If You Won't Behave, I'll Just Lock You Up

When I read this book, I felt like M. For this reason, it is not too much to give it 5 stars. The story is good. Just like the label, the relationship between the characters is very subtle. It made me feel a little uncomfortable but also happy. I was beaten like M but not too much. The storyline is very compact and a lot of information can be crammed into a small amount of content. I feel like I'm losing control. [Laughing] The above are all personal opinions, but I still recommend it, it's still pretty good-looking. Something needs to be said here, Shuangjie needs lightning protection, and Yu is detained by Shen in Chapter 46. I don't know what the ending will be at the moment, but I'm still looking forward to a happy ending.

The current reading is good. There are some obvious flaws in the author's first novel, but you can see that the writing style has improved in the future. The more serious problems are mainly the lack of punctuation in paragraphs and the lack of "" in dialogue, which may affect the perception. Overall, the plot transition is a bit abrupt, and the early plot may easily dissuade some readers. The characters change too quickly in some plots, and this is most obvious in the first 35 chapters. (Su Wan and Sister are no longer related to the plot so soon?) But later on, the author gradually explains some precursors of changes to pave the way. I hope to see Yu Mo Bai Qie Hei counterattack Ruoxi as soon as possible. I have to say that the update speed of this book is really fast compared with other books of the same type. Come on, big brother

Oh . It is also a pleasure to find such a wonderful book. It is so exciting. Where can I find the lily novels that are so wild and yandere? Don't be blocked [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

How can I put it this way? This is the only book I have been chasing, but the internal plot is too curious, so be careful when pursuing it. Overall, Chen Ruoxi really beats up a lot of yanderes, but it is indeed a bit hard to accept. "Reincarnated a hundred thousand times, just to escape death for you." Chen Ruoxi's love is suffocating and scary. I have committed suicide long ago. Anyway, the mission is completed, and there will be no more hundreds of chapters. Come and see Teacher Shen Lin's works, the sweet Mu Xiaozhao doesn't wait for anyone [Adoration] Anyway, it's over

It's late but it's here, and it doesn't matter whether there are punctuation marks or not, even though it's a bit laborious. I just like this plot. It's over if you go crazy till the end. Having played True Lily, I don't feel pressured [punch out][punch out][punch out]

I was so confused that I scrolled through Douyin and watched it for a while. I felt that this was a real yandere novel. Every move of the character was in line with my aesthetic impression of yandere. I mainly read Yandere Lily, and I have read a lot of it, but I felt that it kept going back and forth the same way, and sometimes the plot of the little dark room was dragged out again and again. This book is quite crisp and neat, which is great. Small suggestion: When I first read it, there were no double quotation marks in the character dialogue, which affected the reading experience a bit. I hope it will be included later.

I just want to ask a question, is it He or BE? This... What? Maybe it's because the yandere stories I read before were too light Brother, I can't do it anymore It seems like I experienced fear for the first time Brother, I was wrong Why is the book gone?

The author goes to this world to be the protagonist

Except for a few typos, it's pretty good, absolutely superb [laughs]

@ Guyu Mo The author should not let the yandere impose reality on the heroine 🈲🈲🈲 Is it okay to stop anti-human torture and inhuman transformation? ! Torture + non-human transformation + female protagonist = experimental specimen, one by one I also want to see how realistic anti-human torture and non-human modification are used on the heroine. This is exciting. Cutting off limbs is too boring. This is in line with my view of severely yandere characters