
Prince Eldon's Brother Is Good at Discipline
艾尔登王弟擅长戒律
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 823k Words
- Genre
- Martial Arts
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 4mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
1.5kReads
7.2Score
136Shelves
369Chapters
94Listens
107.6kReads · all time
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High Quality Fanfic
High-quality anime fan fiction, preferably more than 500,000 words
27.7MViews883Books1dUpdated
American Drama Fan Fiction
Why don't Tomato have fan fiction about American dramas? Such as Grimm, Twilight, Underworld, Teen Wolf, Daywalker
15.7MViews239Books11dUpdated
Pure and Refreshing Writing, Neither Mentally Retarded nor Aggrieved. It Is Lighthearted and Funny and Can Be Used in Daily Battles.
5.4MViews220Books16hUpdated
Asking for a Novel by Elden Ring
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The quality is very good. You can place an order if you need it. The store's service attitude is very good and the materials are genuine. The courier's service attitude is very good. Five-star praise.
The overall level is very good. The biggest problem is that a bunch of setting inferences need to be added after each one... It is completely unnecessary. The characteristic of the soul system is the fragmentation of information, so there can be various versions. It won't mean anything if you explain it over and over, and no one is interested in studying environmental science while reading novels.
I really like the setting of the protagonist. Some of the treatment of the borderland and the outer gods are worth watching. I like the protagonist's laws. It refers to the thousand-year spiral cycle of innovation based on the laws of real historical cycles. It's interesting to see the development of the borderland.
The look and feel of the book is good, at least the writing is very good. As a fan, it is very good. As for the content, for someone like me who has not understood the Ring of Law in detail, I am not qualified to evaluate it. But for me personally, it is a quite excellent novel. Unfortunately, the number of words is very small and it is only a new book.
This book is considered to be a higher level in Tomato. There is no poisonous or unreasonable place in the whole book. The emotions are handled well. The protagonist has his own ideas, which is good. I have read some Dharma books, and some of them are too focused on the plot. In fact, if it is a real world, it is wrong to only look at the characters one-sidedly. The author handles this very well. When reading, you can feel the unique style of this book. The golden finger is not too outrageous. I even think the naming fits the style of the legal ring. Hh I think the red-haired protagonist is pretty good-looking too [blowing kiss], I hope the author can show more of the grand retro fantasy style of the Ring of Law!! Five stars! [Love]
A very good book It was indeed very interesting at first, but since the Invisible Mother took on a human body, I felt it was a bit abstract. Forget it, it's probably because my appetite is too strong. Come on, author, change the book and read it.
The author has really researched the background of the Ring of Magic in detail and has an understanding of various settings. The writing is also very interesting. It is a pity that the popularity of fan fiction like the Ring of Magic is too low. Good luck to the author [Like]
It's very comfortable to read so far. You can see the author's thoughts at the end of each chapter. I'm curious whether the Bankai in the introduction will wait until the end of the Circle of Magic chapter before appearing, or whether it will appear as a spice and golden finger in the middle, or like the type of "Astartes of the Bear School"
The writing is pretty good, both in terms of the deconstruction of the ring world and the characters' personalities. The protagonist purely shows his IQ and rarely makes serious moves. After all, the ring is a world where great power belongs to itself. It is necessary to describe some battles, especially to show the power of the protagonist.
It looks good, but I don't know if the heroine is alone or in a group
Yes, I just want to ask if it will be integrated into the plot of Lord of the Night, such as whether there will be a disaster caused by the night, whether the opportunity to make a wish in the night will be obtained, etc. In short, there are not many Tomato Writer fandom settings that are as clear as this book, come on [Blow a kiss]
After reading it for a while, I think this book is quite good. I am not a legal expert, but I can feel that the author is writing a world that he has tried his best to perfect. I can see the author's sophistication. I hope you will stick to it. So far, I think it is very good.
It's a very good fanfic of the Ring of Law, good luck to the author [Like]
Come on, great author of imperial letters. ദ്ദി˶>𖥦<)✧
The author wants to continue writing
It's good to read. Among the plot articles before the Ring of Magic game, this one is still good-looking. The author's research on the Ring of Magic can only be said to be amazing to me, a newcomer to the Ring of Magic (I played the main body of the Ring of Magic and the DLC Shadowlands in 2025).
Even those who have never played the game can watch it, it's very interesting.
Well written and a profound view of the world
It seems that I won't give it 5 stars. It's really good and I feel like it can be compared with the "Juggernaut" from the prison cat next door. I'll see if the author can reply after seeing it👀 Will there be any updates? @
The plot design is very good
The more you look at it, the better it tastes.
Author, you must keep writing.
Each player's Elden Circle is different
Let me give you a good review first, everyone understands King of Elden differently!
It's very interesting to write, I'll give it a review and read it for a while before commenting.
It's considered a masterpiece among those writing about old men's rings. The previous writing is really good, all the details of the magic circle are written very clearly, and the plot is quite interesting. But later on, I felt that the writing was confusing. The more I read, the more fascinated I became. The author himself got excited about writing. Everyone comes to watch the Elden Ring fanfic to watch various 5 arts and fights! Cool! [Laughing] Look at the power up! Of. You can include some elements when writing about Fate, but you can't write about Fate throughout the whole article, which will destroy all your own characteristics. If I like watching Fate, why don't I read Fate fanfics [Thinking]? I know that the author may have a lot of knowledge, but if you throw out a lot of miscellaneous knowledge about Christianity, people may not know it, and it will feel like the author is talking about random things [face covering], like a magician [laughing evilly] Moreover, the protagonist Shen Yin is also taboo. The protagonist of a novel can only be seen occasionally in the narration, which is a bit fun. I've been chasing updates since the first chapter and now I can't catch up anymore [rolls eyes]
At least it can be seen that you put a lot of thought into the name. Well, I just feel like there are a little less people writing about my home. After that, we are now in another world. I hope we can do well in terms of combat power. Every time it comes to the new century, it is so inaccurate. I haven't seen Fate and it's still very difficult to read. Therefore, it is recommended to introduce each world before going to it.
Very well written, recommended. It's a pity that Marlenia, Michaela, and Lani haven't appeared yet.
It's very interesting, each character has his own thoughts, which makes sense. It's rare that the protagonist is a normal person, with intelligence that can defeat a god, and he is not a nymphomaniac.
It looks good, the protagonist's plug-in is very versatile, and other worlds can be expected in the future.