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It's so good!! The female channel is all about loving women!! The key characters are all women! The ratio of men to women is about 9:1! There is no tortured and cold-faced plot, it is really refreshing, refreshing, and refreshing! There is no house fight, no real and fake daughters, and no beating of women! I will follow you forever!! The wording is also very good, very good, very good! Especially the second world, it is really beautiful! Some people say that the heroine has everything going smoothly, is the golden finger too wide? No? You mean that the protagonist of the world has to be beaten in the face, to be frustrated, to wash his underwear, to be aggrieved, to be inferior to men, and to be saved by men, is it normal? It's so frustrating. In that detective world, you tortured the protagonist for more than 20 chapters, and then slapped her in the face? Chapter and a half ended, and I was laughing. I give it three stars. The extra star is because the wording is really good at the beginning. ......... After three revisions, it's hard to break down. Except for the criminal investigation, the other chapters are all good to read. The world after the criminal investigation is also very suitable to my taste... Oh, no, if it weren't for the damn criminal investigation, I would rate it 9.3. I suspect that when writing about criminal investigation, the author must be tired of the same old routine and want to try something new. Because the changes were obviously seen in the first two worlds, but it was fine at the time. The criminal investigation is explosive, and after the investigation is over, it returns to the original writing style. Nice

I forgot to comment. It's a female-centered story, and the protagonist is a genius. It's very interesting. I think some of the worlds are too short. I want to see the follow-up. I recently saved a world, but I didn't expect that the world of serial murderers would be so shocking. Yes, it was shocking! The kind that can be remembered for a long, long time In fact, I think the aspect of the serial murderer is the author's overlay for the protagonist's counter-killing behavior. For example, by realistically describing the pain of the original owner/protagonist to explain the reasons for the counter-killing, and putting inescapable shackles on kind people, the red line is repeatedly mentioned by "just people", but the actual perpetrator has already blackened the red line. However, I don't like it too much, maybe it is too close to reality. Many realities are like this, even if it is very miserable (for example, the person who drove to avoid the person with the weapon and hurt himself, the person with the weapon climbed on the hood to chase and chop, and the person with the weapon was accidentally thrown out by the car; and the person who just wanted to escape from the beginning to the end did nothing wrong and was still attacked) So I think it's sometimes not possible to write about how miserable the victims are. It's better to truly write about the perpetrators' unscrupulous, evil-born behavior with no bottom line, because most people cannot empathize with the victims, but most people are afraid of the perpetrators. They are afraid that if these people don't disappear, they may encounter them and become one of their targets. Even the most indifferent person will become wary of threats to themselves.

After reading Chapter 237, overall it is very good. The failure is also the detective chapter that many people complain about. I personally think that the abuse of the female protagonist is not the biggest problem, because the method of abuse is the side effect of drug damage caused by the original owner's painful experience, which can show the original owner's pain and the final abuse. It feels satisfying, but the biggest flaw of this chapter is that the damn person didn't die. The most damning thing is that Chen Cheng didn't even check his home in the sequel, and the parents who abused the original student, but everything turned out fine later on. This is the biggest flaw, but the next few chapters are better. If there are readers who have fallen in love with this comment and feel that they can't accept it, they will skip it in the end. The other writings are still excellent, and I recommend them.

The heroine is intelligent and sexy. She has a spirit that China has had since ancient times. She does not believe in fate, dares to create something from scratch, and dares to be the first. She creates conditions when there are no conditions. Especially in the chapter on cultivating immortals, she has no spiritual roots. She learns spiritual roots from scratch, takes root in the spiritual roots, and grows bigger and bigger. In the end, Tiandao also followed the country led by the heroine and immigrated to a new planet.

Very interesting, contains spoilers! I have only read two small worlds so far. The female characters in the small worlds are well written. The heroine is a passerby who has traveled to the world of the novel. The content of the book is not like the popular type of slap in the face of the original heroine or the original hero. The transformation of the original heroine is not the type where she insists on becoming good friends with the heroine. The original heroine has her own shining points and is not a background board for the plot. The original male protagonist also has his own thoughts, he is not a purely evil type, he has shortcomings and advantages. The image of the female protagonist as a top scholar is well established in this book, demonstrating how knowledge can change destiny. I really like the second small world! ! ! The battle between artificial intelligence and humans, and the people at the bottom struggling under the extreme wealth stratification. (History is always similar, oppression → resistance) It is a relatively rare idea in the fast-travel novels I have read! [Please update] Friends who like to watch quick travel without cp can try it out [sending my heart] I personally think the score can reach 9.0 And above [Sending Hearts] Personally, I think this is a book with a strong female consciousness. Whether it is a heroine or a supporting actress, every woman shines in their respective fields. There are excellent women in every field!

