After Giving up the Male Lead, Senior Sister Zhenlong and I Started HE

So far, it looks good, tastes good, tastes good, and is very appetizing. The progress of the emotional line is very fast..., Which can be said to be rapid progress in novels of the same type. Some plots are used to deliberately promote the plot, causing the overall rhythm to be too fast (maybe it is because the same type of writing is too slow, causing me to have a reading habit? (-_-)) The overall plot of the plot is more of a "template". I have seen a lot of similar ones. I hope it can break out of some routines and add more freshness to some major plots. The protagonist, um... Is a bit "silly and sweet", and the senior sister's emotions are quite "radical", which is very embarrassing. I hope that no new characters will be added to the love line, and the "original male protagonist" should be taken offline as soon as possible. Too much involvement will affect the look and feel of Ketang (of course, it has not been written yet, so it is just a small idea and suggestion.) ヾ(＠^∇^＠)ノ It feels like there are a little few people... Well, I won't say more, let's promote books. PS: Da Da, Se Se, Hungry Hungry, Fanfan. (˘ ³˘)❤

This book should at least be rated 9.2 Or above. There are almost no poisonous points, and the writing style does not look like that of a new author. It looks very smooth. The plot is not sluggish either, it's a good book that was delayed by ratings.

I won't talk about the emotional line, just feel good and that's it. In fact, when it comes to fantasy, the author's writing is very good. Whether it is some settings, the hidden methods of the Taiyin Sect ruins, or the description of the human nature of the characters, they all have a serious fantasy feel. The most uncomfortable thing for Lily, who has such a background in cultivating immortals, is that there are various problems in cultivating immortals, such as unreasonable combat power, too conventional names, people who cultivate immortals don't have the appearance of cultivating immortals, etc. But if the author can write this well, I can be completely immersed in the novel, and I won't feel uncomfortable because of some unreasonable or too cliche descriptions. (But this may be because I also watch normal fantasy, which leads to higher requirements in this regard)

It's good to watch, but I feel that the protagonist's emotional line develops quite quickly. It's not like a steady stream of water, but more like a thunder from the sky and a fire from the earth. The bastard feels like he's caught eye to eye, and the progress bar of the relationship part is moving very fast. However, when Ling Yao goes to the demon world, the protagonist's emotional line basically stops and becomes mainly plot line. The plot is also pretty well written, with more of a refreshing side to it. If you can beat it, beat it, and if you can't beat it, shake it off. No suffocation, no gas, and unobstructed breast glands. At present, the emotional and plot combination of meat and vegetables in the article is relatively balanced. It's just the rhythm of eating vegetables first and then eating meat, not the rhythm of eating vegetables and meat together.

From the current point of view, if I continue writing according to this writing style and description technique, this book should be able to score an 8 when it is finished. The behavioral logic of normal people, the comfortable description techniques, and the smooth plot made me hooked after just reading a few chapters. It is also very delicious. Finally, I hope this book can have more chapters, and I'm looking forward to seeing it reach 200 chapters. Mainly because it's really delicious so far [Love]

I rarely read serials but this one is really good! At first glance, I thought it was a domineering evil dragon falling in love with me, but if you look closely, you will find that it is a micro-group portrait with the heroine's growth as the main line. Compared with most of the fairy tales in which the supporting characters are the protagonist's love interest, the supporting characters currently appearing in this book are all flesh and blood, and their daily lives in the sect are also very interesting. The emotional line is not too fast. Compared with the past and present life of torture for the sake of torture, which lasts hundreds of chapters, I think this progress is just right. Anyway, author, don't be idle!

I don't know why the rating is so low. Anyway, I think this is really good-looking, and the route and style are also unique. It's really good-looking. If you pass by, don't miss it. I really recommend it.

The beautiful [Admiration] originally thought it would be a little forced, but I took it first. Now the scale is really suitable [Sending Hearts]. The ambiguity between Master and Fourth Senior Sister is also very good. I would like to ask the author if he plans to write in depth about their relationship [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss]

Nice! ! Highly recommended, very beautiful! But I don't know why the rating is so low? The author describes the emotional relationship between the two heroines very carefully, and the car speed is super fast [smile] [smile] In the article, Ling Yao is also very possessive, and Su Li also loves her very much, they are both too fond of each other! [Admiration] [Admiration] makes me beat myself up to death. Although Su Li can no longer feel emotions, she is still very worried about Ling Yao. However, the current article seems a bit cruel, but it is still acceptable. Overall, it's a very good read. It's not a waste to stay up late to read this book! Highly recommended!

