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Stay up late to tie! It was delicious! The writing is very good. . I feel very sorry for Minwen, a baby with very upright views, who respects women. I agree with many of his ideas, and I actually feel like an ally in my heart. (I don't know if this is the right expression.) The author has created the character of the mother very well. The image of Minwen and Xu Xinghuai's mother made me want to cry (actually I already cried, the free couple said otherwise) Xu Xinghuai is indeed pitiful, but based on my personal feelings, he is not as painful as Minwen, nor is he as mature and responsible as Minwen. . And I have zero tolerance for bullying, this is simply childish! I really hate him! This is the first time I criticize a supporting character like this in a book review, haha. . Ji Baiyu was the first to come to the table. It was unexpected but reasonable. Ying Zhuo is actually a straight man haha. In fact, I am very optimistic about Ying Zhuo [Like]

OMG you write so well www The tone of this book is relatively gloomy in the early stage. Xiaowen is bitter but very strong. I like this book very much, maybe because Xiaowen is forbearing and not cowardly. When he takes action, even though he is covered with scars, he still shakes his fist fiercely. Even though he is suffering, he will be soft-hearted to others. At the beginning of Tianbeng, he is still a very kind-hearted baby without losing his true heart. Xiaowen is like bamboo that stands strong in the wind and rain. Fried chicken has charm and he should be loved by everyone! ! ! What attracts me most about this book is Xiaowen's characterization. Ouye updates seven times in one night! ! !

Personally, I find it shocking and delicious. I have watched a lot of heartthrob themes. This is the only one that clearly explains why others fall in love with the protagonist. Everyone (mainly Ji Heying) has their own past experience in their love for the protagonist. This kind of love cannot be obtained by beauty alone (looking at other heartthrobs, it is always because of the beauty of the protagonist, not Consciously falling in love makes people feel that as long as they are beautiful, they can get the love of these people). The protagonist's temperament is also very unique. I like it... As for the point of torturing the protagonist in the early stage, part of it is because I like to read more realistic and logical books. The second reason is that I like beautiful, strong and miserable, so I don't think it's okay?

Xiaowen is really a gloomy little beauty who looks cold and alienated but is melancholy and tough on the inside + is crazy and cruel when hitting people. She is born to be the master of life! So cool, so cool! Currently there are men like Xiao Ji, Xiao Huai, Xiao Ying and others! The heartthrob of the rescue article is really delicious! It's so delicious and the writing is awesome! ! It's simply not enough to watch! !

It was so exciting that I almost went crazy. The pace didn't drag on, and it was both exciting and sadistic. It completely broke away from the ordinary binary narrative and brought the characters to life. The creation started from tiny descriptions, which was delicate and beautiful. . . What a beautiful article, please keep writing!

It's really beautiful and the writing is very good! It's very shocking. Who knows how I felt when I saw "It's Original Sin." My whole heart was beating violently. Chen Luyu did something wrong when she was young. Because she always had fantasies about Mr. Xu, she later left to raise Awen alone. I feel that she may not feel particularly guilty. But Awen is different. Thanks to his mother's love, education and environmental factors, he has a higher sense of morality and he does not grow crooked. Maintaining the bottom line in a harsh environment is a manifestation of his high moral sense, including enduring some of Xu Xinhuai's actions because he feels that he is atonement. Although it is not his fault, his protection of his mother made him feel this way, so he accepted it. This also includes Luo He's matter, because he respects women and never thinks of her with the greatest malice, so he has those pulls. As for Xu Xinnai, as the author said, he is gray due to his environment and experiences. There is no such thing as whitewashing, because the colors on a piece of paper will smear when exposed to water and then mix with other colors. Paintings with soul are also multi-colored. There is also the letter left by Xu Xinhuai's mother and the book "Pride and Prejudice", which are also very, very good here. Everyone portrayed by the author is very good, including Mr. Xu. Maybe he was like this because of various experiences of being an illegitimate child, but he also had moments of "falling in love" with Mrs. Lu, and his relationship with Chen Luyu. Of course, I didn't mean to refute it, but I just felt that the author described everyone well. Come on, big brother, I hope there will be many chapters waiting for me when I wake up the next day. Expect ٩(•̤̀ᵕ•̤́๑)

It's particularly beautiful. It starts with an unabashedly fierce confrontation and the plot is particularly interesting. I have to say that it is quite necessary to have a certain amount of force as a guarantee. Of course, there is really no power to fight back in the face of absolute power, but people always have to grow. I like the growth line created by the author.

