Football: Twilight of Melo, New King Crowned

The writing is very good. It is a football article that is different from traditional systematic football articles. The protagonist also has a certain growth process. What I personally feel is different from other system football articles: 1. There is no data panel, which allows the protagonist's abilities to have a certain range of changes and room for improvement. There will be no such poor performance as high-powered offensive values ​​(such as Melo at the peak) but being defended without scoring, which can easily lead to debates among readers. ; 2. Some of the skills or medals given by the system are mostly to improve personal physical or mental quality or improve football-related abilities. They will not directly quote the personal signature skills of some football stars. This can appropriately lower the psychological expectations of readers and prevent the feeling of a gap where the signature skills are not discovered despite excessive expectations. Finally, I hope the author will continue to work hard! Bring readers more wonderful reading experience [blowing kiss]

It looks good, is well written, and satisfies the feeling of satisfaction. After the protagonist logs into the first team, he immediately takes off. It can be said that one person shouldered the downward trend of the Red Devils and took him flying directly. It looks very comfortable and does not stress the combat power. Come on, it will be more exciting if it is updated directly... [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

High-quality fine grain, delicate description There are the usual joys of football literature, the joy of scoring a goal, and detailed descriptions of daily life. However, the proportion of daily space is too large, and it feels like it has almost increased to 30% now. It is full of flesh and blood, the tricks are not too big, and the protagonist also has powerful talents [shy] It has become a common problem. Starting without the protagonist, the team cannot survive. He averages two goals per game, which gives the protagonist the light. It is so dazzling. Judging from the performance of the protagonist, it is already comparable to Cristiano Ronaldo and Messi. Later on, it was probably the situation that turned the tide, and the focus became lower. And I also discovered a problem, that is, in recent games, many of them start with a lead, then fall behind for no reason, and finally the protagonist turns the tide, ╯▂╰ 6 Essay It's okay then

It's rare to find a football novel that also has detailed descriptions off the field. The professional content related to football is excellent, which is the basis of football literature. On top of this, it is different from other novels of the same type. There are many more detailed off-field descriptions, characterizations and related scene descriptions that impressed me deeply, including the protagonist's parents, the protagonist's enlightenment coach, and the ambiguous object that is not obtrusive. These delicate parts make the novel and the protagonist's image full, and the whole content is flesh and blood. As a niche football online article, it is too rare for the author to be able to do this. It gives me the feeling that this is more than just a boring football article full of game content. I hope the author will keep up the good work.

It's good to watch, and the football writing is fine. This system document is a bit different. There is no specific value, but a certain amount of space is left. Although the protagonist progresses a bit quickly and feels like he can be crowned king in just one season, it's so cool hahahahaha. The emotional line is also good. It's a rare single female protagonist in male videos (don't slap me in the face later). The female protagonist is quite cute and natural. She doesn't engage in those NPC triangle nightclub messes, and there is nothing toxic about it. It looks good, please update it~

You can write very passionately

I have read Chapter 17 so far, and overall it's pretty good. The description of the competition is also pretty good. Can you not write so much about the chat between the heroine (the protagonist's online game, so much writing is still "she", basically the heroine) and the protagonist? I think it's enough to write two or three paragraphs. The main thing is that they are chatting. Most of the sixteen chapters are spent chatting. Wrong typing, it's "netizen"

It looks good and is very comfortable to watch.

I've only read Chapter 29 so far, and I haven't read the rest yet, but I want to rate it first. It's really good. I hope the author can keep writing

It's beautiful. Please give me a perfect ending. Thank you.

The writing is good, mainly because I am a Manchester United fan.

The plot, rhythm, and game time are all in line with the word count. It's a rare and top-notch football book.

It's super, super beautiful, I watched it now in one go

Damn it, it's a football novel with a good pace! Looking for a needle in a haystack, you can't find it anywhere, but here it is. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

It's beautiful. It's unexpectedly beautiful.

The writing is good, the pace is tight, there is no nonsense, and the emotional subplots and daily life are just right. Keep up the good work

Come on, come on, I really like Kangkang's plot [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The writing style is delicate and the writing is smooth. No shortcomings. Advance reasonably. It's already a good article. The path to advancement as a midfielder. Can read

It's pretty good-looking. Is the heroine Princess Huai'an?

It's well written. This is the only book I've reviewed. I'm usually just a spectator, but this time I'm going to do it myself. Come on, author, keep writing! ! !

Not bad, keep it up

Who said Tenghai couldn't save him [Thoughts]

Chapter 154 is also about the emotional line, and the confession takes up one chapter. Those words are enough to make the ending more exciting and make the whole more complete. In the end, the real name is revealed.

It was well written, but the ending was too hasty. I support the author's new book.

Good book, come on, come on, come on

There is more development of the story line, but I feel that there are relatively few descriptions of the stadium and the descriptions of the matches. It is recommended to focus on competition.

No, it's well written both on and off the court. I look forward to the fans' reactions when they find out what happened to the male and female protagonists. It is recommended to update a few chapters a day, but if there are too few chapters a day, readers will be lost.