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It's Very Popular Recently. There Are Four Major Houses of Hogwarts, so I Want to Read It. Do You Have Any Articles?
It's about Harry Potter. Is there a Tomato author in big letters?
Looking for High-Quality HP (But If You Don't Reach the Level of the Book I Posted, You Will Be Exempted)
I Have Given up Hope on High-Quality HP. Please Slap Me in the Face with a Book.
Hp's Masterpiece Is Coming (Completed)
I want to read a book like "HP and Draco Fall in Love at Hogwarts". I want a Harry Potter fanfic, no matter the style, the main thing is to finish it, finish it, finish it, please
To Be Honest, HP Has No Masterpieces! Most of Them Have Been Read! 😭
I Dare Say HP Is a Masterpiece! ! !
HP, Only the Ancestor or Parent Generation, Not the Descendant Generation (Too Weak)
I'm Going Crazy Without Any HP Parent-Generation Articles❗❗❗
I really want to read the story of the parent generation. Anyone with CP is good. Anyway, let me read it❗❗❗I want to read the story of the parent generation. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Are There Any Sweet Articles About James and Sirius as Long as They Are from Their Parents' Generation?
I want to read a book similar to "The Potter's Fawn". As long as it's a new generation article, it's fine. If you want something sweet like that, thank you ´∀`
I Beg for Help in the HP Novel. the Male Protagonist Is Sirius. the Child Has Nothing to Say About Sirius.
I'm Not Telling You That There's Really Nothing Interesting About Demon Slayer Fanfics.
HP Wants the Male Protagonist to Be Sirius
Sirius was also upset
I Announce That I Have Read All the High-Quality Articles in HP😎
I want to see something similar to "HP: When they blend into their respective fandoms". After four years of reading fan fiction on Tomato, I am already invincible... (At this time, a burst of strong music sounded🔥🔥🔥)
Is There Any Hp/"harry Potter" from Variety Pictures?
HP Fandom Pro Generation! Dear Generation! No Children's Generation or Ancestral Generation!
HP fandom female channel, update frequently, don't care about children's era and ancestral generation
Looking for Sirius Black Cp's Book
I've read a lot of Harry Potter fanfics, some focus on Potter, some focus on Draco, some focus on Theodore, and even those who focus on Theodore ask questions about books that haven't been written about Sirius. Even Regulus has been the male protagonist. Poor Sirius.
HP, the Kind Who Want Fresh Themes (T▽T)
Woohoo, I can read books without HP (╥╥)
Only Sirius Cp's Books Are from Him, Don't Push the Others Randomly
I want to read a book like "HP: Rebirth: I Become a Priest at Hogwarts".
HP Pro Generation, Cp James or Sirius, Remus's! !
I want to read a book similar to "[HP Parent Generation] Predator Strategy Manual". Pure love is invincible! Then don't be a heartthrob, and don't travel from the child era to the parent generation. The protagonist can be male or female.
Please CP Is a Good-Looking HP Text of Sirius! the Writing Is Not Immature!
The writing is smooth and the plot is delicate and not shocking! The heroine can travel through time, change the original plot, and the ending is he! No knife
HP Female Channel Cp Sirius
I Beg You to Be Hp's Descendant.
I'm raising the flag for James and Sirius! ! ! ! Preferably heterosexual





















































































Totally original flavor! It's very interesting. The original female protagonist is very well written and not obtrusive at all. [Blow kiss] But I'm curious that Corian has only been in the female protagonist's world for a year, but it must have been more than ten years in Sirius's world. How to solve this time flow rate?
The writing is really great, and the personal settings of time travel are well added. The intertwining of different timelines and parallel worlds allows this world to solve Voldemort in advance, and no one died. It is very complete. The characters are well chosen. The differences between Sirius and Sirius can be seen, but there are also similarities. Especially the heroine's father, who is not a black and white character and is very complicated. Later, Coris followed Sirius in another world and went to live in the original world (there was a heroine but she died). I felt that this was really well written. The early stage is relatively easy, just taking care of the baby, going to school, and playing games. The middle stage is about dealing with Voldemort, which can be a bit depressing. The later stage is more sweet. It's so heartwarming. I thought the two worlds would be completely separated, but in the end, a magic circle was built so that people from the other world could come to this world to meet each other through blood ties. It made people's hearts soften. The extra is also quite interesting.
