How Can I, a Man, Become a Lolita Fairy?

Well written, keep up the good work First of all, I really like this kind of subject matter But is the author a boy? I feel that the emotional line is very crude, messy and inexplicable. It fits my stereotype of how many authors of male videos deal with emotions, but it is indeed quite good-looking. I may be a bitch, and I like this type of writing. The shortcomings are obvious, but completion is more important than perfection. I will definitely be able to write more books if I write more. Come on, author. Great! The more I write, the smoother I become.

I feel [thinking] that the problem that other people think is the routine itself. The heroine is licking the dog (she complained about it in the article) and she is also constantly pretending (there are some flaws). The suspense is well set up. Although the combat power is swollen at the beginning, the world view is slowly revealed. Overall, it is still very interesting to watch. (Is it the content that has been corrected? [Thinking])

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I like Jiang Yan. Can you let him be the male protagonist? I really like him so much. He has to be strong and strong and loyal and loyal. I feel like the protagonist's relationship scenes are so confusing now. Why is he unclear about Chu Chenyi?

I feel that the protagonist Lu Qing is not a good person. What is the difference between robbing other people's luck through the system and stealing other people's lives? If from the perspective of the villain of the book-traveling family or sect system, the protagonist who travels through the book and robs the luck system should be obliterated.

The writing is not bad, but you should state in advance in the introduction whether you are married or single, so that people who come in can be mentally prepared. With this introduction, it looks a bit like being married, or maybe you are tempted and do not choose to be together. The current plot seems to be okay, it's still to my liking, and the writing won't get worse, so I'll continue reading [Thoughts]

This book is one of the few novels that I have been following. It suits my taste very well. The early pull is not bad, although it is a bit uncomfortable (a bit like chasing my wife in the crematorium), it becomes very enjoyable later on, and the emotional scenes are okay. The aspect of cultivating immortality is also well described. The world view is quite large, there are many exciting plots, and the foreshadowing is just right. In short, I originally read it on the computer and followed more than 200 chapters in one go. Because I couldn't log in to the computer, I specially logged in with my mobile phone account and blew a kiss. I hope the author will continue to work hard [laughs] (After reading it for so long, I realized there was no comment [face covering])

It's so good that I've only watched 2/3 of it, but I'm always worried whether Gu Tingyun will kill Yue Shan after knowing the true truth. This sect leader only did this one bad thing, but it turned out to be the most deadly. It feels a bit contradictory to his personal character. He is so kind to his own people but he does this to innocent people. I think it is, uh, a little under-thought. But it's really pretty. There are indeed some poisonous points. Hmm, I didn't have a good handle on the plot.

The storyline is very bold and refreshing. It's not a cookie-cutter routine, it has both laughs and tears, and you can't guess the direction of development at all. I really love Xu Qing's character design😍, Ke Gong Ke Ma [thinking] [thinking], it seems that the little girl no longer knows what the world is. Highly recommend everyone to watch it. Finally, I would like to make a wish that Xu Qing and Gu Yinthier should not have a substantial relationship and just be beautiful alone. Otherwise, the children will be destitute of books. It's so painful [crying][crying][crying]

After chasing it for a long time, the overall plot seems to be too simple. The scene where the villain repeatedly jumps sideways and gets slapped in the face is very uncomfortable to watch, and the combat power is not very rigorous. There are also some bad points in character design that I won't go into details one by one. The above is my personal subjective opinion, and it is impossible for the author to take care of all audiences. However, this book also has many advantages. The main line is clear and the holes dug have been filled. From the beginning to the present, the author's writing style has also improved a lot, and the world view is relatively grand. According to the current plot trend, it is almost in the later stage. It is really hard for the author to update on time three times a day. I will give you a five-star support [like]

Come on, come on, come on, thank you so much. It's great. I want to see the part where Gu Tingyun is about to die and Lu Qingjian's cracks appear. Come on.

In fact, I hope Jiang Yan is another male protagonist. He really makes me cry to death, especially the part about the Eye of Heaven.

From my personal point of view, I think the writing is okay. What does the author say next? Don't mess up. I want to say to those who say that the protagonist is evil: the protagonist is transported from the past, not from the soul, and the original owner is a girl, but the protagonist is a man. As long as he is discovered, it will be a dead end. They (the Lu family) cannot be allowed to believe that a living woman turned into a man. And the heroine doesn't have the power to target those children of luck. Doesn't every child of luck have evil intentions, and then the heroine targets them to steal their luck? The protagonist just wants to live. What's wrong with the cliche plot? Whether you like it or not is up to you. If you don't like it, you can just click the arrow in the upper right corner to exit, and no one is forcing you to watch it. Moreover, there are very few transformation stories, and the plot is inevitably repetitive. Besides, how young is the author? If you become the protagonist, you may not be as good as him. But it is undeniable that there are some surprises, such as the male protagonist (original) kissing the protagonist's puppet, the male protagonist and the Lu family's god son forcibly losing their minds. I hope the author can work hard and don't give up! ! !

