hp太好了是dlc我们有救了！

It's a fan-oriented work, so I recommend you read it after reading Huo Yi's complete plot, otherwise you won't get many laughs () The plot is smooth and the order is normal, and the original character creation is also good. There are some foreshadowings, and the daily life is very warm. There should be no emotional lines in the current reading. The writing style and understanding of the characters are slightly lacking in the early stage (may be due to the subjective feelings of the heroine throughout the process), but I gradually became more proficient in it later on. The only problem in the whole text is that the plot is too dense, which caused me to stop tensing up several times in the studio ( Looking forward to subsequent updates!

The author combines Huo Yi with the original work very well, but the protagonist also has his own action trajectory, and the main line is very clear. In the daily part, because the protagonist is too noisy, it has just passed three days. It feels like the third autumn has passed. At the beginning, you must clear the task list (school rules), unlock the forbidden book area, the forbidden forest, and the three-headed dog dungeon. It has only been five days since Dunduoduo met the heroine Vision Tom at the beginning. It was also very funny. Players are the most enjoyable, and Hogwarts is about to undergo major changes. The returning student inherits his legacy and embarks on the road of confrontation with the resurrected senior. The hateful senior dares to covet the player's ancient magic, and the true mage comes to fight [heavy blow]. What school rules, I thought it was a must-do list, what about the Forbidden Forest, the players ran over it like the Universiade, the high-energy Big Dog caused a havoc in Hogwarts, and no one dared to question the player's ability to act! Looking forward to the next branch of Huo Yi, this wave is a shock for repeat students.

HPL is a player protagonist, but it is not the kind of fourth natural disaster type story. The protagonist is mostly warm and friendly to NPCs. Apart from the settings of the game system, the protagonist's external words and deeds are actually more like the indigenous protagonist of HPL. He is mainly a helpful person and has a high emotional intelligence. The plot has only reached the first grade, and I am still looking forward to how it will develop in the future [laughs]

This is what I have been looking for... An HPL fanfic with a relaxed style of writing... The setting is not awkward and is purely funny. I want to confess to you, the author!

The boss writes really well, it tastes delicious, but why is the data not very good? Boss, should you consider adding a few more labels? Let's put the "Fanjin" tag on it. Everyone who comes to HP comes to see the fanfic. By the way, the author jj also has Meimei's works, which are also very good. I seriously support Meimei elbowing Xiaotang to become Professor Figo's favorite student [laughs]

The best Huo Yi fanfic I have found so far integrates well with the original plot of Harry Potter. It neither follows the protagonist as a nanny nor completely ignores the original plot. The protagonist will take some time to care about his friends while having his own school life. The protagonist is a very charming person. Who can not love our Xiaomei! Of course I don't mean that she is a heartthrob. In fact, I want to be friends with Xiaomei. After all, we are both enthusiastic gamers~

Quite pretty. But I'm a little curious, is it "the protagonist thinks the plot is just a game dlc but has actually traveled to the real world but still retains the game system" or "the characters are just game characters with inexplicable self-awareness"? If it's the former, will the protagonist realize that this is the real world in the future? Or should we say that we don't need to be so clear about Kamen Rider. Jpg

It's a very interesting plot, deviating from the original work, but still following the main plot. The protagonist is also very funny. I've read hundreds of hp fics, and this one is really good to read! Highly recommended!

5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️Good reviews! ! ! ! ! HP is so good. DLC can save us! (Tomato) Writing style, lighthearted and funny Rhythm, tight and smooth The heroine, Melissa, Huo Yi's player, Yingyuan Lively and cheerful, he is simply a happy puppy! The first time I broke into the forbidden forest, the eight-eyed spider cub was burned on fire. Saved the invisible beast Breaking into the Forbidden Forest for the second time and saving Roger and his broom Taking Snape's Potions class for the first time, Snape directly deducted the points of the heroine Melissa Yingyingyuan, and the heroine directly slammed the table in protest. Laughing like crazy.

I finally found another copy of Huo Yi. It's written in big letters as if I'm actually playing a game, and the settings are really well connected. Hey [Adoration]! Come on, the food is coming to my mouth soon [I'm full]

It's a very interesting novel😋😋😋The plot is still in the first grade, but the protagonist is so capable of causing trouble that it's not dull at all. The character of the protagonist Xiaomei is very interesting, and the content is quite relaxing (I laugh all the time). It's worth reading. The updates are also very stable. I just hope the author can write more. Come on, author!

Damn it, I really kept crying. I have been pursuing a fanfic that connects the sub-era and Huo Yi, but this kind of subject matter is either too little or discontinued. Finally, on this day, I encountered this destined book. My tears kept flowing. I was so touched. How come the writing style is so interesting and the content is so vivid! Why did we meet so early! Why is it only 100,000 words? Ah, ah, ah, ah, but it doesn't matter. The happiest thing is to follow the serial.