It's so beautiful. I've been really happy recently. I've seen so many books with female protagonists like this. It's so comfortable and I'm so happy [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] Editor 2: The world of the detective is really frustrating. The whole world is abusing the heroine. In the end, the perpetrator is just mentioned briefly. The more I think about it, the more angry I become. I didn't feel much after watching it, but when I think about it, the feeling of frustration suddenly rises. Editor 3: It looks good, but it's too slow. Editor 4: I feel that New World is becoming more and more perfunctory, and it no longer tells the story of the heroine. I feel that the heroine is almost becoming a marginalized person, and it is getting more and more boring. Here it is.

I will definitely keep this book👣, it is a good book that is worth reading twice or three times. The heroine is really nice and has great love. The author's writing style is very good. Each world is very comfortable to look at. The layout is very big. I will not deliberately try to suppress the original heroine. In this book, I can see the power of women. The original heroines in the small world are also great baby girls. Ah, what impressed me deeply was the small world where I cried and worked hard to become the governor. It was an ordinary sweet novel about campus. I was ready to skip it at first, but the author took it to a new level and really blew it away. The other small worlds are also great and worth recommending👍👍👍. It is my favorite book that I have recently picked up. Fortunately, I didn't miss it.

It's great. The characters are all normal people and feel very comfortable. The first time is more daily and warm, but starting from the second world it feels more passionate. People who like to watch the news may be more emotional. In short, the writing style is very pleasant; the logic is smooth; the plot is interesting; and the viewpoints in the article often give me many new thinking angles. The author has incorporated many of his own opinions, which is a very vivid book. It feels a pity. There are ideas in the later chapters, but the logic and plot have gone downhill. The shocking feeling in the first few chapters is gone, but it is still a very good article. It can be seen that the author wants to do some meaningful things within his ability. I hope the author can protect his sharpness and aura, and can temper his pen to be as sharp as an awl.

I just finished two short stories, so new [crying] The first story is nothing new, it's just a daily routine on campus. If you don't fall in love, your studies will be over! The second story is very interesting, and it would be great to read as a farming infrastructure article. However, the author's heroine is too strong, and she comes with a super knowledge brain plug-in, so the pace of writing fast travel is just right. There is no need for degrading words, it is female-friendly, and the female characters account for a large proportion. It can be regarded as a very comfortable love story. I guess it's not a mission requirement and there won't be any emotional scenes, so it can be treated as a cp-free novel.

I can understand everyone's negative reviews. Personally speaking, this is the author's third female novel (including one that has been discontinued). The author's consciousness is much more advanced than the previous two books, including the use of words (especially in the female novel's world, it can be seen more clearly, and it is not a simple brainless reversal). How can I put it that the copy of the detective has been physically abusing the protagonist? First of all, I felt very frustrated. Especially in the end, the murderer handled him so lightly and did not torture him in detail. I don't understand it. After reading so much, the author should have saved the manuscript for release on a regular basis, so it is unlikely that he wrote it when his consciousness was not so good in the early stage but posted it later. But thinking about the so-called beautiful and tragic stories I read a long time ago, they also tortured the protagonists (both men and women), making readers feel sorry for the characters and resonate with them. So what can I say? I don't think it's just torture for the sake of torture. The rest of the world is also well written, so I'll give it four stars. As a side note, the last article I saw that abused women so much was the game Invasion that was highly sought after by many people. The comments below this one seem to have fans of that one as well. But I gave up on that one (I felt bad for various reasons, including the consciousness and wording). I don't know why, but the physical abuse of the two so-called female villains in that book made me feel more uncomfortable than this one (especially the comparison of the protagonist's attitude towards men), and it seemed more like abuse for the sake of abuse.

