Naruto: The Fish of Iwagakure

It's pretty good, but the time-travel of Naruto interspersed with Boruto is a bit of a drama. I feel that the experience would be much better without this episode.

No, buddy, what did you write? Everything was going fine before, but then out of nowhere Otsutsukiura style and Uchiha Hikaru came out. What are you going to do? Based on the way you wrote it, the estimated combat power and state of mind in the later period can allow Otsutsukiura Shiki to travel back in time? How do you plan to fill the hole later? Can't we just follow the flow of Shippuden? Can't you wait until later to write about Boruto's story? If you really can't do it, why not do it as a side story? Why pull him out now?

The writing is okay, but the main character is the type of Unhokage, who only knows a bag of rice...,,,, Which can basically be understood as an original fanfic

It looks good, I saw some people reported those issues in the comment area, but I still want to say something. The author still has to write according to the direction of his own outline, and must not be affected by some comments. Unless it's a particularly problematic chapter. I didn't expect it to be a double heroine. I'm looking forward to the story behind it. I love it so much🥰

The subject matter is new and the descriptions are good, but you don't need to add so many emojis. You can just read it occasionally. The author doesn't have to be too hasty. For example, using Urashiki to strengthen the protagonist and draw out the light can completely wait until further development. The protagonist will be eaten to death directly. In Boruto, at least little Naruto can still fight back. Overall very good

It's interesting, but I hope that the heroine will have black soil, and that the subsequent plots will not be too homogeneous and just maintain the current level. The idea of ​​​​traveling back is very interesting. There are plots of time traveling in the early stages, which is rare. Overall it's pretty good, keep up the good work.

Urashiki feels like he's writing in a hurry. It's only been a few chapters and suddenly there's a future battle.

Why did the Otsutsuki catching style appear later? Only 30 chapters

First of all, it is one of the few Naruto stories that does not start with the Leaf Village, and it also has its own original plot, and each one has about 3000~4000 words, and the word count and quality are also very high. And the author may have continuous interruptions due to exams, so don't worry, it will be revived, plus the rarity, quality, and plot, I will give 5 points! (Then I would like to ask the author, will Deidara join the Akatsuki organization in the future? I personally think he should join, otherwise it will be a bit difficult to make the subsequent plot original.) Then I also want to say that the current plot advancement is slow-paced, which is good. Please keep it up, otherwise the pace will be fast and there will be fewer chapters to read 🥺

Chapter 28-30, the author suggested skipping it, but I skipped it However, Chapter 31 is directly called a war, and several of the protagonists are seriously injured. Chapter 27 is still a happy daily life, and they are seriously injured in the blink of an eye? In this case, a normal person would look back, right? So I looked back and concluded that it was better not to write the three chapters whose meaning was unclear. It was suggested to skip, why is it completely unrelated to the previous plot, but directly affects the subsequent plot? Are you suggesting loneliness? This is not just disgusting!