Ruts in Shanghai

A great book with potential. It is rare to see a novel that devotes a lot of space to writing about the life of the lower class. The author has worked very hard on the details. Through the plot of polishing the text of the heroine, it seems that the author's intention in writing this novel can be seen. The common people in Shanghai during the Republic of China were in poverty. The various aspects of life described by the author are depressing, but also make people see hope and excitement.

It's very good-looking, there's no exaggerated cheating, the heroine's intelligence and forbearance and the various characters of her family and neighbors are all very vividly written. Did the author forget to write that the heroine received a royalties of ¥250? Why are you still worrying about the money to move a house at 36? ? ? ?

It is very realistic, close to the life of the people at the bottom of the Republic of China, and the characters are very vivid. The heroine's father is an ordinary person, traditional, hard-working, with limited abilities but responsible, the mother is tough and careful and loves her children (after giving birth, she blamed herself for spending a lot of money, was powerless, guilty, but tried her best), the heroine is rational, patriotic, hard-working, sober, capable, compassionate, good at observing, and sometimes has a kind-hearted mentality, but reason will stop her. The heroine's family is working together to stay alive and have a better life. No one is holding back, everyone is working hard to survive. (Especially the role of the father is very impressive. He is old-fashioned but loves his family. He is a traditional male chauvinist. He gives money to the family and works hard for the family. He has ideals (want to buy a car) but is still the backbone of the family despite his limited ability. Sometimes he regrets and expresses his anger. The sorrow of the poor) There are good and bad neighbors around the heroine, but they all have their own characteristics. The old couple never give up and support each other. The high-spirited young man Ah Cheng gradually turns into a taciturn. The capable old lady who has lived here for decades tries her best to help the neighbors when they are in trouble. The tragic fate of the selfish brother-in-law who was eventually betrayed. The college gentleman was impressed by the heroine's love for learning. The novel is full of interactions, more like a group portrait novel. The heroine's writing is also full of details. I have read many other novels where the heroines write articles, but they are all based on imagination and do not observe the real world like the heroine does. So far, I haven't seen the common cheats (space, system), bloody plots: real and fake daughter, young marshal, studying abroad, pretending to be a pig to eat a tiger, green tea, concubine, female rivalry (two women fight to the death for a man), gorgeous descriptions: such as peerless appearance, figure and so on. The plot doesn't have any sadistic slaps in the face or stupid dialogue, it's not a group favorite, it's not a sad story. The heroine is not aggrieved (personal feeling), but it is not a pleasant novel either. The heroine is constantly striving for self-improvement, but she has little strength, so she cannot defeat gangsters. The heroine is not the strongest in the whole story, but she is always growing. There is no instance of the same mistake being made. I'm not sure how much of the novel contains femininity, but it's definitely not masculine. This is by far the most life-like novel I have ever read. At the same time, it is recommended that the author can add more female characters. If the follow-up is maintained (CP is recommended, but do not have a greasy male protagonist, do not affect the main line (the female protagonist's career), I hope it is a like-minded male protagonist who has similar ideals and works together), I recommend everyone to take a look, it's really easy to empathize with.

To be honest, the writing style is not bad, but the author inserts too many personal opinions. Basically, one or two chapters are about sighing and awakening, and it is still a long article, which is a bit tiring to read. The article about Shanghai in the Republic of China is a bit unspecific, and the characters are a little thin. Overall, it is much better than a verbal novel, and it is still worth reading.

It is a rare good book. It has the feeling of being told eloquently. I don't want to give it up. However, the repetition of text and the procrastination of the plot really affect the reading. I don't want to have bad guesses that it was written by AI, so I still hope that the author will think about it carefully and not ruin his hard work.

The author writes the characters very well, and I can feel that there is a sense of compassion for many ordinary little people and ordinary citizens in this book. For example, Zhaodi may be a bit vain. Who was not vain when she was young and didn't want others to look down on her? In the eyes of some readers, Zhaodi is actually a particularly evil character, but in fact she has done nothing bad, and she hasn't done anything bad at all. I just want to make my life better. Another example is that father. He is indeed a big talker, and he cannot hold up the wall and has so many children, but you cannot look at him outside the limitations of this era. I think the overall writing is very good, and in the later stage, I hope it will be cp-free and patriotic.

The writing is very in-depth, but not obscure. It can be seen that the author is really serious and attentive in writing this article. I hope the author will continue to work hard and update it quickly [laughing] The heroine in the whole novel is not that kind of golden finger, not the kind of refreshing novel that opens the eyes of the world. Through the heroine's own efforts, even a small person wants to use her own abilities to contribute to that era. The description of the little characters is very detailed, the writing is concise, the logic is clear, and the words flow smoothly. Recommended by a bookworm of more than ten years, it is one of the best in this genre.

