I'm Lucky to Come to This World and Meet You

New writers don't write books to make money. It feels good, please comment more, discuss it and I will see how to change the plot next, so I will write it like this. I will refer to it.

The content is okay, the character of the protagonist is vivid and vivid, and the overall feeling is very good

It can be a very good solution @pikachu in fairy tale town Don't do it. Some readers are just for Xiao Lai if they delete the plot. If you delete it, you will lose people. It will be worse than now. The gimmick of the two female protagonists has already come out. It will be a poisonous point to write the story later. It will be more disgusting than Chen Hansheng. The male protagonist can really be the link to create a bond between the two female protagonists and finally have a happy ending for the whole family. There is no need to keep hiding. In fact, let the two heroines come into contact directly. The relationship has not been confirmed yet. You are almost going to be with Xiao now. It is really poisonous for you to turn around and say that you want to cut off the plot and Shen Fa [crying] [crying] I suggested before that if I knew this, I would just talk about each character. Don't write it like this.

Take both of them, don't let them suffer, they both need to be fine

It's pretty good. As a new writer, it's already great to be able to write this kind of effect. There are just some areas that need to be improved to make it comfortable to read.

I've read it three times. The characters are well drawn. If possible, I'll write a song for Xiao Yu'er.

Pretty cool, I guess Chen Gou. . . Well, although he is a scumbag, his emotional intelligence is not that low. . .

It's pretty, I like it better

There's candy and a knife, it's time to explode

Okay, pretty good-looking

More and more good-looking things to watch

Come on, there are not many people writing about this fanfic, I think this one is pretty good.

It's beautiful. Good luck to the author. You must make up for your regrets [crying][crying]

It's quite interesting, but the key is that Chen Gou's description is not particularly good, and his character is not reflected. I hope the author can work harder.

Can the author make Xiao Rongyu the protagonist?

I'm stuck. I'm sending a signal. It suddenly stopped. I feel very uncomfortable.

Very well written, I hope the male protagonist wakes up I like Youchu, I hope the author writes well