Magical Girl, but Jetton Girl

Mouth melon! It's so exciting! I finally saw a crying and fussy protagonist who didn't break down because of time travel. Although losing the dragon is indeed a very painful feeling, it's not a loss if you can exchange Baron Nash for a share of such power [laughter]

It's good-looking, unlike other movies where you'll have to live or die if you change your personality. I don't dislike the protagonist's personality.

Emmm... Girlton, I like it very much (The following comments are only personal opinions. Personal preferences are inevitably different from other people's preferences. Please forgive me if there is any offense. They do not involve malicious comments. They only represent personal opinions. If you don't like them, don't criticize them... In addition, the author loves to generate electricity and respects the fruits of the author's labor. The following comments are only personal feelings. Please forgive me...) From the current point of view, except for some elements, similar to [Jetton Girl], [Magical Girl] and [Special Photography], this book does not seem to have any better features... Advantages: People who watch special photography may like it more. The protagonist's personality can be somewhat more lively and suitable for newcomers to appreciate. Improvement: emmm... I respect the personality of each character in terms of the protagonist's personality, but it was indeed a bit impatient when I read it. It did not reflect the oppressive feeling of the space dinosaur (or Jayton in Monster Girl)... There are many things that can be avoided but cause trouble. I suggest the author make a contrasting image of Jayton who looks cold and oppressive on the surface but is actually cute on the inside? (I was really trained by the mouthless widow...) In addition, the plot is a bit awkward... I suggest you enrich the details and foreshadow it a few times. Come on, let's do it Die [laughing evilly] [Like]

It's still very interesting to watch, but the combat power setting is too high at the beginning, but let me tell you, the imagination and detailed description are still good, ah, at least I can't do it, hahaha, generally speaking, it is not a big problem. The character of the protagonist is weak and timid. It is better to give a weakened version of Jetton at the beginning, and then later she can become a complete Jetton, or in a rage state, it can still be seen. Well, but if the protagonist's gender A slightly stiffer grid would be better. The main reason is that the range of strength is too large. It feels to me like a tank. It is the kind of tank driven by well-trained soldiers who have been on the battlefield. I would worry about an ancient general 100 meters away. The protagonist is the kind of person who would worry about the ancient general killing himself, but normal people would worry about the ancient general taking the lead and being punished by his superiors. The soldiers are equal to the protagonist, and the ancient general is equal to the clone and the superior is equal to the system.

I feel that the identity of the protagonist is exposed, and the problem is not big. Chiton Girl comes from another world and just settles in the world of magical girls. If anyone wants to harm the protagonist, please help yourself with the big fireball [laughing]

The writing is not very good, but it is still readable. There are no big problems. Moreover, there are too few articles about Jeton Niang, so I give it five stars.

Actually, there's nothing wrong with it. It's just the fake clone. If you shoot it to death from the beginning, it won't be that big of a deal.

The characters are distinct, the writing is good, and the plot is okay, but it's a bit too short [smile]

One piece a day is a good snack type [laughing]

A very exquisite novella, I hope the author will continue writing

It really feels like AI is used, because many AI articles have the characteristic of describing a place repeated many times, and they appear continuously.

I feel like I have potential, go for it

Hey hey hey, Jetton girl

[Shy] What a good mother! 😋😋

So far it looks pretty good.

That's right, it looks good

Looks great, author, cheers

It's good, but the logic of the main character's actions is a bit unclear, and not much else.

It's more in line with my taste, but a little short.

Not bad, brother, brother, I love you

A good book, read it all

Really nice to look at. Take the Ultraman part, it was so late when it came, it was so funny. If I meet Hyperjackton, I guess Ultraman will be paralyzed.

It's good-looking. Although the main character has changed to a woman, she still thinks like a man. It's good-looking. If you like it, watch it more.

Hehehehe... Good... Looks good... Hehehehe... I want to see more... Hehe...