Dropped. Writing whatever.
#Transformation #MultipleFemaleLeads #Reincarnation #System #Combat #SchoolLife #Romance#
#OlderSisterType #Loli #Hero #SciFi #Interstellar #EnsembleCast #Healing #Angst
#GenderSwap #TransformationYuriStory #CostSystem #ConceptualCombat
[Transmigrate to Another World, Draw My Sword and Transform into a Beautiful Girl]
[But every transformation is completely random in form...]
Today I'm a sword-wielding heroine, tomorrow a cool, elegant big sister with a sniper rifle, and the day after that I might be a short-tempered little girl carrying a cannon.
And me, a former corporate drone who has spent eighteen years in this world since being born into it, only want to protect the girls around me and let them live in peace.
Until the day my "Creator" appeared:
"You are my most perfect creation, but also the greatest variable."
"Every time you transform, you consume your 'cost of existence.'"
I looked at the glowing scars beginning to appear on my body. Each one recorded:
[Fought to protect Xibai: Mark of Courage]
[Wounded while saving Linyin: Emblem of Protection]
[Drew my sword for a stranger's child: Mark of Innocence]
They asked me, "Why would you go to such lengths for us?"
I reached down with my right hand and gripped the hilt, feeling a new form awaken within me:
"Because in this life, I don't want to see anyone die in front of me ever again."
"Even if the price is... gradually forgetting that I used to be a man."
★Multiple female leads + transformation battles + growth through reincarnation + warm redemption★
As far as the three golden chapters are concerned, I don't have much desire to read them. It feels like the world view the author wants to write about is huge and there are many things, but there are too many things crammed in. The last noun comes out without explaining what it is, and the next noun comes out right after it. It gives me the feeling that it is full of riddles and very confusing. The characters are not very distinctive. I have no impression of the three little ones. All three have the same sense of reason. The look and feel is too repetitive. The first three chapters just feel like the Riddler. There is also the one who suddenly added small parentheses to add a supplement and it felt weird. It gave me a mysterious feeling at first, and I couldn't understand it but it felt so powerful. But then the parentheses were added to add (now it's her). It was too weird. It doesn't matter if I don't add this supplement. Moreover, the amount of text in the first three chapters is much larger than the normal three chapters. As a result, there are so many chapters. Almost two and a half chapters are devoted to a lot of riddle settings. It was not until the last point of the third chapter that the setting of the male protagonist drawing a sword and transforming was introduced. In fact, I mainly came here for this setting, and I didn't understand it. It just made me feel confused when I saw this. It made me think about what I had written before. I can only say that I have basically forgotten it. I feel The overall correlation seems to be not big, what time, offset, a lot of data, I can understand a story that wants Xibai to become a real person, then chatter, and then draw a sword. It feels like there are too many irrelevant things. Maybe it is foreshadowing by the author or something. Maybe these data riddles will be useful, but I can't understand it. As the golden three chapters, these things can't make me interested in reading. I really like this setting of drawing a sword and transforming. The introduction seems to be the kind of royal blood of love and justice. But before I saw the blood, the cold riddle made me slap on the ground. Of course, I am just an ordinary reader, and I have only read the first three chapters. The above remarks are only my personal feelings and do not represent other people's opinions. I don't know whether the following chapters will be better, but the first three chapters did not attract me to read further. I wish the author can write better and better in the following chapters. After all, this setting is quite good.