After Giving Up on the Male Lead, I Found My HE with the True Dragon Senior Sister

So far, it looks good, tastes good, tastes good, and is very appetizing. The progress of the emotional line is very fast..., Which can be said to be rapid progress in novels of the same type. Some plots are used to deliberately promote the plot, causing the overall rhythm to be too fast (maybe it is because the same type of writing is too slow, causing me to have a reading habit? (-_-)) The overall plot of the plot is more of a "template". I have seen a lot of similar ones. I hope it can break out of some routines and add more freshness to some major plots. The protagonist, um... Is a bit "silly and sweet", and the senior sister's emotions are quite "radical", which is very embarrassing. I hope that no new characters will be added to the love line, and the "original male protagonist" should be taken offline as soon as possible. Too much involvement will affect the look and feel of Ketang (of course, it has not been written yet, so it is just a small idea and suggestion.) ヾ(＠^∇^＠)ノ It feels like there are a little few people... Well, I won't say more, let's promote books. PS: Da Da, Se Se, Hungry Hungry, Fanfan. (˘ ³˘)❤

This book should at least be rated 9.2 Or above. There are almost no poisonous points, and the writing style does not look like that of a new author. It looks very smooth. The plot is not sluggish either, it's a good book that was delayed by ratings.

I won't talk about the emotional line, just feel good and that's it. In fact, when it comes to fantasy, the author's writing is very good. Whether it is some settings, the hidden methods of the Taiyin Sect ruins, or the description of the human nature of the characters, they all have a serious fantasy feel. The most uncomfortable thing for Lily, who has such a background in cultivating immortals, is that there are various problems in cultivating immortals, such as unreasonable combat power, too conventional names, people who cultivate immortals don't have the appearance of cultivating immortals, etc. But if the author can write this well, I can be completely immersed in the novel, and I won't feel uncomfortable because of some unreasonable or too cliche descriptions. (But this may be because I also watch normal fantasy, which leads to higher requirements in this regard)

It's good to watch, but I feel that the protagonist's emotional line develops quite quickly. It's not like a steady stream of water, but more like a thunder from the sky and a fire from the earth. The bastard feels like he's caught eye to eye, and the progress bar of the relationship part is moving very fast. However, when Ling Yao goes to the demon world, the protagonist's emotional line basically stops and becomes mainly plot line. The plot is also pretty well written, with more of a refreshing side to it. If you can beat it, beat it, and if you can't beat it, shake it off. No suffocation, no gas, and unobstructed breast glands. At present, the emotional and plot combination of meat and vegetables in the article is relatively balanced. It's just the rhythm of eating vegetables first and then eating meat, not the rhythm of eating vegetables and meat together.

From the current point of view, if I continue writing according to this writing style and description technique, this book should be able to score an 8 when it is finished. The behavioral logic of normal people, the comfortable description techniques, and the smooth plot made me hooked after just reading a few chapters. It is also very delicious. Finally, I hope this book can have more chapters, and I'm looking forward to seeing it reach 200 chapters. Mainly because it's really delicious so far [Love]

I rarely read serials but this one is really good! At first glance, I thought it was a domineering evil dragon falling in love with me, but if you look closely, you will find that it is a micro-group portrait with the heroine's growth as the main line. Compared with most of the fairy tales in which the supporting characters are the protagonist's love interest, the supporting characters currently appearing in this book are all flesh and blood, and their daily lives in the sect are also very interesting. The emotional line is not too fast. Compared with the past and present life of torture for the sake of torture, which lasts hundreds of chapters, I think this progress is just right. Anyway, author, don't be idle!

There are many main female characters overall, but there is a male supporting character who plays a very important role in the later stage. Although it is a female and male spirit, the male spirit appears more. Moreover, when the senior sister calls her subordinates, she always calls her brothers, and the author has not changed it, which makes people feel very uncomfortable. Other than that, it's okay, it's a good and enjoyable story, but the junior sister is a bit too love-minded, but it's okay to write a story that focuses on love.

I don't know why the rating is so low. Anyway, I think this is really good-looking, and the route and style are also unique. It's really good-looking. If you pass by, don't miss it. I really recommend it.

The beautiful [Admiration] originally thought it would be a little forced, but I took it first. Now the scale is really suitable [Sending Hearts]. The ambiguity between Master and Fourth Senior Sister is also very good. I would like to ask the author if he plans to write in depth about their relationship [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss]

Nice! ! Highly recommended, very beautiful! But I don't know why the rating is so low? The author describes the emotional relationship between the two heroines very carefully, and the car speed is super fast [smile] [smile] In the article, Ling Yao is also very possessive, and Su Li also loves her very much, they are both too fond of each other! [Admiration] [Admiration] makes me beat myself up to death. Although Su Li can no longer feel emotions, she is still very worried about Ling Yao. However, the current article seems a bit cruel, but it is still acceptable. Overall, it's a very good read. It's not a waste to stay up late to read this book! Highly recommended!