No Milk in the World, So I Awakened a Mobile Spring

The plot is exciting. The writing power is already flawless. Stories are good stories. Looking forward to the author's second book. It must be more exciting. 1. The title and text do not correspond well in some interesting points. But the plot is good and it's fun. 2. Writing style → Use the next line more often in paragraphs. A longer paragraph is fine. Lots of line breaks. Good reading experience 3. Setting → The author is confused, and some settings will be subconsciously ignored and introduced. I have trouble reading. But if the plot is good and the story is good, this won't be a big problem. 4. It's more fun → The description of carrying spring water (the protagonist) to someone's back will attract many comments and discussions. 5. There are too many words written in the same way at the beginning. I'm tired of provoking and creating conflicts. However, the plot is good, and the alternative way out of the conventional plot line is very attractive. The protagonist goes to the next book, but ends up crossing another dimension. I went to take a test and ended up getting assists with top bosses. This kind of unconventional story direction. Unexpected harvest, not only the protagonist, but also the readers feel that they have earned something and are happy. Awesome. 6. I lost my train of thought and forgot one more thing I wanted to say. Come on, author.

Can you recycle Liu Ruyan's healing power? This does not belong to her. When the protagonist meets her, let her feel the joy of having the healing power sent to her doorstep, and then leave her and merge into the protagonist. Please, the author is great

The plot in the early stage is a bit cliche, but in the middle stage, the emotions are sincere and the multiple emotional lines are remarkable. The character creation of the protagonist is very realistic and not a uniform perfect character. The charm of the group portraits is amazing. I really like Xiao tide and Fatty in the copy.

Not enough, not enough at all. I like it very much. Please give me a lot of support from the author [Explore][Explore]

The beginning is a bit classic but it turns out to be pretty good later on. The hang-up is quite big and compared to other novels, others can't recover health but I can. The settings are also quite novel, which is not bad. The last one I thought was pretty good was a novel about a mysterious resurgence where only the protagonist could kill ghosts. It was much better than a simple invincible novel.

It's so beautiful. The character of the main character is very good. He's very well represented. The three views are also extremely normal. The author is not good at all. It's very, very, very, very, very, very beautiful. It's one of the best books I've ever read.

The author must continue to write more! Super pretty!

Not bad, a refreshing article without routine, more and faster!

A very nice book, Golden Finger is powerful, it has both darkness and shining light!

It feels like a programmer father specially customized a game to wake up his son from a vegetative state.