Watching the girl he'd pursued for three years gradually turn into a gold digger, willingly falling into the arms of a rich playboy, Li Che was so angry he laughed.
Wanting to get out and clear his head, he bought a few cans of beer and went to an empty park.
As the alcohol gradually numbed his nerves, he came to terms with it.
Just as he was about to get up and leave, a cool, aloof figure appeared under an umbrella...
Qin Yu: "Why are you drinking?"
Li Che: "Because the girl I like doesn't like me."
Qin Yu: "Then why do you like her?"
Li Che: "?"
Hey, girl, are you picking a fight with me?
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The first day of military training.
Li Che showed up on the sports field eating watermelon, ready to tease the underclassmen at military training.
But to the shock of all the freshmen, Qin Yu, already voted the incoming class's campus belle on the forums, walked right up to him, took his watermelon, and started eating as if nobody else were there.
I have finished reading the three golden chapters. As a novice author who is browsing the works to study, I also learned a lot this time. (Novice comments without permission, feel free to scold) 1. The most important thing in writing a novel is to be clear and organized. Each sentence has a purpose: to explain information, transitional sentences, and after explaining what you have done, you must write down the motivation for doing it!!! At this point, I am also lacking, so I need to pay more attention. 2. Don't be too flat when describing important emotions. Use more pen and ink. You must try every means to let readers understand the character's current mood. When writing a novel, you must try your best to increase the reader's sense of involvement and describe the protagonist's psychology more. I understand. 3. Use more language to describe the protagonist's personality. From the protagonist's performance in the current three chapters, I saw an enthusiastic, dedicated, and somewhat stupid high-tech protagonist. However, I did not feel his character from the protagonist's language description. Although the incident is special, I should pay attention to it. Final digression Alas, I find that I am a sharp-edged person. I can only learn the most when I criticize others. It is useless to criticize others for their learning. I still want to learn more by commenting on other people's novels. Not only is it more attractive to me, but it also makes me more suitable for these novels that are relatively young but have some experience, so that I won't be too obsessed with the plot and learn too little.
It's quite good. I almost let myself, a goblin, take over the role after watching it. It also made me realize the importance of modeling😢
It's nice. It turns out that this book's sales are so poor. No wonder I stopped updating for more than ten days.
Very well written ദ്ദി ˉ͈̀꒳ˉ͈́ )✧The writing style is very delicate