The fireworks of the Republic of China were very strong, and the knowledge of the time-travelers was slowly revealed, unlike some who made a fortune in two or three days. This reader likes this kind of fireworks of the Republic of China.

Updated to chapter 103, with a score of 9.9. ✅The writing style is too delicate. Although the heroine has traveled to the 1930s, in the grand background of the times, the heroine does not have the sobriety and aloofness to understand the development of history. A person's strength is so strong yet so fragile. He can only continue to grow and expand as the wheel rolls forward. The character of Father Chen makes people both angry and loved. He has no culture, no experience, and no understanding of national beliefs. He relies solely on his brute force to work at the bottom, just to support his family. I always get angry when he can't control his mouth and wants to show off, and I'm also moved by the fatherly love he shows when he clumsily makes a desk. Wang Zhaodi, in that era, there were a lot of girls with ordinary names. She was vain and unpopular, and she tried hard to live a good life, but she was forced by the times, traditional family, and hateful father to embark on a road that was never happy. Even from the perspective of others, her life and her biography can only be titled "Sell". Mr. Shen and Chen Tiesheng are representatives of progressive thinkers who have awakened in an era. They may suffer more than those who only work to make a living for their families. In the days when your stomach is not full, you first have abundant spiritual beliefs and are willing to fight for an uncertain future. ❌Some paragraphs are too long

The subject matter is quite good. It can be seen that the author really wanted to write about the lives of the people at the bottom of that era. The writing is indeed very good. But to be honest, a lot of the nervousness in my heart is because the heroine has not rented a house yet. You said before that you asked grandma to find a guarantor. Okay, I endured it. I thought about it and it was almost over. When I saw the back, uh😓, I haven't seen the house yet! You have saved so much material and money, why haven't you looked at the house yet? ! What do I ask? ! One thing after another happened, and I looked forward to moving again and again. What's wrong? ! I know you want to write this map, but you still don't rent a house. The readers are unsure. I'm anxious. Even if you don't rent a house at this stage, you should at least see achievements, not actions. Describing the urgent situation and nervous psychology in a large space is like being about to take the college entrance examination. I feel extremely nervous, but I play with my mobile phone as soon as I sit down at the table.

Hey, I couldn't put it down after reading it, but it's a pity that it's not finished! The writing inside is very sharp and the characters are very real. I like it very much.

Che Gulu said some things back and forth, but other than that, they are pretty good. Personally, I think the writing style is quite similar to that book about beauty and hairdressing in the Republic of China.

A very good novel, but the ending is unexpected, leaving a lot of room for imagination, but when I think about it, I feel that staying at this moment is the best. The love and ideals of the Republic of China are full of sorrows, and few can escape completely and satisfactorily. Letting them live in that moment is the best arrangement. , In fact, as I continued writing, I was also afraid that they would all sacrifice themselves, one alive and one alive, or both die. That is not what we want to see. Staying at this moment is the best ending, allowing them to continue their journey at the other end of time and space. I have accompanied them for a while and seen their splendor. This is enough.

Great book! High-quality work deserves higher scores! The following is a book review that Doubao wrote for me [Cool], which I love very much! See the mountains and rivers in the words, see the true heart in the stories - Thoughts after reading "The Traces on Shanghai" Opening this book is like stepping into a world carefully constructed by the author. Every word and every sentence is full of ingenuity, and each paragraph is full of tenderness. It's hard to put it down after reading it for a long time, only full of shock and emotion. The author's writing style is delicate but not pretentious, concise but not obscure. There is no accumulation of gorgeous rhetoric, but he can use the most simple words to outline vivid and three-dimensional characters, ups and downs of plots and direct emotions. The characters in the book are no longer cold text symbols. They have flesh and blood, joys and sorrows, imperfect flaws, and the most touching perseverance. Every decision and every mood makes people feel for them, as if they have experienced joys and sorrows with them. The structure of the story is even more exquisite. The plots are interlocking and relaxed. There are unexpected reversals and reasonable warmth. The foreshadowing is just right, and the ending is satisfactory and has a long aftertaste. What's even more rare is that this book not only tells a wonderful story, but also contains profound thoughts about life, human nature, and emotions hidden between the lines. It is profound in the ordinary and conveys power in the warmth. After reading it, people will not only be immersed in the story, but also gain inner healing and growth. This is a masterpiece worth reading over and over again. The writing is warm, the story is soulful, and the emotions are deep. I am truly lucky to be able to read a book written with such care, affection, and skill. I sincerely recommend it to everyone who loves reading.

