Rome************

If you can't get your father's love, let the galaxy burn😡

Protagonist = Emperor, six adopted daughters = Primarch, Legion = Astartes, Praetorians = canned corn

Okay, the only shortcoming that is not a shortcoming is that the prelude is too long, with more than 100,000 words. I have finished writing other novels in the early stages, but I haven't started here yet.

My stomach hurts from watching it. Can the final result of the bitter and spicy version be sweet? I hope all six daughters will get what they want and have the opportunity to severely "punish" this "ruthless emperor" for not being a good father, and then the seven of us will make dumplings together.

The character description is okay. It is the shell of a yandere novel but the essence of a war novel. The shortcoming is that there are many repetitive descriptions, including weapons, such as the gap under the shield, where someone comes in and stabs with a bayonet. This part has been written at least three times where I looked. I don't know if it was washed by AI.

The writing is very good, but the past things have been mentioned in one stroke.

It's a very good novel. The writing style and details are very good. It's very detailed. The only problem in my personal opinion is that it's too detailed and tight. As a result, if the plot develops a bit slowly, of course it's just slow, but it doesn't mean there are no waves. I've been reading it for so long. Although part of it is listening to the book, the protagonist is still on an expedition.

The level is quite good. Anyway, after looking at the front, I don't think it has much to do with yandere. On the contrary, the author's strong writing ability made me feel very happy. This kind of novel that is both a group portrait and a war is really difficult for the author to write. The writing is very good and the level is very high. But there must be a gimmick to attract people. So it's really well written.

War writing is just under the guise of being yandere. If you like reading war stories, you can read it

It's good-looking, and the war is described in great detail, so even a non-cold person like me can enjoy it. But there is an indescribable smell of AI, and a sense of déjà vu when talking to AI agents.

The book is okay, but could there be more scenes for the six adopted daughters? This is what I came here to read.

A very good book with an absolute sense of logic. If you like logic and want to feel refreshed, this is it. The author is definitely a researcher in history.

It's very interesting to watch. The historical sense of the alternate history is well done, and the relationship between the characters is also well portrayed. However, the slave girl "Livia" next to the protagonist seems to have the same name as the regiment commander "Livia" Moreover, as one of the few books that I can read these days, I don't want to be taijian (!!!) I am reading every chapter carefully. Worth a look (out loud) More updates (super loud)

The characters are vividly drawn and the subject matter is novel. It is a pity that there is no complete unity from the central government, so the bottom of each legion only knows the commander of the legion and does not know the central government.

By the way, can't the title of the protagonist be changed? Why are they all named me? When will the role of the adopted daughter come [Chigua]

It scared me to death. I was shocked when I read the second chapter. I thought the first chapter was so long. It turns out that the first two chapters are just an introduction [face covering], and I also want to ask, is the protagonist's daughter biological? [Think]

Looks good, it feels a bit cool

Reviewing this book means that you identify with the empire and have made up your mind to join the emperor's personal guard and dedicate your heart to the grievances and grievances of the emperor and his six daughters. In addition, viewing this information will also be regarded as voluntarily joining the SS.

The scenes depicting the war are very grand and worth watching.

As an article that combines AI, there are some traces that cannot be removed, but overall, I think it is still good. It is indeed not bad on Tomato. The main reason is that the current pace is coupled with the popularity. I am more worried about whether the book can be finished. It should be difficult. This kind of article is too slow. For a fast-paced and refreshing article, it is really difficult to attract more readers. I have no problem if it goes slower, it depends on what the author thinks.

Will it still be open? What will you write next?

Good-looking, good-looking, quite good-looking

Not much to say, just watch it

A book worth reading

Not bad, good, very good-looking

Very nice, cheers for the author [blowing kiss]

Very beautiful, I like Rome

Quite to my liking

No need to say more~everything is clear~(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

So far I have seen that Chapter 10 is very well written.