Raising a Little Flame in the House of Stealing Pens

It's super good-looking, the writing is fluent, and the protagonist is not brainless. The plot has twists and turns, and the relationship between Blind and Blind is really well written. It uses each memory loss to gradually change the relationship. It's very natural. The pull between the two is very delicious and has sexual tension. The only thing that surprised me is that Brother Zhang actually likes the protagonist. Super delicious. There was a vague speculation in the front, but they are brothers, so I didn't think too much about the extra story. It's really delicious and orthopedic. I ate it up! ! Xiaohua also felt that she was very restrained and didn't cross the line at all. However, the ending felt a bit rushed. The protagonist's life experience was not explained clearly and there was only a general description. I thought the author would slowly describe it in detail. The ending was a bit sudden and I was not happy [crying][crying][crying] I don't know why the article is so cool. I didn't rate it at first. I just wanted to give it a try. The result was really surprising. It can be said that it is one of the top tomb robbing articles I have read.

It's a really good novel, but I don't know why not many people have read it. First of all, the characters are really vivid. The most important thing about fan fiction is the OOC issue. The teacher writes it very well. The characters are natural and vivid, and they are not embarrassing at all. Moreover, the image of Xiao Huo is completely based on my XP. She has super strong martial arts and is a great beauty. I love and respect her first.

It's really beautiful! The author's writing is also superb! Moreover, the relationship between Blind Man and Xiao Huo Miao was also written very naturally! The images of Xiaohua and Xiaoge are also okay, not serious OOC, just like leopard and leopard cats, they really make people feel safe! It's just that Wu Xie is written as the affectionate second male lead. This is a bit unacceptable. The only shortcoming may be the ending. Such a beautiful article, I really hope there will be a second lead!

Super pretty! ! ! There is an interaction between fire and blindness, and there is an original tomb robbing operation. It doesn't feel like reading the book again. The tasks are well shaped and the writing is good! For the appetite! ! ! Moreover, the author captured the emotions in the early stage🔥 so realistically that I felt sour when watching it, but it became sweet later on! I like it so much 😍

It's great to watch, I really like the interaction between Xiao Huo Miao and Hei Ye! !

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Super beautiful, the writing is natural and not awkward, a very good original character fanfic

The plot design, atmosphere, and character scenes are all very delicately drawn. I followed the author's last book. It's a pity that this one is 1v1, but the reputation is here. It's really good! It's not a loss if you invest in shares! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Why does such a good book have so few reviews? ! Almost missed it!

Come on, come on＾0＾~I like it so much (ღ˘⌣˘ღ) [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

It's very beautiful, and the emotional descriptions are very tense (≧ｗ≦)! The writing is good, the characters are not OOC, and the emotional descriptions are delicate. The Zhang family's gift of heaven makes the early fiery black emotions change so smoothly.

The fight scene is wonderful, the emotional changes between the two people are very delicate, it's a super nice book, both of them are sweet (｡>∀<｡)

The writing is great. Keep up the good work and update it soon. I really can't wait to read [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

Super pretty, the little flames are so beautiful The love between Blind Blind and Xiao Huomiao is like a state banquet, so delicious😋

Very nice. It's not divided yet

Good looking 😄, Xiao Huo Miao and others are very good

It's so beautiful. It turns out to be 1V1. I thought it was 1V2. Hehehe, madam, I will follow you forever^*^

It's very interesting to watch, and the scenes and situations are well described. I like Black Fire's cuteness, and Black Blind Man also fits the original work.

Beautiful, incomparably beautiful

Wow, little flame is so cute

It's so sweet. I love you, author. You are simply my savior. My bookshelf has been empty for I don't know how long, but he has finally left a place for you. Author

The author's writing style is really attractive.

It's so beautiful but I haven't seen many comments [face covering]

So pretty. Super sweet, love it! Like like

Love it, love it, it looks really good and I like it very much! Gray hair is really good for my XP

Good-looking, super super, super invincible, good-looking

It's super beautiful, the author's writing is good, the characters are not OOC at the moment, and the updates are very fast [laughs] [like]

Very beautiful, well described and very delicate