I’m a Guy, So How Did I Become a Loli Immortal Maiden?

Well written, keep up the good work First of all, I really like this kind of subject matter But is the author a boy? I feel that the emotional line is very crude, messy and inexplicable. It fits my stereotype of how many authors of male videos deal with emotions, but it is indeed quite good-looking. I may be a bitch, and I like this type of writing. The shortcomings are obvious, but completion is more important than perfection. I will definitely be able to write more books if I write more. Come on, author. Great! The more I write, the smoother I become.

I feel 🤔 that the problem that other people think is the routine itself. The heroine is licking the dog (she complained about it in the article) and she is also constantly pretending (there are some flaws). The suspense is well set up. Although the combat power is swollen at the beginning, the world view is slowly revealed. Overall, it is still very interesting to watch. (Is it the content that has been corrected? 🤔)

I like Jiang Yan. Can you let him be the male protagonist? I really like him so much. He has to be strong and strong and loyal and loyal. I feel like the protagonist's relationship scenes are so confusing now. Why is he unclear about Chu Chenyi?

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The writing is not bad, but you should state in advance in the introduction whether you are married or single, so that people who come in can be mentally prepared. With this introduction, it looks a bit like being married, or maybe you are tempted and do not choose to be together.

I feel that the protagonist Lu Qing is not a good person. What is the difference between robbing other people's luck through the system and stealing other people's lives? If from the perspective of the villain of the book-traveling family or sect system, the protagonist who travels through the book and robs the luck system should be obliterated.

After chasing it for a long time, the overall plot seems to be too simple. The scene where the villain repeatedly jumps sideways and gets slapped in the face is very uncomfortable to watch, and the combat power is not very rigorous. There are also some bad points in character design that I won't go into details one by one. The above is my personal subjective opinion, and it is impossible for the author to take care of all audiences. However, this book also has many advantages. The main line is clear and the holes dug have been filled. From the beginning to the present, the author's writing style has also improved a lot, and the world view is relatively grand. According to the current plot trend, it is almost in the later stage. It is really hard for the author to update on time three times a day. I will give you a five-star support 👍

At present, it looks like she is getting married The protagonist can switch between male and female, and most of the time he is in a boy's state, but the female protagonist's boy form is no different from that of a girl, and she is basically in a transvestite state. In the plot line, the protagonist is promoted along the way without any big cost or humiliation. The system cheating is not outrageous, but some of the designed villains are really imbecile. The main emotional entanglements with the protagonist are the two male supporting characters, a carefree son of the world, and a powerful and loyal guard. The world view of the whole book is very large, and the combat power is not very broken. The author has a strong ability to control the direction of the plot.

This book is one of the few novels that I have been following. It suits my taste very well. The early pull is not bad, although it is a bit uncomfortable (a bit like chasing my wife in the crematorium), it becomes very enjoyable later on, and the emotional scenes are okay. The aspect of cultivating immortality is also well described. The world view is quite large, there are many exciting plots, and the foreshadowing is just right. In short, I originally read it on the computer and followed more than 200 chapters in one go. Because I couldn't log in to the computer, I specially logged in with my mobile phone account and blew a kiss. I hope the author will continue to work hard 😄 (After reading it for so long, I realized there was no comment 🤦)

The storyline is very bold and refreshing. It's not a cookie-cutter routine, it has both laughs and tears, and you can't guess the direction of development at all. I really love Xu Qing's character design😍, both public and nurturing🤔🤔, it seems that the little girl no longer knows what the world is. Highly recommend everyone to watch it. Finally, I would like to make a wish that Xu Qing and Gu Yinthier should not have a substantial relationship and just be beautiful alone. Otherwise, the children will be destitute of books. It's so painful😢😢😢