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Personally, it's considered a fine product. Some people say that the natives are not good, but for people like me, who have seen many poorly dressed Hokages, being ordinary is the real A[like]. Most of the descriptions of the characters are consistent with the original work. There are no unappetizing conspiracy theories, nor are most of the anecdotes mentioned in the reviews. Although it is true that the protagonist does not have much role in the third stage of the Chunin Exam, it is obvious that the protagonist has his own story line. It is already rare to see this kind of article on Tomato, not to mention there are many more authors, so why should I choose?

It's really good. I've read a lot of Naruto fanfics, and they're all about novices who keep pushing girls, pushing girls, being semi-invincible at the beginning, and pushing them flat all the way. This kind of clone is really eye-catching at the beginning, and you can see the protagonist's growth all the way. The most important thing is that the heroine Ino really cares about the hero. The third generation is not that kind of big conspirator, but an old man who is dedicated to the village. The description of each character is okay. This cannot be said to be the best Tomato Naruto fanfic, but it can certainly be said to be in the first echelon.

It's a very delicious novel. The protagonist is an aborigine who doesn't know the plot, but I have no regrets. The plot changes are not big but not too abrupt. The relationship with Ino is also a long-lasting one. The most comfortable thing is Ino's concern for the protagonist and the redemption of giving the protagonist a home. It is not the kind of love-making (some novels are like this, the relationship is very abrupt). The young couple also follows the path of pure love, and they like this kind of relationship. Regarding the growth of the protagonist, this is not an invincible flow❗❗The protagonist was beaten a lot in the early stage, or lacked chakra, but I think this description is more realistic. Compared with the beginning, the protagonist is only 12 years old. If he is invincible, his combat power will completely collapse, Senju Hashirama 1 When I was 2 years old, I was fighting with Madara, but after all, I have a relationship with Senju Hashirama, so there must be something involved. The current protagonist (15 years old) already has the appearance of the first generation, and he looks more and more like Hashirama. Haha, I am looking forward to meeting King Wang Wen later... Anyway, I just want to watch Wudi Liushuang. This kind of story is about a long-term and slow-paced growth-oriented protagonist, but I think it's pretty good. It has both daily life and fighting. It feels good to see the protagonist grow up little by little.

Not bad, not bad. Keep writing. I felt very unhappy when I found out that I was an indigenous person at first. There is no God's perspective. Later, I felt that it was okay. It's pretty good. It depends on how the writing goes later [laughing] But I have a small suggestion. You can increase the amount of chakra in the future. After all, many Hashirama cells have increased chakra. This pure cell clone must be a chakra after all [laughing]

Xicran is absolutely logical, the characters are firm, and the works with distinctive personalities are really rare. The story is told much better than those mindless white novels that don't even have the original work and the underlying logic. I sincerely recommend it to the bookworm who has a stock of Qidianqianxian for ten years.

There is a feeling that the writing is getting better and better. It is indeed a low point in the early stage, but it is reasonable. What I don't understand later is that since the male protagonist is a clone of Hashirama, his physique and chakra should be different from ordinary people. I feel that the male protagonist's physique is about the same as chakra, which is normal. Come on, author, believe in yourself I can feel that the author is very careful in writing, and it can be seen that there is indeed room for improvement in expression. Ino always tells the male protagonist not to get hurt, don't get hurt. I can understand that this is to express concern. However, you might as well change it to another sentence. If you always say don't get hurt, it is too naive and a bit willful to emphasize not to get hurt, and it will appear that Ino is making trouble unreasonably.

For me personally, this is a masterpiece. I am a person who likes Ino and Tsunade very much. When I saw the female protagonist, I came in to read it. The male protagonist is a local setting and a little bit of plot. I really like this kind of work. I have almost 100 chapters and have not yet reached adulthood. I feel that if I follow the plot, I should be able to write a lot. I just don't know how much the author plans to write. I hope it can be done. I just keep writing, and I don't want it to be finished with more than 200 chapters like other fanfics I read. I personally have no resistance to the integration of local people into the plot. I can only say that it is a personal masterpiece. Ino, a local, and the plot, completely touched my fantasy of the Naruto world. It feels like the author wrote all my fantasies. I hope the author will work hard [punch out]. I really like it.

The writing is okay and nothing bad, but the original plot is too long and too long. The latest version is at least 80% original. Although there are some minor changes to the protagonist, it is still boring. There is no new plot at present.

