Conjuration*******

It's really good to watch. You can see the protagonist's character growth from being frightened and uneasy when he first enters the strange world to gradually making rapid progress and being fearless. He's not a novelist, but he's also invincible. It's good to watch. At present, I have caught up with the latest chapter and have read more than two hundred chapters. I would like to talk about my feelings about this book. In my personal opinion, it is very procrastinating. The next seventy or eighty chapters are all about water. The water country promotes cultivation and international reform. However, both the introduction and the title of this book give people a feeling that the protagonist is powerful and uses the protagonist as the main force to turn the tide. However, the protagonist is not strong so far, and there are very few plots about cultivation and becoming stronger. Instead, it depicts the "face to face" in a rich and colorful way. "The Extraordinary Era is Coming to Global Change", there are basically seventy or eighty chapters on this, one chapter is just over 2,000 words, and I estimate that there will be many, many more chapters that will continue to depict this part of the plot. So how long will it take for the protagonist to become stronger and turn the tide? Is this an article that focuses on the protagonist and the world from the protagonist's perspective, or is it an article that focuses on the protagonist as a key figure, and all aspects of the advent of the extraordinary era? ? ?

The author's idea is quite good. It's equivalent to a detailed mortal perspective on the terrifying road to immortality. If that one is a cool article under the same system, then this one is similar to a mortal's journey to immortality. You need to be patient and read it.

The setting of observing the precepts is simply wonderful. With the help of three or two precepts, it is enough to profile a person's characteristics without resorting to various means to describe them. There may be characters whose personalities and actions are not consistent with the commandments, but in the end the commandments will definitely become the character's natural characteristics, because they cannot be violated. Experts at a certain level will gradually become one with the commandments. Others who cannot keep the commandments will sooner or later become background experience monsters. So far, this book has committed a major taboo in writing, that is, the style is not unified, multi-threaded, writing about other worlds, writing about the main world, and in recent days, there have been signs of writing group portraits. The two-world writing needs to be based on one of them. In it, you also describe in great detail the characters of some non-protagonists and non-supporting characters, and play group portraits. If you continue to write like this, I guarantee that you will collapse

It feels good, the logic is smooth, the struggle of the little people, the carelessness of the big people, the intrigues between people [Thinking] The only thing that doesn't feel good is that the character is too cowardly in the early stage. Once scared, twice scared, three times scared, four times flat. It might be better to change it

The reason why I give it five stars is because I am afraid that some book friends will miss this book because it is a little off-topic. I have always read it to the latest chapter of the serialization, and it has not been linked to the country in any big way. Even because of the cruelty and terror in the other world, there was a slight complaint about the country's practices anyway. But actually, putting that aside and pretending it didn't exist, the book is pretty good. I can't say exactly where it is? Maybe it's the author's good storytelling ability, or maybe it's the precepts in his setting, which is equivalent to a hook, making me worry about whether something will go wrong, right? So I won't say what's good about this book. I'll just say that I, a bookworm of decades, may have merits if I can keep reading.

The training system was officially launched after more than fifty chapters, and the plot gradually got better. The previous ones should all be for foreshadowing, dangers in other worlds and crises brought about by the protagonist in reality. Looking forward to the follow-up

The writing is quite good, and there are no ladybugs or dirty jokes. The protagonist is an ordinary person with some kindness, but it has little to do with the title of the novel. If you see the title of the novel, you can read a few chapters first and wait and see. Among them, the Buddha Mother chapter is quite good.

Although there are still few articles, the score is too low, right? Being so picky as I am, I think it deserves an 8 rating! There are some poisonous points in the early stage, but the impact is not big. In the later stage, it gradually gets better and becomes more and more attractive. See you later!

He took a subtler, more provocative approach. He crafted a post titled: "A message to seekers around the world: The shackles of mortal things have been loosened, and the extraordinary path is right in front of you!" ——Dian!

The subject matter is very novel, and the protagonist also has a reasonable golden finger. I am very curious about how to explain why the protagonist can travel through time. The writing is average to above average. I hope the rating can be higher and there will be more from the author. It's a very good subject matter. At first I thought it would be like Li Huowang, who can't distinguish between reality and another world. But later I found out that it was not the case. The subject matter is very novel, but the more I write, the less and less the role of the protagonist is. When writing supporting characters, I want to highlight the importance and charm of the supporting characters or promote changes in the plot. It is understandable, but there is really no need to write for so long. It is almost 20 chapters. Moreover, I feel that the protagonist's combat power is very low. I finally became stronger, but the combat power is suppressed.

A score of 7 makes sense. The creativity is good, but it's not cool enough. Therefore, many poisonous points appeared, and I personally didn't like the chapters describing foreign countries. So I'll give it a 7.9 At most. I skipped through it, but I couldn't stand it anymore around chapter 150.

