Luo Xiao**********

It's very interesting, keep up the good work, the author is great💪 keep up the good work! (ง•̀_•́)งBut is this CP-free? I hope the heroine will have a sweet love [learned] What do you think of the little ancestor? [Sending Hearts]

The author's writing style is very good, suitable for reading when you are not impetuous or anxious. The first few pictures of Li Xin's death and organ donation are a bit sad. Maybe it's because I have strong empathy? I just cried, hahaha. I have read Chapter 42 so far. I felt very comfortable reading it. I felt very happy reading the chapter where Li Xin bought a house in the Northeast (off-topic, Li Xin's body that was modified by the system is amazing, I really want to have it). A plain sense of happiness, campus violation I read some comments at the time of the case, and I saw some Baozi saying that he (she) felt a little uncomfortable looking at those pictures. I want to say that those pictures were originally about depicting evil, and kind people would be a little repulsive, so you may not feel comfortable watching them. I wish the author to write better.

The author's words... Are very warm and delicate, with a touch of happiness. When you read them, you feel like you are being wrapped up. There is an indescribable feeling when reading the author's words. Perhaps it can also be said to be artistic conception. It is as if every frame of the picture has been carefully and delicately drawn by the artist. The editor has carefully screened the paintings carefully drawn by the artist and presented them perfectly. It is very beautiful. However, forget it just for the sake of mindless and cool articles, but you can also try this style of painting, which is a very novel experience. PS: The author said that there are rarely slap-in-the-face plots Will there be a slap in the face? ! The author is very fond of it There is a surprise at the opening~ (Guide → first few chapters of the article) Some delicious knives~

The characters, writing, plot logic are all online, and the characters are not OOC at all! In the early stage, it was basically daily life, and then it slowly started to enter the main line, but it seems that the shaping of the heroine is more specific and detailed. It's rare to see Luo Xiaohei's fanfics on Tomato that are good in all aspects. Come on! Hope to keep updating until the end!

I feel very good. The writing is coherent. The system is very considerate. The heroine's baby is also very cute and real. It's not the feeling of being directly ecstatic by the system, but the feeling of exploring step by step. It's very comfortable.

Super pretty! It's a very heart-warming daily article. So far, it has basically solved the regrets of the first season of the big movie! ! ! Super looking forward to future developments! Come on, keep updating [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The moment I opened this book, I was firmly attracted by its unique text texture and rich content core. After reading it, I felt hearty and unfulfilled. It is a well-deserved treasure. The author uses delicate and powerful writing to spread out the story/viewpoint in clear layers. There are vivid details and deep thinking and empathy between the lines, making every reading an immersive spiritual experience. Whether it is the layout of the plot, the creation of the characters, or the expression of the core theme, they are all done with utmost care, without any perfunctory or procrastination. After closing the page, those touching moments and unique insights are still echoing in the mind, which not only brings the pleasure of reading, but also subtly enhances one's cognition and touches one's heart. This is a book worth reading again and again and cherishing with all your heart. I sincerely recommend it to everyone who loves reading. I believe you will be deeply moved by it like me! (Please update soon)

It's so good, I cried when I watched the first two pages, as someone who is used to reading sadistic stories. The sense of immersion in the first two chapters is really strong, especially in the third chapter, after the heroine is reborn, it really makes people feel as if we are seeing the world she lives in through the heroine. The author's writing style is very delicate, and the article also gives people a very gentle feeling, which makes people very comfortable. Xiaohei and Fengxi also gained a new way of life and returned to their homes. [Send heart][Send heart]

Although the plot about Luo Xiaohei was not written in the first few chapters, it made me feel that the heroine is a person worthy of being favored by God, which makes the character more three-dimensional and perfect. It looks very good now. Please stop updating. The character of the heroine is very good now. Come on! [Blowing kiss] Speaking of which, I kind of want Lu Ye to be the heroine CP (although Lu Ye has not appeared yet), but I also support letting the heroine be beautiful alone (without CP), and I can also put the CP in the extra story (anyway, I really like Baby Lili! [Sending Hearts])

Jump directly to the plot of adopting Xiao Hei. It's very cute. I hope the main text is either free or full.

The writing is smooth and the plot is pretty good. The characters and objects are slightly different from the original work, but overall it's okay. One thing is that most of the chapters describe the protagonist's psychological journey and creative connections in the new world, enriching the heroine's relationship with the system. Most of the chapters are original plots. If you want to see the main plot connection, start from chapter 43.

The heroine's baby is really living a good life! There is no cp in the main text, but there is in the extras. I saw the part of Luo Xiaohei's War Notes 1. Xiaohei will have a perfect childhood. Fengxi was persuaded to give up the plan at the beginning, and there are no scattered spirits (three mountains, a place with family is home), so good! (●´ω｀). O○

It's so well written [like it], it's warm and healing to read. The world built in the novel is like an idealized society, where everything is harmonious and goodwill flows. The heroine is strong, righteous, and principled in her actions, which makes her character shine. After reading the updated part, I felt a soft light shining into my heart, which made me feel soothed and recharged! [Blows a kiss] Come on! [Please update]

I've just read Chapter 31. It's very interesting. I cried when I read the first few chapters, but there are some contradictory words in the back. I don't know if the author didn't do it well or what. Then there is a sense of AI in the back. I feel that the AI ​​should be expanded (if not, I'm wrong orz ○|￣|_ )

There was a serious literary youth problem in the front, but when I saw it became a little more concise in the back, I saw the improvement in writing, which is pretty good. I hope that in the back, I can use more concise language to shape the characters and describe the environment. Come on [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

So gentle! Love this style so much!

It feels like a very ordinary feeling of happiness! It's a direct tie and finally it's the plot point! ! However, the length of the previous trip to Harbin feels a bit redundant. I feel that there is no need to write about the trip in detail (? I can only feel that the heroine is in awe of nature, but it does not allow the heroine to find her own direction!

Super pretty! ! ! ! , Even if I am not a fan, I will still read it! I listen to books, I don't read much, I've been listening to them for a few hours^_^

It smells so good. This book really smells so good. This author is like a god. You can't see your own face when you look in the mirror. The whole plot is super heartwarming, and the story line is also very good. Just watching it makes me feel particularly peaceful.

It's good to watch. The protagonist hasn't read the script, but I can guess a little bit.

I like the style. I can see the author's writing is improving a little bit. I hope there can be more psychological descriptions and less arranged character descriptions. The overall style is very comfortable to read.

It's good to watch, but it's a bit delayed. I still don't know what the heroine's abilities are, but the writing is very good and the subject matter is very novel. Still the above point of view

Please check out this Luo Xiaohei fanfic. The online plot is simply shocking and delicious😋😋Ψ(￣∀￣)Ψ.

The teacher wrote it very well.

The heroine is smart and courageous, calm in situations, insightful, principled and kind.

Beautifully written. I didn't watch Luo Xiaohei before. Now that I see this article, I suddenly want to see Luo Xiaohei. Interesting for sure.

The writing is very good, the text is very beautiful, [full] [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully]

The beginning touched me very much, but the rest of the story is about ordinary life (for the time being), but it's pretty good anyway [Like]

I have read Chapter 55 so far. Overall, the story line is very good, the pace is fast and cheerful, and the writing is excellent. The writing style is very warm and delicate, and it feels really comfortable to read. He seems to have brought out some of the little happiness and luck in our lives. The overall style is not cliché and very logical. It can be regarded as one of the best among Luo Xiaohei fanfics.

It's very beautiful, the writing feels gentle and gentle, and it's very comfortable to read.