The pace is relatively moderate, and the author consciously controls the intensity of the protagonist. This is actually very rare. Many fanfics will turn into short stories in the middle because they give the protagonist too much strength. I hope this follow-up will not become like this. In terms of plot, so far, the original plot has been described in more detail and with the protagonist's color. I also like this very much. It will not look the same as the original, repetitive and boring, nor will it directly change the magic to ascend. In terms of the protagonist's character, the author's light sense of human-machine has always stood up, and there is no particularly inconsistent or character-breaking plot, so if you like a slower pace, this novel is highly recommended [laughs]

Yes, I have read Chapter 30 so far. The emotional scenes are very delicate and the development is very smooth. I personally hope that the follow-up will slowly deviate from the original plot due to the butterfly effect. I personally don't like it if it follows the original plot from beginning to end. If it deviates, it means starting to be original. It is more difficult for authors to be original. [Laughing] Some people like to follow the original, so I just personally like to deviate. Well, it's currently four stars. I may change the rating in the future, or I may just not review it without reading it. Well, I'm very strict in my evaluation, and there are basically very few five-star reviews. Two stars is very bad, Samsung is average, it is really average, you can watch it or not watch it, it is a little bit toxic, so I mostly choose Samsung. Four stars is okay, not bad, little or no poison points. Five stars means you are in a good mood or really look great.

It seems to be slow at the moment, with no sudden progress, and the description of the characters is also very good. (It's nothing except some book friends who wonder every day whether Genma will be more extreme than Obito after Ino's death)

So far, it seems there are no major flaws, it is not the Invincible style, and of course I don't like the Invincible style. I have just entered Shippuden, and my strength is about Jonin to Kage level. There are no conspiracy theories, Konoha's stance. What is particularly worth mentioning is that the relationship development with Ino was so well written. They knew each other and helped each other as children, the relationship sprouted, developed, and the relationship was established in one go. There was nothing abrupt or forced. I, a boy, looked at my aunt and smiled, it was great.

I stayed up all night to read this book. Let me give you a general review first. It is a five-star Naruto fanfic. It is not an exaggeration to say it is a fairy tale. It does not have the usual systematic flow of Tomato and creates a growth-oriented protagonist that meets all my fantasies about young people. If you are interested in reading a passionate novel like the original Naruto, then I highly recommend you to read this book. After finishing the general review, let me talk about the plot of this book that I particularly like. I personally like originality very much, and this book happens to have a lot of adaptations of the main plot, which makes people want to stop. I just want to see how the author lays out the plot in the next chapter. Whether it is the original work of Class 9, or the encounter with Tiandao, I particularly like the adaptation of the encounter with the artistic duo. I think it is better than Let's talk about Kishimoto's battle descriptions. The moment when the big Buddha comes out is really refreshing, just like the original Naruto in Sage mode. The battle descriptions in this book are also a must-try delicacy, especially the author said that he will bloom two Lespedeza flowers, and with the random inclusion of Boruto characters, it feels like the author is not like a novice writer, but like a master from Qidian coming to fry fish. There is another link in this article that must be tasted. It is the emotional drama between Genma and Ino. I recently listened to the song True Love Hypothesis, and I felt that their first meeting was like "you just appeared and broke into my heart." Ino is the light in Genma's heart, illuminating the darkness in his heart, more important than Iruka to Naruto. If Iruka and Naruto are two-way redemption, I think Ino and Genma are pure one-way redemption, Ino Genma, who had just come out of the laboratory, was slowly filled with love from the container and became Senju Genma, so he can fully use Hashirama's power, can endure the corrosion of the wet bone forest, and can resist the sage mode that Tsunade has not yet succeeded in practicing. That's why when Ino was assassinated by Gen, he went berserk for the first time, and showed the killing posture of Mu Dun for the first time, domineering and protecting his wife, so handsome. I want to continue watching the love between trees and flowers, please, author! What a pity, it starts but ends

The rhythm is pretty good and the combat power isn't too bad. In most cases, it follows the original plot. The content is full of details, but those who have read the original work may find it a bit boring. The characters are very three-dimensional. Better than most Naruto fanfics that like cheating. But it's more daily life, there are battle details, but I don't think the author is good at writing. It can be said to be quite friendly to those who have never watched Naruto. If it's not bad for the third generation, it can barely be regarded as a Naruto fanfic that makes up for the regrets. A five-star rating would be a bit exaggerated, and a three-star rating would be unsatisfactory for the author's control over the characters. Almost four stars.

The early stage was very delicate, but for some reason it suddenly sped up when it came to the Payne part [smile] I watched the early stage overnight, and now the Ninja War makes me frown. Why did a Naruto fanfic that was so good turn out like this?

After reading it for a while, I found that it is too little. Compared with many Pomodoro books, it is already written enough. I hope the author can stick to it, don't stop updating, and keep writing according to your own ideas. Come on, come on, come on.

