I'm Really Going to Keep You Under Control, You Yandere Fairy!

The writing is very good, but there are some suggestions or flaws (?). One is that the initial change in the relationship between the male and female protagonists is a bit abrupt. Of course, I have no experience in falling in love. Maybe falling in love is like this. I don't know the origin of the love, but I am passionate about it. But their relationship is well written. The second is the description of the school beauty and instructors, with such detailed descriptions. Firstly, it is a bit watery, after all, she is a supporting role (I didn't say that as the harem heroine); secondly, it makes the protagonist seem a bit too philandering (not a good description, but of course this is human nature); thirdly, the story is about the male and female protagonist having mixed feelings with other people. From my personal point of view, I don't want a third person to be involved in the relationship between two people. (To be honest, I just like the heroine and I'm partial) But it's normal and real. After all, this relationship can't be perfect.

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