Douluo Zhixingyi Asked

Wang Teng, the original successor of Xingyiquan, traveled to Douluo Continent and integrated Xingyiquan with Wuhun. Xingyiquan became the "body": providing the martial arts philosophy, inner cultivation, and foundation for transformation. The God-killing Spear is "used": it provides means of killing, external edge, and the power to break situations. Let's take a look at Wang Teng's story in Douluo

So far, this book seems to be very in line with my taste. Good luck, author, and I hope you are optimistic.

Not bad, pretty good. Suddenly I feel that the protagonist is not sharp enough, and I can't suppress Tang San, especially the writing of this recent game is mediocre. Just respect Tang San over and over again. Isn't it too outrageous for the Clear Sky Hammer to directly raise twenty levels of soul power? To forcefully increase Tang San's combat power, what else can I say? I'll give you two stars [laughs] It was originally an invincible and refreshing novel, but suddenly the protagonist became a green leaf. No matter how strong the protagonist is, the readers focus on Tang San's perseverance and bravery. Why write Tang San so well? Who is the protagonist? Are you dizzy when writing a book? You can make mistakes like this. There is no need to praise the protagonist if you don't oppose him. Can you write more about the protagonist's plot and increase the combat power? If the protagonist is not invincible, he will fight Tang San back and forth. What is the highlight of your book? It used to be so fun to write so much about being invincible, but now it's so messed up, it's really over the top [smiles]