This book is quite well written, the interaction between the protagonist and Ino, and the protagonist's inner journey gradually become stronger, the writing is also quite delicate, in short, I like this ^O^

That's okay. As a fan, some of the detailed settings made by the author are quite reasonable. (However, the author always complains that some people say that it's okay to be frustrated in the early stage. Isn't the setting just rescued from the laboratory?)

The Ten Chapters of "Big Capacity" are pure octopuses. The inspiration is outstanding, the angle is unique, the writing is fluent, and it is neither embarrassing nor poisonous. It is a living Buddha. The shortcoming is that the writing style is relatively immature, but it can be read smoothly. I give it five stars. What do you think? Some people think that the author used AI to polish the article, which I think is understandable. I also used AI to crawl through the novel. There are indeed some traces in each paragraph, but it does not hinder reading at all. Besides, using AI itself requires providing ideas. In my humble opinion: if you have content, you are a good author. Free novels are not about getting something for nothing. It's so cool. It's so fun to watch. There's zero AI content in the back. I love you, the author.

The protagonist is a rare character who starts from scratch and gradually understands love and hate👍🏻. It's great that there is no direct cheating or system manipulation🥺It is obvious that the protagonist is gradually growing up [Blowing Kiss] Ino's writing is also very smart and cute🥰It seems that I like it very much so far [Blowing Kiss] But what does the protagonist look like🌚

The author writes well and reads smoothly, but the paragraphs are a bit disgusting. When will this group of people realize that Hashirama cells and Hashirama are two different things? The protagonist is a test subject who just came out of the laboratory. He has not been exposed to ninjutsu for a long time. The comment area has been complaining about low combat power. Having Hashirama cells does not mean having Hashirama's strength. In reality, if a child owns a firearm and does not hurt himself without long-term systematic training, it is considered too high. The protagonist has powerful Hashirama cells. If you don't lay a good foundation, step by step. How is it possible to grow into a towering tree? One of the biggest differences between strong men and ordinary people is growth. It is precisely because of growth that one can step by step become a strong man that is beyond the reach of ordinary people. It is really annoying to be eager for success and impatient. It has to be compared with Yamato, not to mention the original Yamato's combat power at the time. Can Yamato's potential be comparable to the protagonist? How many firearms can be developed in the time it takes to develop an atomic bomb? How many firearms can be compared with the atomic bomb? Besides, Yamato has been systematically trained since childhood, while the protagonist has been systematically trained since childhood? On the one hand, I want to see people who like Naruto chatting and saying dirty things in the comments section. On the other hand, I feel sick after seeing such low-IQ comments. I hope the author will not be influenced by these people and do it step by step at his own pace. Come on.

Really awesome writing* The premise is that you must not stop updating, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, I am very optimistic about your author [crying]

It's rare to find a novel with Ino as the heroine. It's very hard to find. It's still a new book, so I have to pick it up. Only now that I've read it have I realized it's not time travel. Maybe the author will come around in the future. And it's not the kind of person who cranks it up right from the start. The protagonist is a person who takes things step by step and works quietly, which is good.

It's quite beautiful, and makes me want to watch it again.

It's very interesting. It's really cool to see the update in one go. The emotional line with Ino is well written. Good luck to the author😊

It's a very good novel, but the writing style has some minor flaws. I found that the author likes to use the phrase "even" very much. In many places, it can be replaced by other phrases. I don't know if the author has paid attention to this. There are also a lot of daily life, but I can understand that Naruto is like this. Anyway, it's okay.

It is more comfortable than the systematic novels and invincible novels. This kind of slow-paced novel is very suitable for my taste, and the emotional line between Genjian and Ino is also very attractive to me ☺️. Xianjian is getting stronger and stronger little by little, and the bond with his companions really feels like watching a child. I will continue to pursue it for a long time, and don't be malicious in negative reviews. Otherwise, the author will not update. Where can I find a novel that suits my taste [smile]

Because of the author's great update efficiency, this novel has become my daily spiritual food. It satisfied my sweet tooth when I read 177. Summary: It's great. This novel is great.

I have read Chapter 54 so far, and I still feel very good about it. The author's writing style is also very delicate

It's a refreshing feeling. The protagonist's growth and bond are well described, and there are no OOC characters. Everyone is vivid, and she is actually a single girl named Ino, my favorite character in Naruto. I almost missed this book because of the ratings, but it may also be because the perspective has changed from anime to novels, and the protagonist is not Naruto. When I read it, I was quite disgusted with Naruto's weakness and recklessness, but he also has the same virtues in the original novel.