(I am writing with my heart, and I will tell you the poisonous points directly, and I am not polite)
The single heroine of the Black Tower, the five heroes on the clouds, protecting the shortcomings, the white-haired little fox, the whole article is about breaking the knife, invincible from the second week, but the article starts from the second week
Not too mainline
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My name is Bai Ran. After I traveled through time, the system turned me into a little shota white-furred fox. What else did he say: "Oh! I turned you into this because you like this look the most!"
Huh, I don't like this look
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Xing: "General, you seem to be old friends with Bai Ran? Can you tell me his story?"
Jing Yuan: "... You can call him no matter what happens in the future."
Xing: "Ah? Is he so omnipotent?"
Jing Yuan: "... I don't know"
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System: "This is Weng's plot... Hey, don't cut them all off!"
Bai Ran: "Only one of us can live today, and I will never die."
Laigushi: "... It was all done by Bodhisattva and Nanook."
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Xing: "Ms. Heita, what is the name of the white fox you carry with you every day?"
Heita: "Bai Ran."
Xing: "Huh? But isn't there a Bai Ran on the train?"
Black Tower: "Yes✓."
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Reader comments
From my own point of view, as a novel, I don't have a high-level narrative, a wonderful plot, or even a complete outline, which can be said to be very unsatisfactory. However, such a novel now has dozens of friends urging for updates every day, which I didn't expect. So in order to make the characters in my mind and writing more vivid, I began to spend a lot of time every day thinking about what a virtual character would do in life. At the same time, I also tried to make the plot of the story more vivid and distinctive, instead of blindly following the plot in the game.
However, since this is my first time writing a book, my Chinese language skills are not particularly good, so if you have any questions, please point them out and I will correct them bit by bit! !
To be honest, I was really happy when I found out that I wasn't the only one reading this book, so thank you all for reading! !
A pretty good book
Can you read this book? What I said here is that region restrictions prevent reading.
Good to see it!
The author's writing is very good.
Come on, get ready to watch it again
Looks like he's having fun
Come on, the author who wrote about the collapse of iron, keep writing for the sake of readers.
From my own point of view, as a novel, I don't have a high-level narrative, a wonderful plot, or even a complete outline, which can be said to be very unsatisfactory. However, such a novel now has dozens of friends urging for updates every day, which I didn't expect. So in order to make the characters in my mind and writing more vivid, I began to spend a lot of time every day thinking about what a virtual character would do in life. At the same time, I also tried to make the plot of the story more vivid and distinctive, instead of blindly following the plot in the game. However, since this is my first time writing a book, my Chinese language skills are not particularly good, so if you have any questions, please point them out and I will correct them bit by bit! ! To be honest, I was really happy when I found out that I wasn't the only one reading this book, so thank you all for reading! !
A pretty good book
Can you read this book? What I said here is that region restrictions prevent reading. Good to see it!
The author's writing is very good.
Come on, get ready to watch it again
Looks like he's having fun
Come on, the author who wrote about the collapse of iron, keep writing for the sake of readers.