The previous world is well written, but the criminal investigation world is really annoying. I haven't watched it for several days, and I just wanted to watch the twist at the end. But it turned out that I was still tortured when I opened it. I really can't do it anymore. I hope readers who have seen the end of this world can tell me the ending in the comment area. Thanks in advance for the kindhearted people, I will run away [crying] One more star will be deducted for the ending [angry]

I have to say that the author's writing is really good about the world where I pursue an honest daughter-in-law. The heroine is definitely a career-setter, and the plot of the small world is also very complete. I can't understand the science and stuff, but I think it's awesome. The female characters in it also have their own thoughts and highlights, and the male characters can only be said to be men. But I didn't like the ending of the world of the detective novel very much. The sanctimonious and heartless detective male protagonist and the parents of those scumbag students didn't seem to get any punishment, but Xia Xia had a headache from the beginning to the end. The female protagonist of the world police officer was also persuaded by that man. Obviously, she was not as likable as the female protagonists in other worlds.

I re-read your new book after reading another heroine book by this author. I really feel the progress of the author's writing. I am very moved by the delicacy of the plot. It is very beautiful. The heroine is a very perfect girl with a delicate and gentle mind. When all living beings have a nightmare and suffering that they cannot wake up from, the heroine opens her eyes and resists everything. Good looking, recommended.

I recommend everyone to read Chapter 149: The world of serial killers in criminal investigation novels [smile] This way you will know the author's amazing writing style [smile]. You will be deeply impressed after reading it and will never forget it [smile]. It will make you have a great desire to express yourself [smile] The heroine killed all the people who bullied her, and the last chapter simply explained the ending. It develops quickly and allows you to understand [smile] The heroine did not die in the ending [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile]

It's really beautiful. I have a sapiosexual love for the heroine [Blow kiss] There is no love or love. Except for the simple study in the first world, the other tasks are all the common people's road. The pattern is very big [Sending my heart] The heroine has changed from the bottom to the person who makes the rules and changes the world. It is really great [Like]

Women are at the center, women are awakening to take power, basically all the men who appear are villains, and the women who appear each have their own way out, Xia Xia is very powerful, she can change her destiny through learning, she does not discredit the heroine of the original plot, and she also pays attention to her wording, the criminal investigation chapter is really like hell is empty and the devil is in the world, Xia Xia's The host's body was destroyed, and she could only endure the pain and find a way to complete the task. At first, she thought Xia Xia was the type of older scientist who was selfless and dedicated, but in the dream world, she realized that she was completing the task. The host asked for an interesting dream, so she set up a trap She has toyed with a wave of people from that world, but at the same time she is very gentle. She will leave study notes for the host and help the original heroine awaken. Her character is unpredictable. In the latest world, the alien race of corpses and humans are occupying the ground, but the world is about to be destroyed by the sun. This time Xia Xia has become the so-called She is a god. She wants to collect willpower. At the beginning, there is no idea that she wants to save the world, but then she asks the ending over and over again if the world will be destroyed. It feels like she is starting to have feelings and will save the world. She wants to move the planet and make it deviate from the destruction of the sun. It's good-looking and the author's writing is good.

It's really good-looking and very deep. Although the first world is a bit middle-of-the-road and ancient, it's different at the same time. There is no conflict between the first and second worlds. The original heroine and the heroine can live in harmony. She broke away from the original plot and lived her own life. The heroine is a kind of fire, bringing hope to every world. I don't know why I'm so touched, and I feel like crying. First world - "If you are good to me, do you want to be together?" -"Are there any benefits to getting married? Why do you have to get married?" -"People always have to get married." "Who stipulated it?" Second world -She can't find Jiang Xia. But this world turns out to be full of Jiang Xia's shadow. Third world -"Tao wood can be cultivated, but it is difficult to cultivate. It needs to be fed with Tao," -Jiang Xia planted Dao wood on Jiang Fuyun's grave. "Mother Queen, let all the students from Wuyou Kingdom come to see you in the future. Everyone will remember you." -The Tao is not hers alone. It is the way of the common people. In this case, the common people should be allowed to join in the infusion.

