Book-Traveling Villain: When Digging a Tomb, He Offended the Dragon-Shaped Emperor Ancestor

It's okay, but I feel like this article is in the wrong order? It doesn't flow smoothly from the front to the back. What I did in the front is gone, and I do it again, and it seems like I have no memory. Maybe it was sent in the wrong order.

I think it's okay, and it's pretty good-looking, but I feel like the order of the content is completely messed up. If the order of the content could be rearranged, it would be neat. If the order is straightened out, I would give it full marks, that is, full stars.

Even the main character's name has been changed so many times that I can't even tell the difference.

Why does the protagonist change so many names? But it's so beautiful! ^ω^

Shen Jiyuan's room was next door. The old boy kept his word and didn't lock the door. He pushed the door open with a slight push and walked to the bed quietly. "Shen Jiyuan?" He called. The person on the bed did not respond to him. Shen Ji's face lit up, he climbed onto the bed on all fours, squatted next to Shen Jiyuan's head and called out again, "Shen Jiyuan??" There was still no movement from the person on the bed. Shen Ji raised his hand and slapped the other person on the face, "Shen Jiyuan, wake up! I'm going to give you meatballs!" Shen Jiyuan still didn't move. Shen Ji then breathed a sigh of relief and gave Sijiu a thumbs up: [This sleeping pill is awesome! Sijiu raised his head proudly: [Of course, the products produced by the system must be high-quality products, a must! Shen Ji quickly took out the clippers that Sijiu got for him and gestured at the thick hair on Shen Jiyuan's head: "Yeah, help me catch his hair. This old boy is mysophobic, don't let it spill on the bed." The room where Sijiu raised his paw to tame Shen Jiyuan was next door. The old boy kept his word and didn't lock the door. He pushed the door open with a slight push and walked to the bed softly. "Shen Jiyuan?" He called. The person on the bed did not respond to him. Shen Ji's face lit up, he climbed onto the bed on all fours, squatted next to Shen Jiyuan's head and called out again, "Shen Jiyuan??" There was still no movement from the person on the bed. Shen Ji raised his hand and slapped the other person on the face, "Shen Jiyuan, wake up! I'm going to give you meatballs!" Shen Jiyuan still didn't move. Shen Ji then breathed a sigh of relief and gave Sijiu a thumbs up: [This sleeping pill is awesome! Sijiu raised his head proudly: [Of course, the products produced by the system must be high-quality products, a must! Shen Ji quickly took out the clippers that Sijiu got for him and gestured at the thick hair on Shen Jiyuan's head: "Yeah, help me catch his hair. This old boy is mysophobic, don't let it spill on the bed." Sijiu raised his paw and made an OK gesture in reverse. He made an OK gesture.

It looks good, it's super good. I support continuing to update it. It's just that the chapters are out of order. If the order of the chapters is correct, it will look better and have more feeling. I feel like the timeline doesn't match up. Why does it feel like the main character's name has changed after just a few chapters?

It's good to watch, but the order is wrong. I watched it several times and encountered the same content.

Good, good, good

It looks great, very good. Author, thank you. So pretty.