Looks good! An article about raising children through hp micro-parenting (with elements of time and space travel). Cp is cialis. This time and space is a complete dumpling-making finale! This theme is very special in HP. I woke up and had a child with my mortal enemy. Although it was sudden for the heroine and Sirius, the two of them were also trying hard to play their unexpected roles as parents, and they did not get into trouble or escape because of what happened before. The characters are set up and developed very well, and the descriptions are also very good, and the characters are also very cute. The writing is also good. The emotional line progresses quite quickly, without any delays. The family lines are also well written. (It is a completely different setting of two time and space, so the heroine knows that Sirius in another time and space is not her Sirius, and Sirius in another time and space will only miss his deceased wife wholeheartedly, which is good!
This book is really well written and every character is deeply rooted in my heart. How did you come to this conclusion? Mainly because I found this novel at noon and started reading it. After reading half of it, I took a nap. As a result, I had a dream when I was taking a nap. I dreamed that I traveled through time and became the heroine. I was very happy at that time [sending my heart]. I immediately went up and hugged Sirius. But after a few days, I suddenly realized that my personality was very different from that of the heroine. Then in order not to be discovered by others, in order not to OOC [face covering] [face covering], I started to pretend to be very calm. It looked like this, and then a few days later, I learned that Sirius knew that I was not the heroine as early as the moment I traveled through time. It was just that he wanted to understand why, and then he acted with me. Oh my god, he could clearly identify it. I think it is really incredible. This feeling gives me a wonderful feeling [Send heart] [Send heart] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]
It's so well written, I've read half of it now, but I really feel that it is one of the few good cialis stories in Foreign Persimmon. The writing is good and the dialogue between the characters really has that sense of British humor. It's very lively, and it's not awkward to read. It's very smooth. I'm really lucky to have this kind of writing in Foreign Persimmon. Moreover, the character of the main character is very lovable and Sirius is not OOC, so I like it!
It's so beautiful. When writing about each character, they are very delicate and feel like they are alive. I think the author really knows how to describe Snape and Lily. He describes Snape's regret for Lily's death very well. He also writes about the emotional changes of Elena and Sirius very well. It's so beautiful, why no one knows! The author writes when he is hungry. When he is thirsty, he writes. When he wants to go to the toilet, he writes.
Not to mention that the setting is amazing, the author is able to add the element of traveling through time and space to the original Sirius, a fan who already feels that he can't come up with new ideas. In other words, he is a naughty and mischievous high school classmate in one second and has a human filter in the next second. He has both the youthful vitality of a boy and the calmness of his age. I am really fascinated by him. The heroine is not a one-sided strong woman. She is strong and rich in her heart. She is not trapped by family constraints, nor does she rely on the male protagonist's rescue. She is the heroine's dominant type in both the external environment and her emotions. Miss Elena is a self-reliant and attractive woman both in action and in her heart. Every soulful character is inseparable from the careful shaping of the author behind it. In order to cook for us, the author did not make a shoddy work. She revealed tenderness in her delicate writing style, which made me step into the pit of a serial with only 30 chapters. There will always be a lot of voices on the way to creation. I hope that the teacher will not be affected by the mood. He can slow down a little, don't give up easily, and don't change the writing style and style at will and end inexplicably. I am so lucky to get to know my teacher at the beginning of a new year. I wish the teacher good health and all the best [love] [love]
It's very imaginative and I don't think it's OOC. It's interesting that the arch-enemies got married and had a child. A good point is that the author explained that Sirius did not abandon his wife and children. I really can't stand giving up the heroine because of friendship. After all, this is a female video. If you don't care about the heroine, why do you want to get married? And as the heroine of Slytherin, making friends with Lily was written very naturally, and it didn't make me think that the heroine was licking her, and it was in line with the character. The two of them feel so warm and cozy together.
So pretty! ! ! The author writes really well The little feet are so cute hahaha It feels like there is no OOC What impressed me deeply was the author's analysis of the heroine's father in the commentary. It's so well written. It's no longer a romance novel about bearing everything alone, making people feel annoyed, angry, regretful, and distressed after reading it, but a very real description of human nature. This kind of reality is the reality I want (I'm going too far) Beautiful!
The author gently stitches together the riddled victory of the original work, and provides a reasonable conclusion to everyone's regrets. The plot does not have ups and downs, like the silent spring rain that moistens everything, turning the tears that every reader once shed for "Harry Potter" into endless nutrients that nourish spring and hope.
It's so good-looking, and the marriage between Elena and Sirius is so exciting, [admiration] emmm... I just don't understand why Sirius abandoned his wife and son to go to Azkaban for his brothers, and I always feel that James is weird. Maybe my understanding of James is different. But overall, the writing is smooth, the emotions are delicate, the creativity is great, and it's really beautiful! Very nice! Very nice! Big cheers for the author! ! ! [Blowing kiss]
Nice! This is the most beautiful hp fan in my opinion! ! ! Hitting the wall for Elena and Sirius' love! ! ! [Shy] None of the characters are OOC, especially Lily! Lily should be such a strong and great witch with a bright future! Compared with those fans who write Lily as a White Lotus character who is obsessed with Snape, this book is so beautiful!
