This is my first book, so it will definitely have plenty of flaws. Feel free to tear it apart ( •́ω•̀ ) [Cultivation story with two female leads] Cute, innocent little white rabbit VS clingy, scheming big bad wolf
Su Xiaoli transmigrates into a book. How? It happens in the first chapter. After she transmigrates, she gets a System and thinks she's about to take off, only to find that she has no spiritual roots and is a beggar. The first mission from this damn System is to enter the Qingyun Sect and stay there for three days. Since she hasn't become a disciple, Su Xiaoli sneaks into the Qingyun Sect, planning to find somewhere deserted to spend the three days. Instead, she's discovered by a woman as cool and ethereal as an immortal. The woman is also a Mahayana cultivator. I thought I was about to get sent back to the start, but then, for some reason, she says she wants to take me as her disciple. Next thing I know, we're sharing a bed. Could this wicked woman have taken a liking to me?
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This book is a cookie
It really looks good and suits my taste. But can you add more punctuation marks in some places? It sounds a bit weird when connected in some places.
It's so cool, but it's a little bit shy 😳
There's a Zu Li next door 🤭
Come on, author 😊 Very interesting
There are some small bugs, but they don't affect
Nice! Tasty! So sweet too! Keep up the good work, the author [sending my heart] [sending my heart]
It's very beautiful, thank you to the author