Naruto******

The writing is okay, but the main character is the type of Unhokage, who only knows a bag of rice...,,,, Which can basically be understood as an original fanfic

The subject matter is new and the descriptions are good, but you don't need to add so many emojis. You can just read it occasionally. The author doesn't have to be too hasty. For example, using Urashiki to strengthen the protagonist and draw out the light can completely wait until further development. The protagonist will be eaten to death directly. In Boruto, at least little Naruto can still fight back. Overall very good

It looks good, I saw some people reported those issues in the comment area, but I still want to say something. The author still has to write according to the direction of his own outline, and must not be affected by some comments. Unless it's a particularly problematic chapter. I didn't expect it to be a double heroine. I'm looking forward to the story behind it. I love it so much🥰

It's interesting, but I hope that the heroine will have black soil, and that the subsequent plots will not be too homogeneous and just maintain the current level. The idea of ​​​​traveling back is very interesting. There are plots of time traveling in the early stages, which is rare. Overall it's pretty good, keep up the good work.

Urashiki feels like he's writing in a hurry. It's only been a few chapters and suddenly there's a future battle.

Why did the Otsutsuki catching style appear later? Only 30 chapters

First of all, it is one of the few Naruto stories that does not start with the Leaf Village, and it also has its own original plot, and each one has about 3000~4000 words, and the word count and quality are also very high. And the author may have continuous interruptions due to exams, so don't worry, it will be revived, plus the rarity, quality, and plot, I will give 5 points! (Then I would like to ask the author, will Deidara join the Akatsuki organization in the future? I personally think he should join, otherwise it will be a bit difficult to make the subsequent plot original.) Then I also want to say that the current plot advancement is slow-paced, which is good. Please keep it up, otherwise the pace will be fast and there will be fewer chapters to read [grievance]

This is a very nice new book [Send Heart] (1) As a Naruto fanfic, it is a very rare non-Konoha start. (2) The interaction between the protagonist and Kurotsuchi Didara and others is very life-like. (3) It's not a great book, but there are many interesting points in it. [Congratulations] I hope everyone can forgive me. The author is a student and sometimes updates will be suspended due to exams.

I hope the heroine is the King of Black Earth

It's beautiful, really very beautiful. The main character is Whirlpool Fish [Flying Kiss]

A black soil is actually enough

Fortunately, I was suspicious and took a second look. As far as I can tell, the author's writing style is pretty good and the writing is organized and very good. I hope to keep going and go higher. ——Comment from an old bookworm.

Very nice daily novel

Don't use too many kaomojis. One per chapter is enough. Written according to Boruto's biography? Pu style? It's better to just write on a daily basis! Why show up early? Why come? Is there a motive?

It's good so far, looking forward to the follow-up (come on)

A rare subject matter. Well written. It's so beautiful. Can you update it twice a day?

A very unique book, worth reading! Recommended: ★★★★★

Anyway, the author writes very well

Silly tape, cute big breasts!

It feels pretty good so far.

Good looking, very good

Not bad, worthy of praise

Dad, you won't run away, will you?

Except for the Otsutsuki part, everything else looks good.

Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Beautiful

It's okay, you can take a look first [I understand]

Author, you can add some of the skills of Hidden Onoki in the Naruto mobile game to the protagonist, especially the skin and the super cool move [laughter]

Inflict damage to deceive flowers, widen the distance and pull back. Turning on the pressure is a bit overwhelming! [Sinister smile]

Wow, this book is really beautiful. I highly recommend it. It's a must-read. It's so cute, brother.

The writing is very good, I hope Deidara can turn Konoha into fireworks [laughing][laughing][laughing]