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The writing is very good and very delicate. From the copywriting, it seems that the heroine and Wang Lin are companions, and the text feels like love, but the wife's reply is not, so the two of them are not in love from beginning to end. In fact, I can understand that they are in love. In the early stage, the two people can be said to support each other and depend on each other. To a certain extent, they also replaced the original Wang and Li. However, it is reasonable for the wife to choose to keep the original one.

It's very interesting. The author changed the setting so that the male and female protagonists are a [shy] couple. The plot and writing are very good, I recommend everyone to watch it.

I have only read Chapter 10, but I am quite anxious to rate this book. Because this is the only Xian Ni fanfic that I have read that I am satisfied with. It is very delicately written and the heroine is also very good. It has its own plot and does not follow the original work. Although the author said at the beginning that there is no other arrangement for the male and female protagonists, because I have not read the original work, only the Chinese comic, and the Chinese comic does not show the delicate relationship between Xiao Linzi and Li Muwan, that is, they quickly fall in love with her, so until now I still don't understand the relationship between Xiao Linzi and Li Muwan. Because I don't like Lin Wan and only focus on the male protagonist, I prefer that the female protagonist in this book can be with the male protagonist. So when the author first said that the male and female protagonists are not together, I was curious about how the author wrote it. Now that I have seen it, I think it is quite good. If there is anything else later, I will evaluate it later. The more you look at the back, the more the deviation becomes too large, Xiao Linzi suffers more unnecessary hardships, and the plot becomes less and less like a fairy. That's it.

The writing is very delicate, but someone commented that the author mentioned that the two of them are not in love. Is this true? The young couple is so sweet that they finally hold hands.

Really well written! I haven't read the original work, but it doesn't affect reading this fanfic at all. And the teacher's writing is very good. It feels like flowing water slowly, and the emotional line between the male and female protagonists will not feel abrupt, and it feels very smooth. It's a pity that there are too few, only thirty chapters. I hope the teacher will not give up! Really well written! I'm still not satisfied after reading it [Sending my heart to you]

It's quite nice, and the pace is gradual. . . Unlike others, I am either on the way to cooking or on the way to cooking [covering my face], otherwise the woman has no ability at all, it is just a "pendant". Although I have not read Xian Ni, I like the rhythm of the author's writing very much.

It's really, really, super, super good-looking. I watched it at night and it was really gripping. I watched it with a sigh of relief. I have never read the original work. Wang Lin's experience, suffering, and the heroine's efforts in life are all very heart-wrenching. Anyway, it's really super good-looking.

Very beautiful and accompanied by a long stream of water

It looks good, come on author, keep writing [Upvote]

I hope that the heroine and Wang Lin will be together. I think they are quite sweet. The two of them kissed, and Situ Nan was a big helper. I beg the author, can the author write it as a love story?

It's beautiful. I like this kind of companionship.

It looks good, come on, keep writing.

The author's writing style is very good, and the writing is very delicate. It's really super beautiful. I really like the companionship of the young couple, it's very sweet.

Very good author [Like]

Very well written and very detailed

The writing is very good, I like it.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very well written. I want to know. Can the heroine become an immortal?

I like it very much [smile] The author writes well and looks forward to it

Yes, yes, I saw a very good fanfic! ! Very nice

It's beautiful, the little couple is very sweet, even though it's miserable

It feels okay, but the logic is weird in some places. But it's acceptable, so please give the author a big boost to finish it! [Blowing kiss]

Very nice, very nice, very nice.