Ratatouille" To be honest, I was really surprised to see such a pure Western fantasy novel in Tomato. I was even more surprised to see real paladins and scholars in this book. (The paladin prayer in this book is really satisfying, comparable to the orthodoxy of a senior dnd) It is difficult to create a lovable character, but it is even harder to create a group of lovable characters. However, the author has created a group of characters that moved me, and I can only admire them. Not to mention that the author has made the protagonist of the spider demon so cute. She is truly the best among all the women who are outsiders. She is definitely not to be missed! ❤️

Overall, Xihuanfeng is well written. However, some plots are a bit stiff and deliberate, and the plot progresses too fast. You can consider adding plots to supplement the content of the novel. Currently, I still rely too much on the main plot. You can add appropriate branch plots, such as teaching the children of the territory to learn magic in the recent chapters. If the author has time, he can draw a map to supplement the world view. The protagonist's love line has not yet been determined. Is the protagonist Lily? Who will she be with? My dear little roommate Corvina, the lovely princess Dalia, or the spider princess? Looking forward to this kind of plot

I read it all night. The main characters have distinct and likable personalities, and the protagonist is very cute. The story is also well organized, with several clues developing simultaneously, but it is not confusing to read. The most important thing is that although there are constant twists and turns, they all have a good ending. It is not burdensome to read. I hope the author did not lie to me.

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The best Western fantasy novel I have ever read. It met all my expectations. The plot is fascinating and the characters are well described. It makes people look forward to the subsequent plots. The only flaw is that sometimes the plot connection is very stiff, but it's not a big problem. Also, I want to know who the heroine's CP is. I like both Princess and Myrtle 👍

If I were to make a list of Western fantasy novels on Tomato, this book would undoubtedly be in the top three. It wins because of its first-class characterization. Even though I haven't read this book for quite some time, I still remember those supporting characters with distinctive personalities. This may be the author's strength, but starting from more than 300 chapters, the development of the main plot is extremely slow, and instead begins to depict a large number of plots of supporting characters. At this time, I was a little tired of reading carefully. A large number of supporting character names poured out, but there were not many memory points. So much so that now whenever a name I don't recognize appears, I will immediately skip the plot. What's very funny is that even if I skip the plot so frequently, I will not be unable to understand the main plot development, because the two plots are almost parallel. This review is a bit off-putting, but I still strongly recommend everyone to read this book. I believe in the principle that flaws cannot be concealed, and I also hope that the author can change the rhythm of the narrative.

Become a god. Classic Western fantasy, with a reasonable plot and good attention to detail. Deep feelings. The author's writing style is very good, and he can establish a basically complete character image with just a few pictures. That group portrait style. Absolutely

A novel with a pure Western fantasy background that is rare in Tomato nowadays. It can be seen that the author did not use AI to write the article. It is already rare in the Tomato Internet literary world where AI is rampant. But there are still some problems. For example, some plot connections in the early stage are stiff and the writing style is sometimes a little immature. However, the author has also made obvious progress during the writing process. For example, the part about Ning's mother is a satisfying storyline. Finally, I wish the author to work hard and write more wonderful stories [top post]

It has a very special setting and the plot is very smooth and attractive. The heroine is a super big spider and is very cute😻