The heroine is controlled by Huo Yi. It looks very good and has the flavor of the Fourth Natural Disaster, but it feels like it is not enough (?). I feel that the players are a little modest and restrained, but not crazy enough. It is very good to watch. I look forward to the follow-up! Because of this book, I downloaded and installed Hogwarts Legacy and am now playing it!

Yes, it's good. The protagonist has a strong sense of immersion. It doesn't feel like he's here to play a game, but like he's here to blend in. It's just that the boundary between games and reality is quite blurry. The image of a player doesn't appear very often. Most of the time, he looks like an aborigine in life, and there are only a few words that appear when playing games. How to say it? The state of playing games with me is different. It's like she really comes here to live.

Ahhhh! This book is so good [crying][crying][crying] OMG, people without computers have never played Huo Yi... I have only read a little bit of the second creation... The protagonist is so interesting and cute! I like it so much! ! ! (Actually, this is to test whether I forgot to add bookshelf and see if I have enough reading time) This is the best and most beautiful HP fanfic I have seen this year [crying][crying][crying][crying] Dear author, please keep updating www. I have to start the daily update routine again (having said that, in fact, I just saw Chapter 57 [crying][crying], and it will be gone soon againwww) Uh-huh, uh-huh, I'm really looking forward to the interaction between the protagonist and other teachers... And other HP characters... (Why do I keep talking nonsense...) I will comment again later and be sure to write QAQ [love] [love] [love] [love] Not good... It's about to tie again [crying][crying][crying] In fact, I kind of want to see Xiaomei's process of accumulating potion/spell proficiency (currently there is only one... And only a little QAQ, but considering that the author has not written much w^w) Will you go back to the orphanage in the future? I didn't go back for Christmas. I thought my friends were so cute [I almost cried] and I was worried that Xiaomei would be excluded. Snape still takes the blame (so funny, so miserable) Well, it's my first time to read such a short series, and it's so painful. I will always support you. Www Editor 2: Hurry up, hurry up, or finish reading by accident [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

Looks good, looks good, says important things three times! I thought I had read all the hp fandoms, but I didn't expect that something slipped through the net! How did I discover this author who is so good at writing about gamer heroines! Next I will follow up seriously

It's really beautiful! ! ! One of the most beautiful Huo Yi players I have ever seen wearing HP is one of my own fans. It blends very well! Moreover, the heroine is not the fourth natural disaster, chaotic evil type, but a kind-hearted Beagle, who is very cute (I don't mean to say that being evil is bad, I just say that the two are different types, and I love both of them!). She also maintains the subtle and refreshing feeling of the game, and does not steal the highlight of the main protagonist group, or abuse the food when she comes up. Of course, she does not feel embarrassed and pretending to be proud. It also combines with the game's own main plot. The jokes are so interesting that I laughed out loud. I really like this kind of light-hearted humor that is neither pretentious nor embarrassing! It tied the knot in one breath. It was delicious and delicious. The only thing I worry about is that the author must not give up! ! Please be sure to keep updating until the end🙏

Very nice! Although it is set in the setting of Hogwarts Legacy, you can still watch it without having played the game! The heroine is such a cute little girl. I feel like she is a little enthusiastic girl. I recommend her!

Whether you've seen Huo Yi or not, you can easily eat it because it's so funny. . . I really like Xiaomei and this kind of writing that breaks the fourth wall. It's great that we can be saved by the DLC!

It's very interesting and easy to understand. Whether you have played Huo Yi or not, it's really funny and I can't stop laughing. The author's writing style is so interesting that I can't stop laughing hahahahaha I like it very much, but it's still a bit short. I'm going to read this one and then read another one by the author. I'm going to catch up on two more books. Come on, author.

It's fun to watch, a fresh hand-written novel, so eh٩(๑^o^๑)۶

It's quite interesting. Many of Huo Yi's little easter eggs are eye-catching. I gave up listening to the book just to see that everyone has already commented on the place where I want to comment. It's like a tacit understanding of knowing a stranger's smile through the screen, hahahaha.

A very smart and lively heroine who looks like a popping candy in the shape of a chocolate frog.

Good-looking fan fiction has two characteristics: 1. It doesn't follow the original plot. 2. The character is not OOC.

The great master will arrive at his loyal Hogwarts today

Although I have never played this game, there will be some people in the comment area explaining the humor and some of the plot. Super love this.

Good looking…good looking…good looking…always love Harry Potter

Huo Yi's writings are few and far between, so eat them and cherish them. I really like the heroine of Magic Pill created by the author, she keeps having hallucinations and jumping and kicking Beagle emoticons [laughing]

The characters in the original work are very restored to the original work, which is eye-catching, and on the basis of respecting the original work, Xiaomei has her own route and action trajectory, and she has her own boss to fight. This is a surprise, and it is very interesting to watch.

The teacher's writing is very cute and does not lose the feeling of the game. Although it is still being serialized, it is already the best article in the Huo Yi series that I have read. Come on, teacher!