Extraordinary Journey: Starting from the Magic-Free Middle Ages

A standard cool article, a qualified cool article. If there is no pressure, the protagonist will not be able to walk without seeing the beautiful woman. I've read about a hundred chapters so far, and there's nothing particularly bad about it. In the Middle Ages, I had my own way and went to other worlds to pretend to be sexy. I have just arrived in the third world. I'm looking forward to something modern, or some time in the future. It's such a scam. You just finished praising it and you wrote this about the second half of the Three Kingdoms world. What is this about? I like the world's great unity, so why don't you write another historical novel? Do you have to follow history again in every world in the future? Where did the writing suddenly go? It was inexplicable and empty for more than 20 chapters. It was really boring.

When I saw the description of the feudal era in the first three chapters, I knew that the author had put a lot of effort into it, especially for the serfs who were hungry, ignorant, cowardly, and even extremely pitiful. The protagonist was very realistic and had basic kindness. The logic was not dimmed because of the story, and the story was not boring because of the logic. I will make additional comments after reading it [Chigua] [Chigua]

In fact, the writing is not bad, the writing style is okay, but there are too few exciting points in the early stage, and the author has a very good attitude. If there are problems, he will correct them. With this attitude, you will succeed in whatever you do. It is just a matter of time. Come on.

It's okay, but the number of words is a bit short now. Let's see how the quality goes later. Can't write Datong? , If you don't know how to write a plot, just write about Datong, right? Shi

Five stars for encouragement. Does the author know what it feels like for a boarder to come back once a week and read only five or six chapters? I want to update. I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs! The author is very active and very good. He will respond to any questions and is constantly making corrections. It is already very good! Evaluation: The introduction is very attractive (look forward to it). I like Infinite Streaming, especially the author's original world. I like it very much and it's very thoughtful! However, the development is very slow. For example, the main world of Western Fantasy is still in the same place (what is the secret of the dream! Was the foreshadowing buried too early?), There is no exploration, and there are the secrets of ghost blood and martial arts, etc., And then the emotional drama... I think it is very boring and useless. The author should not waste energy on those bad reviews, please update me consciously! ! !

The subject matter is quite good, but I don't know, it always feels like a petty one. But it's okay for a new author to write like this. I can't stand it, so I'll give you 5 stars to encourage you, and then I'll leave.

The writing is still good, but the updates are very slow. In fact, I would like to make a small request. The way you obtain abilities wastes too many plots and chapters. It is equivalent to having no main line, and the main line and branch lines are always synchronized. This way the readers will be very tired and do not know what they are reading. , After all, that is the main plot. You should strengthen the main plot, and just write about 10 chapters for the branch plot and end it. This should be a mistake that new authors make. The branch plot is long and smelly, and then the main plot is not advanced, and the readers will be confused. I hope the author can see improvements [Chigua]

It's really a hearty reading. It's really exciting to catch up with the big army in one go. When I saw Lancelot, I thought he was getting ready, until I saw Matthew in the next paragraph, 666 and the title designation. You guy, I really can't do anything to you The humor in this book is very vivid, and it is very refreshing to read and listen to. I just don't know why there are so few people.

The writing is really good. The author is also a fan of Wenzhaogong. Although the introduction looks like a mysterious disaster, the content is different.

The book is good, but it turns into a man-eating demon. He eats too many people. Whatever he does, he can eat people.

Just follow your own ideas, I think it's well written. While the heavens are growing, the Middle Ages are relaxing as their base camp and operating into a unified magic empire.

Shi Li is digging for gold, and finally another good book conquered me [sending my heart]

The subject matter is good, but the update is a bit slow. Can it be updated faster? For example, 100 chapters a day are updated in ten days and 20 days.

Blood-sucking motherland people read Marxism-Leninism, a refreshing article about eliminating people in the multiverse and harming the world. Smooth reading and good pace.

It's not bad, it's not a scumbag, I'll give it to someone to cheat and keep up the good work [Like]

Even though it's a novice and doesn't talk about brains, it's much better than AI human-machine flow.

Travel to various worlds to increase your strength, and then run to a world without demons to become an envoy. This book is very interesting, but the title and introduction are not very suitable.

It's a pretty good novel, good luck to the author.

Nice looking, but a bit short

After reading it, the author has at least 40 more heads than us [smile]

Although I don't know what was written in the book "Red Heart Surveying the Sky", the author's subsequent actions really fit the name of the book.

I won't say nice things, but it's okay anyway. You can take a look

It's okay, it's a little bit flawed, but it's still doable on tomatoes.

How can I put it this way? It's quite interesting, but the worlds you travel through seem to be your own original worlds, which are not very attractive to me.

Is this book so polarizing? It feels relatively good to read.

No wonder it's more than 5 points and only has 90 chapters…

I think the Middle Ages is very good, but when I started traveling through martial arts and the like, it was a bit overwhelming. It would be much better if I changed it to a short story that can only travel through one day in the past. It feels uncomfortable to have time travel take up a lot of the time.

I like it very much, the main character is a staunch socialist fighter. There is currently no mentally retarded plot, and the protagonist is not weak either.

It's a bit weird in the early stage, but the more I write in the later stage, the better it gets. It's worth watching the later stage, and I look forward to the update.

I've seen the first dozen or so pictures and they're very nice, I look forward to the next ones being the same.