It looks good, the plot is very smooth, and I feel like the author is not writing a book for the first time. The relationship between Ling Yao and Su Li is really good, ahhhh, real dragons and other things should match the treasures, 🚗It's also good to read, it's really shocking and delicious, but it's too short. If I had known it, I would have waited and read it, but the ending should be he. I don't know how to write it after Ling Yao goes to the demon world. The time acceleration is still mainly written by Su Li. I look forward to (*^o^*) [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]

There are many main female characters overall, but there is a male supporting character who plays a very important role in the later stage. Although it is a female and male spirit, the male spirit appears more. Moreover, when the senior sister calls her subordinates, she always calls her brothers, and the author has not changed it, which makes people feel very uncomfortable. Other than that, it's okay, it's a good and enjoyable story, but the junior sister is a bit too love-minded, but it's okay to write a story that focuses on love.

The emotional route is very delicious, the plot is not very interesting, but it's okay. At least it's not the kind of story where the emotional line stretches for hundreds of chapters. It is still very readable! These two people are like thunder from the sky and fire from the earth, a very delicious red thread marriage [like]

The writing is very good and I really enjoyed it. I like the tone of the plot [laughs]

It's a cool story, don't worry about the twists and turns of the plot. The heroine is ruthless when she should be ruthless. It's very sweet, and there is no emotional crisis at the moment. Can enter

This is another novel that was buried in the ratings. The main plot is not procrastinating, there is no mindless female rivalry, the emotional line is delicate and not embarrassing, but it is a bit rocket speed (I may be unaccustomed to reading too many slow-burning novels, but it does not affect the viewing experience). It is not a formulaic fairy tale, which is very refreshing. In addition, Xiao Li's character design is very suitable for me. In addition, the transportation is also quite developed. I feel like I won't be able to see it when the ratings come up later [laughing]

It has to have plot and 🚗yes🚗, the writing is very good😋The emotional lines of the senior and junior sisters are very delicious and the progress is very fast. There are also many pairs of sub-CPs and they are all lilies😋😋It's so delicious that I really want to kneel down to the author. I'm looking forward to the end! The plot line is now very enjoyable to watch. I look forward to seeing Xiao Li and A Yao break through any obstacles and meet again. May they continue to be happy🥰🥹🥹 (OS gave me back the first 25 chapters... I wanted to rewatch it and found that all the previous chapters have been changed. It made me heartbroken.

How should I put it? The reason for the low rating of this novel may be that the span between before and after is too large, and it is difficult for readers to accept it all, right? The first half of the novel is still about romance, but the second half is "speechless". There are all kinds of weirdness, which makes people feel weird. Although it is more interesting, it also dissuades those who only like to read "romance" (there is no derogatory meaning here, maybe the tone is stronger). As time goes by, the system will classify it into a low-scoring category. [Shy]

It's really very nice and highly recommended. The article written by the teacher is very clear and very nice. I highly recommend it😋. I hope I won't be too harsh in the future. This is my favorite novel and I highly recommend it! !

This is really a fairy product, so delicious😋, I eat eat eat eat eat eat eat

The author's writing is good, the plot is good, everything is good (including looks)

I think it is still very beautiful and interesting, and there are still a lot of them, and the sub-CPs are quite interesting. I hope there can be more. But what I think is most interesting is that I personally drew the love cross for the two protagonists, and then I added a card of Ling's desire for Su and drew the devil card. I really wanted to die laughing. It's really too mysterious. It's so interesting.

The book is very good, the emotional line is well written, and the story is compact. But I want to make a suggestion, can there be fewer dead people? I really don't want to see those vivid characters die, please [cry][cry][cry]

It's very beautiful [Adoration], the two heroines have very good characters, and they get along very naturally. The progress is also relatively fast, so far it is very good [Blow kiss]

It's nice to read, the writing is good and the plot is plotted, and the writing is very nice.

What a great book! The plot is not procrastinating, and the emotional line is also very interesting. It's fun to watch. It's good to watch. It's good to watch. It's good to watch. It's good to watch.

From the description of the book and the previous content, I thought it was just a sweet text, so I loved reading it. However, the part about the demon world was too much for me. It was a far cry from the previous article, which only had minor setbacks. I felt that it was not that comfortable. People who like to watch traditional emotional dramas about separation and separation may like it.

It's pretty good, but a bit lacking. The author should be more specific [shy]

A very nice book, worth reading

Detailed review: It is really rare for two girls who cultivate immortality to produce such a masterpiece. The rating is definitely more than that. The plot is interlocking and the characters have their own characteristics. There is a slight group portrait of a group of people who are full of energy and create their own path. I have read about twenty novels about cultivating immortals, and I can count them all on one hand including this one. I read 140 chapters in one go, which is as detailed as I can imagine. Overall review: God!

It's beautiful. I love to see it. The lilies in my hometown are still in full bloom. Ok, this novel is also about a very fast car. I don't know if it's a cool article or not. Anyway, I know that the car must be fast. Why is it that the mountains are all covered with lilies (there is actually a Red Cliff from the Battle of Chibi behind 666).