Tomorrow***********

A good book, as long as it is constantly updated, it will become a masterpiece with great potential. There is no violation in the self-designed part, the logic is clear, the language is solid, the characterization is excellent, the protagonist is modest and self-respecting, it is not a fighting type book (of course the protagonist is not a combat-less type), the plot has ups and downs and kickbacks, and the combat power ratio is balanced. If you can persist in writing at this level, you can at least reach 9.7 Points, which can be compared with the white-haired dog book (I hope the author does not mind the comparison between the two books) Conclusion: Super Big Cup Haoshu has invested in shares I wish the author great inspiration and all the best in life!

Four stars, because I heard that five stars are not included in the rating. Let me talk about the conclusion first. This is a fan fiction that really puts its heart into it. The small ingenuity in the chapters, the additions to Terra's worldview and the imagination of Originium technology all reflect the author's intentions. But there are also shortcomings. There are too many plots and details that have nothing to do with the main plot. This is both an advantage and a disadvantage, and it affects the pace of the novel a bit, but the flaws do not outweigh the flaws. Choosing this kind of subject matter is inherently thankless, and I hope the author can persevere. Support it

It's beautiful, and the main character is simply superhuman!

I have my own thinking, which is not bad, but I feel that my personal ability has been weakened. The individual strength of this land is still very awesome. At least I don't think that the current level of technology can defeat the giant beasts.

Good-looking, super-cup plot [laughing]

Compared to some Ark fanfics, this one is unique and beautiful.

The protagonist can really be called the Great Sage of Sarkaz.

This book writes about another future of Sakaz from the perspective of the protagonist, the power of individuals and the technology of groups. This book is like an enchanted golden apple, high quality and fire resistant

Ark's writing is considered to be of a very good level, keep it up [Adoration]

Unique and has the potential to be a super cup. Come on

I think it's very beautiful

Among all the Porridge fanfics I have read, it is the most attractive to me. The writing and narration are both very good.

Not bad, I like to watch it. If the popularity rises, it should be able to get an 8.5

Very good, it's an angle I've never seen before

It's good-looking [full], but not satisfying. In the latest chapter, Kazdel has truly stood up.

This is the most growth-promoting book I have read in Ark.

Good looking It's just that the pace is a bit fast

Great needless to say.

Come on, author (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

It's really well written, like it👍🏻

Great look, please give the author a big boost ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧

It's quite good-looking. I like to read this kind of book with detailed theoretical details and rich specific settings. It's a pity that there are so few good writings like this.

It's really good to watch and the plot logic is very good.

The part about the three demon kings is very interesting, and the discussion about what it means to be human is also very good [Like]

There are very good Ark fandoms, they are very unique and have their own stories they want to tell. Much better than those joyful breedings.

You have to read it, except for the author who is slower, everything else is good [crazy]

It's useless to say more, good book, good reading

Very promising, good luck to the author!