Beng Tie: Seeing the Death Star, the Train Crew Fell Silent

It's nice, but a little short, but the author writes it well! It's super good-looking, but I feel like the main character comes a little late, and comes out too suddenly. Although his life experience can be offset a little, it's not that easy to write later [Love]

You're so good-looking, brother, if your waist breaks during a party, it's really not tight [smile]

It's not quite what I thought it would be like in Journey, but the storyline is very well written. What I imagine is the second-generation full-life road star [laughing evilly] "Order" will eventually have flaws, so we must cut them off with this decree! "Memory" will be extinguished in a moment. I respect this decree and cut it off immediately! "Hunting" will only increase the suffering, so we will cut it off as soon as possible according to this decree! "Nothingness" has no space left, so I respect this decree and cut it off! "Opening up" knows that it is impossible, so it respects this decree and cuts it off! "Destroy" the decaying remains, and cut them off in accordance with this decree! "Keep and protect" is sealed in stone for ten thousand years, and in observance of this decree, it will be cut off as soon as possible! There is no limit to the "breeding" evil ocean. We respect this decree and cut it off! "Plenty" overflows the abyss of calamity, and in accordance with this decree, we will cut it off! "Gluttony" will forever be devoured into ruins, and we will cut it off as soon as possible according to this decree! "Happiness" is a drunken dream in the world. I respect this decree and cut it off! The "intellectual" rationale has collapsed, and I will cut it off in accordance with this decree! The "mysterious" Xuan Qiong collapses consciousness, and in accordance with this decree, it will be cut off! "Pure beauty" is so beautiful that it has become silent. I respect this decree and cut it off! "Tongxie" is a cocoon of harmonious law, and we will cut it off in accordance with this decree! "Immortal" Scale Abyss Hengsha, worship this decree and cut it off! "Balance" balance stagnates at the Huanshu, and in accordance with this decree, it will be cut off! The echoes of "the end" will be forever silent, and we will cut them off as soon as we honor this decree! Acknowledge the existence of all fates, but also deny the existence of all fates, just to create an ending that truly changes the end. Something like this [laughing]

The children have added another warrior to the damaged area.

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It's very nice [blowing kiss], keep writing it, and it seems to me to have great potential [note] so don't break your tongue [learned]

Although the ending of each chapter is a bit sloppy, it is inevitable to admit that this is a good book. It's just that the number of words is a bit too small. It ended suddenly. I thought it would be updated to at least 500,000 words. See you in the next book, friends.

What! He turned out to be a half-step star god level powerhouse!

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It's cool, you don't care whether the logic is right or not, and don't care about any unfathomable principles. He can just change the knife into a happy ending. It's completely different from other fan fictions where the protagonist needs to look forward and backward if he wants to change the ending. Therefore, if you want to directly rewrite the ending without going through so many twists and turns, you can buy this book. [Sending Hearts]

Overall, it's a good watch, the plot doesn't get messy, and the characters don't change much. Xing's personality has changed a bit, but not for the worse. The author's writing style is very good. It is not as simple and simple as ordinary novels, and it is not embarrassing to read. It can be rated as a super excellent work (it may not be as exaggerated as I said, after all, people's aesthetics are different. But! I think it is really necessary to read it!!!)

A very good book. When you calm down and feel it, you will find that whether it is the characters, the plot logic, or the descriptive rhetoric, there are also some embellishments and fun, they are all very good. It's a good happy ending article.

It's pretty good, although it's a little short, but overall it looks good. If it can be updated continuously, it should be a good novel.

It's good to watch, especially the chapter about slaying the candle dragon. It's very touching.

It is a work with a background concept. The comprehensive narrative rhythm is slow and interspersed with feature films. The narrative method is similar to Kobayashi's Dragon Maid. The characters' expressions and language are consistent with the original work, but the scene structure is not specific, making it difficult for readers to imagine the complete composition. As a work that is biased towards daily life, the plot creation is appropriate, and dialogue and interaction between characters are used to advance the plot. All in all, the content is vivid and the descriptions are straightforward and very everyday, but the writing style needs to be improved.

It's very good, and it's very yellow [laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Good, good, good

I feel so good-looking [Send heartfelt message]

Very nice but too short

Chef, today's meal doesn't seem very delicious [crying]

It looks good. I thought the author would finally kill the star, but it's a pity. Well

It's beautiful, it's so beautiful, but it just ended. Author, why don't you write more?

The writing is good and the content is pretty good, but it's too short.

Come on, come on, come on, it's so good, I love reading it, but the number of words is a bit short.

Great author, come on! ! ! Very beautifully written

If you want to see Xia Die write about the love affair between Aya and Mao, Mao personally guided Xia Die to write it. Please take a look!

The idea is very good and the imagination is there, but the plot expression is lacking a lot. I don't recommend writing it like this anymore. If I return to the plot, the results will be very good with this trend.

It's very beautiful, very innovative, and the brushstrokes are also very good.

I don't know if the "end" fate path will be added in the later stage?

It's pretty, but it's a bit short and not as sweet as the knife! ! !