It's pretty good. Why is it rated so low and so maliciously targeted? It may be slow to warm up in the early stages and requires patience. But it is also a normal manifestation of an ordinary person suddenly coming into contact with a mysterious power, which is very logical.

It was just average at the beginning, with a bit of a bump... But then it got smoother and smoother, and became more and more exciting. I hope the follow-up will be better, maintain the standard, and not be a hastily completed short article.

Not bad. There is just a question, how do you know that the abilities cultivated in reality will be brought to another world and used for self-protection? How can I be sure that I go to the same different world every time I sleep? If not, why should we practice in this world instead of in another world?

It is really a good book, but the progress of the world view and the protagonist is a bit too fast. If you slow down and polish it a little, it will be a sub-top novel. As a 6000-hour bookworm, they all say the 10,000-hour rule. Plus other platforms, I have also had 10,000 hours of reading. I actually recommend this book to be a really good one.

Now that I have read this, it is really well written. The advantages are probably: The subject matter is very novel. Although this kind of weird cultivation of immortality is considered common, the author has obviously made many small innovations within the big framework, such as the weird spread of different worlds, traveling back and forth, etc. However, I haven't seen the operation of the real state machine so far. I look forward to it. The plot is well controlled. Unlike many books that rely on imagination and novelty for dozens of chapters, it can be seen that the author has clearly clear ideas in this book, so that it does not look too confusing. There are definitely shortcomings, but it's well worth a look.

The author is really good at updating, 5 chapters a day [face covering] As of today, it has been updated to chapter 244. So far, there are no bad points. Generally speaking, it is reasonable. I look forward to the author's continued explosion of updates [Hold]

The training system is very novel and the writing is wonderful.

Great, really great, super invincible and beautiful, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I don't know why there are so many low scores. I think the writing is very beautiful. Every kind of essay is written differently. Why must it be submitted to the country and trust you? You are an uncertainty. I think it is a very nice question. I am not procrastinating. The shortcomings they mentioned are exactly what makes them different from other novels. Why do the countries disagree and their experiences are different? From the protagonist's point of view, he has lived someone else's life and assumed responsibilities. However, they believe that the protagonist is just playing a role without giving anything or even losing. Then why can't we maintain the status quo and control the heresy in our own hands? If so, then I have the final say. In modern society, you have one million more, and big data can find you and arrest you.

The writing is okay, but some of the protagonist's performance and dialogue are a bit exaggerated at the beginning, and the description of the real world is much less later. I hope there is more plot in the real world. The overall concept is quite good.

The beginning is a bit long-winded, but fascinating, but there are bugs in time-traveling, and it is not very reasonable. It would be better if you can think of a more reasonable reason for time-traveling. But it's still pretty good-looking.

Tomato's unique reverse scoring, low-fat, young and brainless people will get high scores, but children will not be able to understand if they are written a little better.

A group of Taoist and Buddhist people deciphering symbols from another world? Just average, it's quite child's play, you can watch it when you're bored.

Very good, come on, when will the protagonist be able to develop a clone or incarnation? One in the modern world, one in another world, and another god in charge of purification and refining. Both worlds are crazy. I feel that both worlds need people or gods in charge of this kind of authority. I like the type of this book very much. The setting is very good. The cultivation system of mantras is rare. I saw the author said that the chapters in the real world have been reviewed, so I will correct them. I can compress the chapters in the real world and concentrate on practicing in other worlds. Didn't I leave a mark on the real world before? , Pay attention to the spirit to develop and strengthen it, and cultivate it into an incarnation. The entire incarnation is in the present world, and the source is in you, which can suppress the extraordinary power. All promotion channels require your consent to ensure the stability of the present world, and then just brush it off and never mention the present world again! I still hope the author can continue writing this book. I really like it [shy] [laughs]

Dear friends, there are not many books that Tomato enjoys reading in one sitting. Although this book has a few chapters, it is good to read.

The first 30 chapters. I thought it was just an ordinary novel. Unexpectedly, the more I write, the better it becomes. . Completely forage. An excellent novel

It doesn't look too serious and looks fine, the category is the fusion of [two worlds + random body-traveling + weird training category + big map + no system, it's like there is an old man's golden finger], I just wrote it and it's a little climax! I'm just afraid of eunuchs, come on, author!

I have read Chapter 81 so far, and the content is acceptable. In the early stage, an ordinary person in a modern city experienced horrible things and developed cowardice and fear. Later, after the Taoist temple, the protagonist also realized that blind fear is useless, and cowardice is useless. He began to add strength to his own life and began to survive. The author's writing skills have made great progress and stirred up the emotions of the audience.

There are some flaws in the middle, but overall it's still good.

It looks good, but why haven't you practiced the Great Sun Golden Light Curse yet [awkward laughter]