Tied. Very pretty. Super awesome. No flashpoints. The author's narrative method is quite unique, a bit like the montage method of a movie - quickly editing and splicing the heroine's highlight moments in each world. The reading experience is like watching a condensed version of the trailer. The heroine has a high IQ throughout the whole process, and the people she interacts with are all very good and strive to change the progress of the times, but there are no difficulties, troubles, or unreasonable aspects. The heroine has created super-era work technology in a year or two, or can pass various applications to top schools in just one afternoon. Therefore, the entire writing style is refreshing throughout, and of course it cannot be too sophisticated (•̀⌄•́). The shaping of each world era is actually not entirely up to the reader's imagination. The heroine is too grand, so grand that she looks like a thought and group that progresses in each era. It's like we are previewing that era. The stories of these people are passing by lightly, so quickly, with so many highlights, but also so short and short. There are many interesting ideas and perspectives. If you are not so demanding about plot and emotion, you can try reading this quick travel book. ... Every small world is opening up and going down. Overall, this book "Quick Travel World" has a high start and a low start. Although it will not be so low as to abandon the article, it will still make people feel disappointed in the later stages of reading.

Very nice! No cp + great heroine + healing! A safe work! Let me read the latest chapter directly in one breath! Highly recommended. I haven't seen a work with some thinking and black humor in a long time. It's worth your time.

The writing is super good, especially "I Want to Be the Richest Man" gives people a passionate feeling. Every change of the times is inseparable from reformers and people who bravely try. Come on.

For now, this book really deserves a five-star rating. I think this book is completely a female-oriented novel. Women and women are never antagonistic. When I saw the first world, I was really excited, from the slight female rivalry at the beginning to the awakening in the later period. Secondly, the heroine has a great pattern. I really feel that the rating of this novel should not be so low. Okay, I don't think I can stand it any longer. The content is getting more and more boring. The early part was very exciting, until the psychological chapter started to become foggy, and then to the criminal investigation later, tsk

This book is really nice. The heroine's character and other female characters are well developed. You can see more real and rich female characters in it, rather than "facialized" and molded traditional female characters. It can make people understand that female characters have more possibilities and are not defined. In addition, this book is not a "sexually-transformed" imitation of male videos, nor is it a so-called "heroine" image. It does not shout slogans or preach philosophy or freedom. It just acquiesces that this is how the world works. More importantly, I think the world's concept of women and men should indeed work this way. And I think this book is quite reflective. Many small worlds can be connected with current novels and hot social topics, prompting us to constantly reflect on our previous ideas. Is it correct? Can we make changes? This book is really a rare novel that I have read in all these years! Really well written! ! I hope the author can continue writing! ! We need some inspirers! ! Finally, I wish the author good health and all the best! !

It is a very healing and special novel, but the ending feels a bit abrupt, giving me the feeling that their subsequent story has not yet ended, but they have already jumped to the next small world after turning the chapter. I hope there will be a transition in the sequel, describing Xiaoxia's future or something else.

I was still crying after reading a novel in the middle of the night. It was a masterpiece that was delayed by the ratings. It was a serial murderer in the criminal investigation. It pained me to read it. What a bright future the original heroine should have had. I feel that it is not an exaggeration to come back to that world with the whole world.

! You can completely see the author's progress in the book. The more he writes, the better he gets. Each world also echoes some social issues in real life. From this book, I can see that when the "quick time travel" theme became popular seven or eight years ago, many talented authors emerged. I feel that this author's writing style is very similar to those of those authors back then. He wrote the plot honestly, without any bells and whistles, and did not include random AI clips. The protagonist was strong as long as he said he was strong, and would not lose his abilities inexplicably. He had his own three views and was not sloppy.

What a treasure book (the following review contains spoilers) If the first world of the heroine has a fledgling feeling, then the subsequent world is really full of growth. Each world can well predict the original owner's wishes, and on this basis, the best ending is left for that world. My favorite is the plane of cultivating immortals. I didn't expect that the heroine would directly lead Wuyou Country to open up a new world. It was as if we had seen the future and found a new planet. There is also the interstellar age plane, which puts humans and artificial intelligence as the center, using a small world to point out that artificial intelligence is only a tool to assist human rule and cannot replace humans. When I first saw the world in the dream live broadcast room, it was like watching a debate. The topic of whether reality and dreams coexist was so shocking. The original owner initially made the dream world unpredictable and made more people afraid to dream. It made reality oppose the dream world, and even rose to the level of all mankind. It seemed that the world view became grand. Later, the dream became a compensation for regrets and became full of beauty. I thought the heroine would make this world When the world became full of dream games, the heroine closed the dream with a grand live broadcast and pointed out that it was not the time yet. At this moment, it seemed that the coexistence of the theme between reality and dreams was found. If reality continues and the times continue to develop, when there is no need to worry about productivity and no burden, beautiful dreams have become a reality, and dream games will come to the world again. Really, the author's world view is very large yet very small, there are many very thoughtful places, the sense of substitution is very strong, and a lot of philosophical thoughts are integrated into it. Like like 😍😍😍

