In the Outer Ring, Invincible from the Start

It's good to watch, but the main character grows up too fast. I feel like he will become a guest of a certain force who spends all his time walking around and keeping accounts.

The author's writing is very good, not all following the plot, but having his own creativity. He also has a good grasp of details. The protagonist is still a little succubus, and his strength improves quickly. He has the qualifications for invincible and harem novels [Adoration]

It's pretty good, and it ranks among the top ten fanfics I've read. If you add characters later, it won't collapse, and no poison spots will appear. It's basically no problem. It's so uncomfortable! I read it as a cool novel from beginning to end, but in the end, the protagonist was controlled by force, his memory was changed, and he was defeated. Although the setting is great and the logic is clear, it is really uncomfortable to watch. When will it get better later?

It is a rare novel to write down all the bright and hidden lines in a critical area. The most exciting part of the book is the game between the various forces. There are flaws in various details of the world view, the original world view has flaws, and the character design of JueZuZero is not rich enough. However, these flaws are based on a top-notch foundation. It is considered the top book among JueZuo Zero fans. The most rare thing is the author's thinking about the depth of the core of JueZuo Zero [Like] Give the author a big five-star praise, and give some rewards by the way to support the author's continued efforts.

Seeing that everything is fine now, it looks good. I hope to strengthen the protagonist. I released a game that shook the world, and then it became weak and dropped stars. The weak period was a bit long, so I dropped more stars. Three stars is so-so. I'm not stepping on you. After considering your bad points, I think it's not unfair to give you three stars. Generally speaking, it's not bad. If you drive high and go low, you can still watch it. Come on!

The logic is clear, and the idea is very good. Damn it, I've read it so many times, why don't you even have a paragraph comment? Come here and read a book, you bastard [angry], such a beautiful book, come and read it

A good fanfic of Zero Zone Zero. After watching the latest plot, I realized that there are too many big forces in this world, right?

Very good, keep going as hard as you are now. A score of 9 or above is no problem. Well I was wrong.

It looks good, I love watching it, please update more! I don't have the arrogance to limit my vision to the player's field of vision, and I don't passively follow the game plot. Instead, I zoom in on the game settings. The entire game board of Zero Zone gives me the feeling that I have gained power from outside the world, of course to defeat the world.

It's okay, but I'm not very interested in original expanded world views. Relying on, not invincible, memory has been changed, power has been divided, it's over