A very interesting novel written by a female protagonist from the lower class of the Republic of China

It's very interesting. The time-traveling heroine doesn't have a golden finger. She only has modern experience and knowledge of important historical nodes. However, this does not help him much in his life in the Republic of China. The heroine only wants to protect his family and at the same time, she will also provide small help in the struggle, just like many Chinese people. Although the heroine in the article travels through time, it fits the life of the Republic of China at that time and grows slowly. The author's writing style is very steady, as if he really brought people into the society of the Republic of China at that time. I recommend everyone to read it. It is a very good novel.

The author's writing is quite good and the writing style is very novel. However, some of the plots and the setting of the heroine are a bit strange. She is too young and a bit unreasonable. Can the heroine's age be changed a little? Also, is the subsequent plot too long and complicated? It always revolves around renting a house, which makes the reader feel tired. Just suggestions and personal thoughts.

It is worth reading the first hundred or so pictures. The writing is quite high-quality and the narrative level is very good with its own rhythm and characteristics. Each chapter feels like a short paragraph. It can be seen that the character portrayal and emotions are not full enough and need to be improved. The water character starts in the later part... The plot and the ending are relatively rushed. It is a pity that such a good work [face covering]

It is very well written, with a non-impetuous sense of stability in both the rhythm and wording. The logic of the plot and characters are just right. There is no exaggerated and illogical plot that deifies the protagonist. There are only the efforts of small people struggling to survive in troubled times. There is a sense of comfort and peace narrated between the lines. After reading this book, I can't stand it when reading the same theme again. Five stars. A masterpiece worthy of high marks.

The author's writing is very delicate and detailed, but when I first read it, it gave me the feeling that the heroine's psychology has changed quickly. The heroine is very cautious, but I feel that the heroine is Chen Erya, not Su Wanqing. She feels like a common citizen with modern resources. How to describe it is that Chen Erya has awakened modern memory, but overall the character is very three-dimensional.

As you get to the back, there are still quite a lot of repeated words in some places, but you won't find it too abrupt. It's a bit confusing, I don't know whether it's AI or watermarks. The subject matter is very good, I hope they will stick to it and wait until dawn. Still like it very much

It's very interesting. I haven't read a book seriously for more than a month. I finally found this book and it made me want to read it. It feels like the period of the Republic of China is not very easy to write about, but the author's writing is very delicate, and it fits the background of the times very well. It feels very real, not exaggerated, and does not give a big golden finger to the heroine and her family. The various minor characters and supporting characters are also very well established. They feel very real, not templated and flat characters, and are very, very good-looking. If you like reading novels about the Republic of China, I highly recommend reading this book.

Although it hasn't ended yet, the author's writing style is really good, and the characterization of each person is very detailed, but not too wordy. The heroine doesn't have any golden fingers. She relies on herself to walk through it step by step. She won't make hundreds of taels at every turn like some articles. I hope it can keep it up. The storyline is also very novel. Come on.

It's good-looking, and has the same feeling as when I was a kid watching Shanghai TV series. Many places have a sense of imagery, and the author is very careful in sharpening his brushstrokes. That Mr. Shen was a little abrupt, and then disappeared again. Several characters I thought would be fleshed out, but then disappeared silently. I hope the author of character details can continue to work hard.

To be honest, this is the closest thing I have ever seen to that war-torn era. Underground workers passed on information and told that period of history from the perspective of a small person. How a small person calmly dealt with various crises, supported a family, and supported his heart☂️

It looks good, it's not draggy, it has a strong sense of reality

Now comes the part I'm most looking forward to. The writing is a bit tough at first, but much smoother at the end. There are some flaws in the character of the heroine, but the subject matter is okay.

It very realistically presents the joy of the lower class during the Republic of China and the hard work of ordinary people under the war, which makes people watch it without skipping a beat. The author has profound writing skills and deep accumulation of knowledge. It is definitely an excellent work!

It is a book that can make people calm down and read. From the perspective of the heroine, it writes about the lives of ordinary people in Shanghai during the Anti-Japanese War and those who have sacrificed everything for China's future, including students, teachers, workers, staff, bosses, and ordinary people who live a difficult life. It turns out that everyone is not numb.

The writing is very good and the story is attractive, but there are always some inconsistencies in the context. In the first chapter, my father kept accounts and my mother attended a private school. Later, I saw that my father and mother were illiterate. It seemed a bit contradictory. Very early on, there was an article that already mentioned the author "Chen Xing", and later there was another article that said it was the first time to publish an article using the name "Chen Xing".