I also read the updated part before going to bed. I can only say that the author's writing is very good! The characters are very well created. They are not simply black and white, but complex, three-dimensional, and flesh-and-blood. This is one of the few novels on Tomato that I have the desire to read in one sitting. Moreover, the author also wrote Shura Field with full of tension, and the setting is also very touching (but maybe because I am an NP idiot, so although the ending is 1v1, I prefer NP, but as long as Xiaowen is happy!) Big boost, author~ You are super super awesome. I like your writing style! ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

It's a good read. The author's writing style is very good. The characters are well-developed. They are neither purely good nor purely evil. Although Xu Minwen is an illegitimate child, he has very upright views. Ji feels like a guiding lover. He comforts himself with tattoos and also In the process of guiding the article, it feels like everyone is trying to save each other, and everyone is a little miserable [eating melon] Hmmmm... I don't know if it's just me, but it's super good-looking anyway, but don't underestimate the author because of the introduction! [Crazy] Come on, come on, I will always follow you ^o^ [Blow a kiss]

I'm not telling you that the book I'm following will never be updated. It's so good. I originally picked it up to read before going to bed, but I thought I could read the latest chapter in one go. The writing is also very good, and the characters are well developed. Sometimes it makes me cry. If you want to know more details, you can read my next paragraph. Wen Suo's (protagonist Shou's) mother was coaxed into becoming a mistress. Wen's mother established very good values ​​for him since he was a child, so he knew this was wrong, but he loved his mother very much and was willing to help her bear the sin of hurting another woman. So when you are hurt by being pregnant (with your original wife's child), you will feel a sense of atonement, but of course there is a bottom line. I tolerate it because I feel there is no actual harm, and I will definitely resist if my bottom line is violated. It's not the kind of weak feeling, it's more like a stubborn green bamboo, persevering. Huai is also a poor child, with his own bottom line of three views, but he feels that Wen is the mistress's child and he killed his mother, so he has to hate him. Later, when I saw the letter my mother left for me, I finally put aside my prejudice. How can I put it, because the people you love are different, and your positions are also different. There is no pure good or evil. Except for their father who is a pure scumbag, everyone has their own reasons for having to deal with it. Sometimes I think that if there was no such father, the two mothers might have become very good friends if they met in another way. All have correct views. Always face life upward. Compared to roses, I prefer to compare them to sunflowers🌻Always bright and confident

Oh my god, it's really good. I haven't seen such a good article in a long time. The logic is clear. I also love the character of the protagonist. There is no absolute good or absolute evil. The protagonist has a charming physique and kills both men and women. I really love it. Okay, please don't take a rest for the protagonist. Please update it quickly. ψ(｀∇´)ψHmm, what next? I really hope that the author writes a little more content and just ends it hastily. I really hope that it will be updated to more than 400 chapters, and it will be completed after more than 500 chapters. Well, of course the more the better. Come on, I am willing to wait, but don't stop updating. Of course, don't take it off the shelves. I'll cry to death

The core of Minwen is really strong and the light feeling is very delicious. The characters of each attack are also very delicious. He loves to eat the virtuous ones and the loyal dogs. It's delicious😋The Shura Field is not awkward, it's really funny and tense. Our poor little Jiyo (that kind of tone), the delicate description and brushstrokes tie it all in one breath, and it feels super not enough! It's a great book with great potential. I highly recommend it! Moreover, the author is very capable, ahem, you can also help yourself to a small midnight snack. Staying in foreign persimmons is really a waste of talent, how can you fix it! 😋😋🍽️🥺😭

Ah, the author, can you please let Ying come to the table? I like this pair so much! ! ! Ying's love is pure, and he has always firmly chosen Shou, and his family also supports him. Although Ji is good, family reasons cannot give Shou real happiness. Although He is touched by this line, he really can't accept forcing Shou to have sex when he is 15 years old. If that doesn't work, either write down every line in detail, and then strengthen Huo's ability to be independent and not be threatened by Xu's father. And the big words are so touching, I love you so much! ! ! ! !

The main text has been completed. It is very interesting. The character creation is really good, but my heart is a little empty. In the end, Xiao Ji is no longer with Xiao Wen. Ying Yao is receiving treatment in the United States. The Xu family and the He family have collapsed. Xu Xinghuai is studying in the United States and living on the foundation left to him by his mother. He Yu's sister He Qing is in jail. He Yu's political career has been greatly affected. In fact, this may be the best ending, but I still feel sorry for Xu Xinghuai and He Yu. I think He Yu is so crazy in love, so sickly in love, but I cannot deny the harm he has done to Xiao Wen. I hope Xiao Wen will live a better life in the future, live a happy life, and shed happy tears.

Compared with other campus heartthrob articles, this article has a more realistic basis. It lacks the plot of a rich young man falling in love with me at first sight, but it is definitely a bit dark and a bit sadistic on his own. I think it is pretty good. The writing and character creation are okay. If you can stand a little abuse, you can read it.

The author's writing style is really good [Send my heart] It's very delicious. The protagonist's outlook on life is also very good. Now that I see that the one I dislike the most is He. His character might be delicious as the protagonist in some Wenjin, but the things he did are very bad in Xiaoyan (the protagonist), so I don't like this couple very much [awkward laugh] Ji is very much like a guiding lover. Although he is also a bit strong, he understands Xiaoyan's fragility and tolerant sensitivity. With patience and determination, he tries to pull Xiaoyan out of the shadow of the past little by little. There is another one who should be like the sun living in the light. He has less love from his parents than Ji, which is very hindering him. Anyway, the one I dislike the most in the whole book so far is He Yu. Others are much better than him [smile] [smile] [send heart] Ok, thank you so much for writing such a delicious article [I'm full] I really hope that the ending will be happy without cp Yanbao🩷

