[Sex change] + [Female abortion] + [No heroine] + [No marriage] + [Change]
I~I didn't travel through time, oh, , I was just playing games~~I was wrong, I was, , I, I am the heroine, ~
Reader comments
First, I would like to offer the following thoughts about this book.
First, the peculiarity of the book's title may be part of the reason for attracting readers, but it may also cause readers to dislike it.
Second, the strangeness of the chapter names. The first half of the title of each chapter has the same characters, and the characters in the second half of the title are increased by one for each chapter. The strangeness of the chapter names may make it difficult for readers to understand.
Third, I heard that the author of this book got stuck while writing the article. In terms of universal rationality, the authors who are stuck are all capable.
Fourth, since the time of my review, the book has been updated to 11 chapters, and the author has signed a contract. Judging from this series of aspects, the author's writing skills are still strong, and the author's updates are relatively stable, but each chapter only has about 2,100 words, which is slightly insufficient.
Fifth, the plot is generally more reasonable than what is stated in the author's introduction, and the labels in the introduction are basically consistent.
Secondly, the above comments are all my own thoughts and do not have any disrespectful thoughts towards the book's friends and author. If you don't like this comment, please don't criticize it.
After reading the 40 chapters so far, I can see that the author has a clear main line, clear ideas, realistic descriptions, and a modern cyberism style. However, some plot points overlap with some old-fashioned plots, which makes some book friends feel that they can know the next plot at a glance. The number of typos has been greatly reduced compared to before, which shows that the author is more serious about writing the book. However, after I have maintained the book for a period of time, the content is still small and difficult to satisfy. Therefore, giving a five-star review is to better motivate the author and write better articles. My point of view is the same as that of other book reviewers. I am a little dissatisfied with the protagonist's current character and plot.
I thought it was Liu Beiwen, but the unexpected plot was okay. The main plot is to return to Blue Star, and the subplots are various risks. The main plot and the subplots are both very good.
The goal of the main branch is unclear, such as collecting props, destroying an organization, etc.
The protagonist's goal is to "clear the main story and return home", but as of Chapter 20, the short-term goal is still unclear. The current plot is more like a series of unit drama-style tasks and needs to be modified.
The protagonist's combat power is too strong, which prevents many cool points from being carried out, and restrictive measures need to be added.
The content is quite interesting, but it would be better if the title and chapter titles of the book were more normal [Chigua]
Damn, the plot of the book is still okay
The characters are vivid and three-dimensional, and the plot is hilarious
First, I would like to offer the following thoughts about this book. First, the peculiarity of the book's title may be part of the reason for attracting readers, but it may also cause readers to dislike it. Second, the strangeness of the chapter names. The first half of the title of each chapter has the same characters, and the characters in the second half of the title are increased by one for each chapter. The strangeness of the chapter names may make it difficult for readers to understand. Third, I heard that the author of this book got stuck while writing the article. In terms of universal rationality, the authors who are stuck are all capable. Fourth, since the time of my review, the book has been updated to 11 chapters, and the author has signed a contract. Judging from this series of aspects, the author's writing skills are still strong, and the author's updates are relatively stable, but each chapter only has about 2,100 words, which is slightly insufficient. Fifth, the plot is generally more reasonable than what is stated in the author's introduction, and the labels in the introduction are basically consistent. Secondly, the above comments are all my own thoughts and do not have any disrespectful thoughts towards the book's friends and author. If you don't like this comment, please don't criticize it. After reading the 40 chapters so far, I can see that the author has a clear main line, clear ideas, realistic descriptions, and a modern cyberism style. However, some plot points overlap with some old-fashioned plots, which makes some book friends feel that they can know the next plot at a glance. The number of typos has been greatly reduced compared to before, which shows that the author is more serious about writing the book. However, after I have maintained the book for a period of time, the content is still small and difficult to satisfy. Therefore, giving a five-star review is to better motivate the author and write better articles. My point of view is the same as that of other book reviewers. I am a little dissatisfied with the protagonist's current character and plot.
I thought it was Liu Beiwen, but the unexpected plot was okay. The main plot is to return to Blue Star, and the subplots are various risks. The main plot and the subplots are both very good. The goal of the main branch is unclear, such as collecting props, destroying an organization, etc.
The protagonist's goal is to "clear the main story and return home", but as of Chapter 20, the short-term goal is still unclear. The current plot is more like a series of unit drama-style tasks and needs to be modified. The protagonist's combat power is too strong, which prevents many cool points from being carried out, and restrictive measures need to be added.
The content is quite interesting, but it would be better if the title and chapter titles of the book were more normal [Chigua]
Damn, the plot of the book is still okay
The characters are vivid and three-dimensional, and the plot is hilarious