I Am Here*******

@Taoyixian Can you arrange more natural sections? It looks so uncomfortable [covers face]

The new book hopes for your support Peng Yuyan

I cried after falling in love with the other person

After reading it, I feel it's okay. Not bad.

It's considered good in Dou Po fan fiction.

It's very good. The content is quite acceptable. However, practicing in the academy is a bit monotonous. You have to fight and then practice. After practice, you have to fight and practice again. After that, it's still okay.

The plot is clear, I hope it will continue to be maintained, highly recommended

It's pretty, very good, keep up the good work

It's pretty, almost, very pretty. The updates are too slow. Hurry up and get the Han Yue sisters.

Doesn't the protagonist have fire and wind attributes? Doesn't the alchemist need fire and wood attributes? How can I practice medicine?

The logic is clear and creative. You can continue to dig deeper. You can add some different plot points to avoid disputes with BQ, and you can also stop competing with Xiao Yan for opportunities.