At present, it looks like she is getting married The protagonist can switch between male and female, and most of the time he is in a boy's state, but the female protagonist's boy form is no different from that of a girl, and she is basically in a transvestite state. In the plot line, the protagonist is promoted along the way without any big cost or humiliation. The system cheating is not outrageous, but some of the designed villains are really imbecile. The main emotional entanglements with the protagonist are the two male supporting characters, a carefree son of the world, and a powerful and loyal guard. The world view of the whole book is very large, and the combat power is not very broken. The author has a strong ability to control the direction of the plot.

The heroine must always be stylish [crying]

Personally, I quite like this type of article. It would be more interesting if the ending of the marriage change was real [laughing]

Nice! Is this a double-male story? [Thinking] [Thinking] Will the protagonist be with Gu Tingyun [Thinking] I hope that the follow-up plot will not abuse Lu Qing. I still feel that the writing is a bit frustrating.

This is the first time I have seen such a well-written novel on this subject. I really want to see the male protagonist regret it. Author, you must keep playing! ! ! Why do such a beautiful book have such low reviews? The author writes so beautifully, the writing style is humorous and interesting, and there are some emotional lines. It feels like watching a small animation, which is very able to attract the reader's attention. Anyway, I enjoyed it. [The magic work of bird food][The magic work of bird food][The magic work of bird food][Bookshelf plus one][Bookshelf plus one][Bookshelf plus one][Top post]

Now that I've read it, it's really a great book. It's so exciting and the emotional line is so exciting! But the relationship line is too delayed. When will the two protagonists fall in love instead of just having unrequited love? (Os: I think this is a cool article, but the setting and description are pretty good. It doesn't feel mindless. It's worth reading!)

Overall, it's okay. I can give it an 8.0 Because the content in the back is more exciting than the highlights in the front and the world view is huge. The previous plots where the protagonist is a dog licker are not very good, and there are also sly descriptions, which are a bit cheap. The cannon fodder and the character's actions are too cliché, but it is still okay if it is interesting. However, the plot in the back is full of ups and downs, much better than the previous one, and makes people want to stop. It's still ok, I hope the author can get closer.

I like it so much, wc is so appetizing😋😋😋 I really like this Jiang Yan ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh "Jiang Yan, the Sword Immortal of the Dao of the Red Dust. In the Immortal Realm of Creation, he is the number one being on the list of geniuses." 😋😋😋😋😋😋😋🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

Male protagonist: Hatred arises out of love, but in the end it was discovered that it was just a misunderstanding. She never sent anyone to destroy her family, but she hurt her like this because of one word. When she wanted to make up for it, she regretted it. Protagonist: As a time traveler, the system tied him to the male protagonist. If the male protagonist dies, he will die. After discovering that he can suppress other children of luck to gain luck, buy things in the mall, and change the male protagonist's favor to gain points, he decided to let...

I don't know if there will be an emotional line in the end. Now that I have read more than 350 chapters, I feel that it is mainly written about Gu Tingyun's emotional line. It is very sweet. I really hope that the couple will achieve success in the ending. [Thinking] I have relatively few feelings about the part about cultivating immortals, but I can see that I have my own ideas. The main reason is that cultivating immortals with system texts is generally not that easy to write. I can only say that the common problem of system texts is that the lower limit is very high and the upper limit is very low.

The story told in this book is very attractive to me, but I feel that the connection of the plot is not very good. It is a bit fast and there is no transition. Five stars support the author [like]

I hope Qing'er is still ruthless. Being ruthless does not mean being emotionless. Please don't forget that you are a boy. Please don't forget your original intention. Perhaps in order to survive, you may have made various changes in the beginning. In the latest chapter, Qing'er is still the original it, it is still ruthless, it is still a Demon Ancestor who plays with emotions, but it is not the same as when he first time traveled...

Give Jiang an extra ending, it's really great

No, author, what do you want me to say? It's just that feeling. I feel uncomfortable for a day if I don't watch it, and I feel uncomfortable for a day after watching it [grievance]

It's good to watch. I feel that Jiang Yan and Gu Tingyun are both very good. What happened to Destiny Child in the later stage? It's so funny haha. I feel that the plot of the protagonist is also quite enjoyable. There are many slap-in-the-face plots and many highlights.

Look! [Admiration] Just don't change into a girl. Well, it's pretty good and interesting.

This is supposed to be the main character changing into a single. The change is so popular that I like it.