Nice. At the beginning, there was a label of academic master. I thought that I would always study, and the first world was indeed a bit like that. The latter subverted my imagination. Science fiction began to change my impression. It was a complete savior. It was so charming. That Eve also touched me very much. The feeling of the dream is very imaginative. I didn't quite understand it in the early stage. But later on, it was okay. The original owner had fun^^. The criminal investigation was so cruel that I kept crying. I wanted to make those people sick after watching it. The ending was indeed a bit frustrating, and the public treated this little girl very poorly. I'm very glad that when I discovered this book, there were already many more authors, so I could read it all at once!

The rating of this book should not be so low. His writing and story structure are very good. If it is included in Tomato's fast-travel novel, it is really good. But when I just read the first two stories, I felt that they were more ordinary. They are some ordinary fast-travel novels, but the writing style is the kind that makes people interested, but the later stories are more It's more interesting. I think the story about the subjugated princess is better in the front. It's quite interesting. Then there's the dream story in the back that's more novel. The most depressing one is the recently updated criminal investigation. But the writing and plot are pretty good. It's worth reading, especially if it's more female-centric. I really recommend reading this.

Overall, it's still very good-looking and a bit refreshing. The female parts are vividly portrayed, the highlights are all female, and the wording is also very careful. The seventh dungeon, which is more controversial, feels different from the overall writing style. Except that the seventh dungeon may be based on cool logic, some of Su's parts are actually the result of the passage of time, but it is fun from beginning to end. He must avenge himself and kill the opponent before others can take action. But the seventh dungeon, emmm, suffered a lot because of what happened to the original heroine. It's already very sad. The part about revenge still uses "the result of the passage of time is that the person died", but how he died and how he was killed are not shown at all. This is also what many readers say is unhappy with revenge, but in fact it feels like the author still uses the previous writing method. It feels like he wants to change the style of writing but has not completely changed. If this copy pays more attention to logic, why It's actually very good that you can rely on your brain to plan when you are already in that situation. Now you are in a miserable situation, but you still make contributions to society with your perseverance. If you don't end up in jail, your brain doesn't have that kind of thinking, and you want to plan a future for the original master, and the original heroine's wish is not revenge. Of course, there is no problem, but the problem is that the original heroine's wish is Revenge + xxxx (spoiler-proof), but the focus is on the hardship of the heroine, the cynicism of society, and in extreme cases, she has made a contribution. To be honest, it is very unpleasant. If the purpose of this copy is that a society ruled by law will no longer punish "innocent" people with death, then at least it must be a social death. If it is the connivance of the detective and the scum raised by bullying parents, will it be like this? Alas, maybe because the core wish of the original heroine is xxxx, and the original heroine is back, they can't do it themselves, but the subsequent social death of them can be left to the public. Doesn't the detective just want reputation? Give him "reputation", and the heroine is beaten by everyone, then let the detective and the bullying parents be beaten by everyone, like street rats, and it is nationwide, isn't this okay? Of course, I can still give full marks to this article overall. After all, it is really good-looking and I like it very much. Even the controversial seventh copy at least moved me, but I am not satisfied with the ending, and I don't think it has risen to the level of the author's "abuse of women." The painful description of the victim, the heroine, is actually to pave the way for the final work and bail, but for the ending Maybe I didn't control the end well, so I still used the previous writing method (it's almost over, and the result comes out directly, but it conflicts with the revenge of this article. Revenge is about the process, it's cool, and the result is more important). If you really mind, you can also skip the seventh copy (the one with the title of Detective). I feel that this is just a lack of control of the rhythm, and there is no need to "avoid lightning".

I thought it was a good read, but the book was too new and the rating was too low. I almost missed it. It was very good-looking, very delicious, the outlook on life was very positive, and the plot did not drag on. It was a very enjoyable article. The second world makes me happy, it is to punish all evildoers! It's so beautiful, the explosion is so beautiful.