To be honest, I think Ying is very suitable to be the first wife. To be honest, he has been completely on the side of the baby from the beginning. Coupled with the baby's character, the baby does not need a perfect lover. The baby's situation, he needs someone who does not hesitate, does not consider the pros and cons of anything, and stands completely next to him, completely trusting and completely attached. Although their personalities are not complementary, Ying does a very good job. I also read it on Weibo and it makes me excited 🎄◟(˶> ᎑ <˶)◞🎄

All I can say is that it's shocking and delicious. How did the author make every male protagonist I like? My morals and points were constantly fighting. In the early stage, I was beaten by Xu (brother) all the time. It was very miserable. The author also said it at the beginning. But I didn't understand what shock was until I saw it later. It's so shocking. The author will try his best to update it.

It's different from the heartthrobs I've seen before, hahaha. I originally thought of watching it mindlessly for entertainment, but I was really moved by the portrayal of each character. The characters' love for each other is traceable and not confusing. The author also vividly describes Xiaowen's heart. His gratitude to Ji, his acceptance of Xu Xinghuai, his corresponding softness, and his disgust and superficial compromise with He made me hate every character. It really allowed me to see Xiaowen's growth And the most important thing is that the author made me see "why Xiaowen is a heartthrob", it is because of his characteristics, silence is never cowardly, compromise is never humble, self-effacement is never self-abasement, and kindness never has a bottom line. I fell in love with him too

Why is it so beautifully written? Why is it so updated? I beg you. Can the author finish it in one day? I don't care about tomorrow's English test. I just want to read this novel. It's so refreshing. Men are menstruating. Women are going crazy after reading this. Oh my god. My heart is itching and I feel uncomfortable. Author, I beg you for more. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Boss, you must update more! ! I finally found a good book. ! ! I really like it. The characters are created very well. The plot is not procrastinating. It has both tense atmosphere and a warm side. It's really good to watch! I think everyone is nice [blowing kiss]

I don't want to say anything else, it's so well written! ! ! ! ! I finished reading it all in one go, it completely touched my heart and left me with endless aftertaste! This character creation is really good, I am very good at writing, and every part is well connected. The emotional description is even more important. Oh my god, I am so good at writing! Ahhhhhhh

It's quite sour, like a layer of dust has fallen, like a layer of gauze, which can't be wiped off or torn apart. I really like this kind of writing. The characters are so full (I will never laugh again). Every single person in it makes me feel distressed. Many plots make me want to cry. The author's writing style is so good.

I've been planning to read this book for a long time, but the first chapter kept putting me off because I'm a control person. Originally, I was quite frustrated in the early chapters and felt particularly uncomfortable and depressed. However, after the misunderstanding was solved later, I suddenly realized that we all have this kind of difficulty. Moreover, I felt that this novel had more of a movie-going feel. I have to say that the author's writing style is so good. I really didn't expect that Xinghuai would turn into a brother-controlled character later on. Also, He Yu's character creation is so touching. There is a scene where he is eating the leftovers left by He Yu before writing a sensitive article. From He Yu's perspective, it is so morbid that the underworld can be rushed. It's such a pity that I finished reading the book that I wanted to fall in love with after a long time [crying]

It's so good-looking, friends, it's perfect for boredom. Oh, it's so good-looking. Author, you will gain a loyal believer. It's so good-looking. Please update it quickly. Go and show it to me. Go and show it to me. Go and see it. It's so good-looking. My God!

Just two words are beautiful (´艸｀), the relationship is gradual, not the kind that you fall in love with suddenly. Our protagonist baby is like a wild puppy, with sharp claws and flexibility, tenacity and sobriety. I really like it (ᐥᐜᐥ)♡︎ᐝ

The author is so awesome and the content is so fascinating. Don't know why the rating is so low [what]. At first I thought it was the protagonist who was silently enduring the beating, but I didn't expect him to hit him right back. I really liked the intensity of the protagonist's pain (ღ˘⌣˘ღ) I haven't seen such a cool article for a long time, ah ah ah, I don't care about the author, please update it quickly [blowing kiss]

The tone is a bit depressing, but the emotions are very delicate. Feeling is like a creeper (?), Not a pure white flower or a proud little poplar. But avoid lightning: there are scenes of obscenity and sadomasochism (body). The emotional transition is handled very well, and the change from hostility to love is not abrupt. (=^‥^=)Highly recommended

It's really good-looking. Minwen's character design is also very good. He is a very cute and well-behaved little baby. Ji Yubai is really at the level of first love, very gentle. I quite like this kind of character. He Yu really makes me feel so embarrassed and at the same time talking to myself. It's a moral fight, a puppy that plays the ball straight to death, a little treasure with pure love. Although Brother Xu made me very angry in the early stage, I quite liked it in the later stage. The most annoying person in the whole book is Xu Laodeng!! The author's writing style is also very good, it's beautiful!!

A treasure I dug up late at night. I really want to ask the author if he has a vest in FW. I love this style of writing so much. The metaphors are delicate and the writing style is natural. The characters' emotions and logic are natural🥰🥰🥰. This makes me feel satisfied to end my novel journey tonight.