A HP fanfic worthy of five stars. The plot is novel and compact without being procrastinating, and the character setting is not OOC. Although the length is not long, the story line is very complete, the heroine is not a Mary Sue, and peace is brought about by everyone's efforts. It's a group portrait, and each character's story basically has a happy ending. When I first read this setting, I was worried that the rest of the story would turn into the kind of story that relies solely on children to connect the male and female protagonists, without considering the original timeline. But after reading it in one go, I found that the author's writing skills are still very good, and it is worth reading [Like]
It's very interesting, the writing is good, the logic is smooth, and the process of changing the ending is very close to the original work. I like that the author did not let the heroine change Sirius's surname when she got married. I like the creation that always maintains a firm feminist stance.
Respecting the original work, it gives most people an open ending, and does not tear down the cp or blackmail any positive characters. In the early stage, I wrote a lot of ambiguous affairs between the male and female protagonists, and it was a bit dark and depressing in the middle. In the later stage, it was just warm and daily.
I really recommend it, I rarely write reviews, but this book portrays Sirius very well. I have always felt that Sirius is a very difficult person to portray, and the original book does not describe him much. This book is not OOC at all, and now that I see it, I feel that it is not surprising. It can be said that if Ms. Rowling has other descriptions of Sirius, I think it is such a very three-dimensional Sirius.
Very beautifully written! First of all, this content is very novel. It is the time when the two children traveled back to their school days. Very beautiful! ! ! This emotional scene is also like this, oh my god, it's so sweet that I feel sad❤️ I haven't read such a good article in a long time, and it's not particularly embarrassing or anything, and the plot develops very smoothly. Nice! ! ! ! I just don't know why the score is so low. It feels like it could be 8.9 Or above.
Suddenly dropped into a parallel world, Elena and Sirius, who were still enemies, had to worry about raising a baby together. In the process, the two gradually liked each other. By peering into the fate of peers in the parallel world, this world learned the plot of the original work, thus saving all tragedies and creating a HE ending. Regulus was rescued, everyone was alive, and the magical world was thriving after removing the rotten roots and introducing new technologies... The writing is good, the plot is reasonable, and the emotional line develops a bit quickly but is also very smooth. The characters are also more three-dimensional.
I don't know why his rating is so low, but this is undoubtedly a particularly good book. The story line starts with the son being transported back in time. The pace is tight, there is no OOC, and there is no discomfort in the original book.
It's very nice and very good. The main text is finished. Although there are only a few dozen chapters, one chapter has twice as many words as other books. It's a very warm and wonderful article. I really like the heroine in the article. She is so charming, strong and wise. Highly recommended.
A very novel story. I hope Sirius in this world can have a daughter.
It's very interesting and the setting is very interesting. I hope the author can finish it and not stop updating it [Blow kiss]
Everyone who has seen it said it was good, why is it so beautiful and why is the rating so low? Whether it's love, family or friendship, it's all very delicately portrayed, and the writing is really good. Happy ending makes me feel warm!
It's great, everyone has a perfect ending! Saved all suffering
I really, really like this story! ! ! Not only did everyone in the two parallel time and spaces gain happiness, but many of the regrets of the original work were also taken into account! Moreover, everyone's characters are very distinct, especially the dialogue between the predators, which is very original! Thank you teacher for bringing such a good story~~~
Nice! It gave everyone a good ending, and the character's personality was also well grasped. The heroine is very plump, and Sirius is very sweet. The author's writing is neither watery nor blunt at all, and I can't get enough of it!
The writing is really sweet. The purpose of fan fiction is to make up for regrets. Sirius is too lonely and he has lost his Irina forever. It feels sour. It is a very good book. The babies are so cute and the whole family is doing well. Peter is far away and Snape has a new life.
Finished reading! It's very delicious, the setting is novel, the author's writing is good, there are no bugs, and the happy ending shows that they are all happy and have their own lives, which makes up for a lot of regrets... Sijiao, Lily James, Harry, Regulus, GGAD, etc. All have their own lives, so happy! Worth a look!
An extremely delicious HP fanfic. The writing, plot, concept and emotional lines are all very exquisite. I just feel like I was put off by the title of the book. Maybe the author could have chosen a better title? Really shocking and delicious! ! ! !
It is a novel with perfect logic. I used to only read books with a score of 9 or above, but now I feel that this book has a score of 7 just because I haven't developed it yet, so I highly recommend it! Overall, it's a sweet story, but it's not so good for a week-long episode of Koko Baby… But it's a reasonable plot, even if I really want some people to come back to life.