Tracks Across Shanghai

A great book with potential. It is rare to see a novel that devotes a lot of space to writing about the life of the lower class. The author has worked very hard on the details. Through the plot of polishing the text of the heroine, it seems that the author's intention in writing this novel can be seen. The common people in Shanghai during the Republic of China were in poverty. The various aspects of life described by the author are depressing, but also make people see hope and excitement.

It's very good-looking, there's no exaggerated cheating, the heroine's intelligence and forbearance and the various characters of her family and neighbors are all very vividly written. Did the author forget to write that the heroine received a royalties of ¥250? Why are you still worrying about the money to move a house at 36????

It is a rare good book. It has the feeling of being told eloquently. I don't want to give it up. However, the repetition of text and the procrastination of the plot really affect the reading. I don't want to have bad guesses that it was written by AI, so I still hope that the author will think about it carefully and not ruin his hard work.

To be honest, the writing style is not bad, but the author inserts too many personal opinions. Basically, one or two chapters are about sighing and awakening, and it is still a long article, which is a bit tiring to read. The article about Shanghai in the Republic of China is a bit unspecific, and the characters are a little thin. Overall, it is much better than a verbal novel, and it is still worth reading.

It is very realistic, close to the life of the people at the bottom of the Republic of China, and the characters are very vivid. The heroine's father is an ordinary person, traditional, hard-working, with limited abilities but responsible, the mother is tough and careful and loves her children (after giving birth, she blamed herself for spending a lot of money, was powerless, guilty, but tried her best), the heroine is rational, patriotic, hard-working, sober, capable, compassionate, good at observing, and sometimes has a kind-hearted mentality, but reason will stop her. The heroine's family is working together to stay alive and have a better life. No one is holding back, everyone is working hard to survive. (Especially the role of the father is very impressive. He is old-fashioned but loves his family. He is a traditional male chauvinist. He gives money to the family and works hard for the family. He has ideals (want to buy a car) but is still the backbone of the family despite his limited ability. Sometimes he regrets and expresses his anger. The sorrow of the poor) There are good and bad neighbors around the heroine, but they all have their own characteristics. The old couple never give up and support each other. The high-spirited young man Ah Cheng gradually turns into a taciturn. The capable old lady who has lived here for decades tries her best to help the neighbors when they are in trouble. The tragic fate of the selfish brother-in-law who was eventually betrayed. The college gentleman was impressed by the heroine's love for learning. The novel is full of interactions, more like a group portrait novel. The heroine's writing is also full of details. I have read many other novels where the heroines write articles, but they are all based on imagination and do not observe the real world like the heroine does. So far, I haven't seen the common cheats (space, system), bloody plots: real and fake daughter, young marshal, studying abroad, pretending to be a pig to eat a tiger, green tea, concubine, female rivalry (two women fight to the death for a man), gorgeous descriptions: such as peerless appearance, figure and so on. The plot doesn't have any sadistic slaps in the face or stupid dialogue, it's not a group favorite, it's not a sad story. The heroine is not aggrieved (personal feeling), but it is not a pleasant novel either. The heroine is constantly striving for self-improvement, but she has little strength, so she cannot defeat gangsters. The heroine is not the strongest in the whole story, but she is always growing. There is no instance of the same mistake being made. I'm not sure how much of the novel contains femininity, but it's definitely not masculine. This is by far the most life-like novel I have ever read. At the same time, it is recommended that the author can add more female characters. If the follow-up is maintained (CP is recommended, but do not have a greasy male protagonist, do not affect the main line (the female protagonist's career), I hope it is a like-minded male protagonist who has similar ideals and works together), I recommend everyone to take a look, it's really easy to empathize with.

The author writes the characters very well, and I can feel that there is a sense of compassion for many ordinary little people and ordinary citizens in this book. For example, Zhaodi may be a bit vain. Who was not vain when she was young and didn't want others to look down on her? In the eyes of some readers, Zhaodi is actually a particularly evil character, but in fact she has done nothing bad, and she hasn't done anything bad at all. I just want to make my life better. Another example is that father. He is indeed a big talker, and he cannot hold up the wall and has so many children, but you cannot look at him outside the limitations of this era. I think the overall writing is very good, and in the later stage, I hope it will be cp-free and patriotic.

The writing is very in-depth, but not obscure. It can be seen that the author is really serious and attentive in writing this article. I hope the author will continue to work hard and update it quickly 🤭 The heroine in the whole novel is not that kind of golden finger, not the kind of refreshing novel that opens the eyes of the world. Through the heroine's own efforts, even a small person wants to use her own abilities to contribute to that era. The description of the little characters is very detailed, the writing is concise, the logic is clear, and the words flow smoothly. Recommended by a bookworm of more than ten years, it is one of the best in this genre.

Updated to chapter 103, with a score of 9.9. ✅The writing style is too delicate. Although the heroine has traveled to the 1930s, in the grand background of the times, the heroine does not have the sobriety and aloofness to understand the development of history. A person's strength is so strong yet so fragile. He can only continue to grow and expand as the wheel rolls forward. The character of Father Chen makes people both angry and loved. He has no culture, no experience, and no understanding of national beliefs. He relies solely on his brute force to work at the bottom, just to support his family. I always get angry when he can't control his mouth and wants to show off, and I'm also moved by the fatherly love he shows when he clumsily makes a desk. Wang Zhaodi, in that era, there were a lot of girls with ordinary names. She was vain and unpopular, and she tried hard to live a good life, but she was forced by the times, traditional family, and hateful father to embark on a road that was never happy. Even from the perspective of others, her life and her biography can only be titled "Sell". Mr. Shen and Chen Tiesheng are representatives of progressive thinkers who have awakened in an era. They may suffer more than those who only work to make a living for their families. In the days when your stomach is not full, you first have abundant spiritual beliefs and are willing to fight for an uncertain future. ❌Some paragraphs are too long

The fireworks of the Republic of China were very strong, and the knowledge of the time-travelers was slowly revealed, unlike some who made a fortune in two or three days. This reader likes this kind of fireworks of the Republic of China.

The subject matter is quite good. It can be seen that the author really wanted to write about the lives of the people at the bottom of that era. The writing is indeed very good. But to be honest, a lot of the nervousness in my heart is because the heroine has not rented a house yet. You said before that you asked grandma to find a guarantor. Okay, I endured it. I thought about it and it was almost over. When I saw the back, uh😓, I haven't seen the house yet! You have saved so much material and money, why haven't you looked at the house yet?! What do I ask?! One thing after another happened, and I looked forward to moving again and again. What's wrong?! I know you want to write this map, but you still don't rent a house. The readers are unsure. I'm anxious. Even if you don't rent a house at this stage, you should at least see achievements, not actions. Describing the urgent situation and nervous psychology in a large space is like being about to take the college entrance examination. I feel extremely nervous, but I play with my mobile phone as soon as I sit down at the table.