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A very interesting 📖 book, the only one of the HP genre that I have read. The entire article gave me a feeling of the protagonist Lorance. Everything was "just right". It was not so profound that I couldn't understand it, nor was it so simple that I felt that the plot was weak. The content is neat and orderly, rich in depth, and full of wisdom. It is like a knowledgeable elder telling the story of the magical world, but paradoxically, the whole book is full of youthful atmosphere and the calm telling of a politician. Because of a deal, a bloodline, or a world war, an Italian Grindelwald came to Hogwarts and used his own methods to let everyone in Hogwarts know about Solbat and the undefined Lorance. As the author writes in the book, the protagonist, Lorance, has grown up and has all the excellent qualities of a family heir. He is intelligent, rational, and good at dealing with people. But he is very different from Malfoy. He is not arrogant, not contemptuous, modest, and has the oriental temperament of his grandmother [laughs]. The story is interspersed with many thought-provoking issues, involving war, rights, relationships between people, etc. Sometimes it feels like the protagonist is not only answering questions from classmates and professors, but also answering us as readers. Well, a lively and serious story [thinking]. Very interesting!

I personally like this article very, very, very much. Among the many HP fanfics I have read, this is the one with the best writing, the best character creation, and the original characters are not broken. First of all, it can be seen that the author is very careful when creating his original characters, and he must have searched for relevant information. The author describes the living habits and behavior of Europeans very well. Take a look at this This article has also given me historical knowledge (the author has integrated the history of World War II very well, and the historical knowledge shared by book friends in the comment area has also benefited me a lot as a liberal arts student). I also like the character of the protagonist very much. Lorance has the ability to handle the overall situation, tight logic, shrewdness, intelligence, hard work, independence, and his good education and sense of responsibility. His playful and appropriate concern for family and friends, and his sense of boundaries when getting along with others are really very comfortable to watch. His determination and clear anchoring of himself are qualities that I envy. He knows what he wants and does, and does not follow others' opinions. He does not care about other people's opinions and his clear anchoring of himself. This is a quality that I envy. It would be great to be friends with this kind of person, because he will guide you and respect you. Likewise, with this kind of person It is also scary to be an enemy, because he is patient and powerful and will make you die silently. He and Riddle stand together without any disadvantage. He can even be the dominant one (a bit like fishing for beauties). Smart and self-aware, he is indeed a cunning Italian who knows how to use his own advantages. The two of them are sympathetic to each other and are really delicious duo! They are really suitable for the two tracks "My wife is my weakness, but my wife is definitely not a kind person" and "Like is to meet the opponent, love is to be defeated". This is simply a state banquet! ! !

This is the best Harry Potter fanfic I have read recently. It has excellent descriptions and clear logic. The protagonist is very handsome and is a natural leader. It is very refreshing to watch him grow step by step. The supporting characters also have distinct personalities and their own characteristics. The plot arrangement makes people want to continue reading. All in all, this book is really good. The more I read, the better it gets. I hope it can stay this way until the end. Finally, I wish my wife a happy day every day! The further you look back, the more you can feel that this book is different from other books. War is often a boundary that fan authors dare not touch. It's not that the teachers' writing is not up to the mark, but that it is too sensitive and cruel, too cold and bloody. But this book is just right, integrating war elements into the magical world of Harry Potter. Integrating realistic elements into the fantasy world will undoubtedly make the novel appear more real. As a liberal arts student, I know a lot about these wars, so I was even more shocked when I saw them. It also made me realize that the magical world also exists in the real world, and it will also be affected by real wars. The protagonist has the surname of Grindelwald and is of Italian blood. There is no doubt that Germany and Italy were sensitive during World War II, which made him receive either friendly or defensive attention in the wizarding world. But the description is just right, and the protagonist accepts all this just right. His handling makes me as a reader very comfortable. It is really a rational action. It's really beautiful. Come on, teacher!

The writing is quite skillful, and there is no feeling that it is written very deliberately just to express something, and it will not make people feel embarrassed or disgusted. The teacher fully demonstrated the character and charisma of the protagonist, I like it very much!

I've always been concerned about fitting two male protagonists into a template of one weak and one strong, but this book doesn't have that at all. All you can see are two souls attracted to each other and close to each other. What happens around the protagonist, the dialogues and actions he performs are very vivid, and you seem to really be able to see the elegant Italian Ravenclaw. I rarely write book reviews, but this is indeed a rare and good book. Because of the author's influence, I now want to learn Italian. Please give the author a boost and keep reading!!

It's simply a stroke of genius! The characterization and language description are elegant and detailed. Such a protagonist is truly indescribably handsome. Moreover, the author has a very deep understanding of the original work. The negotiation at the beginning is really great. The interaction with the classmates in Hogwarts is also very interesting. It reveals a bit of warmth and beauty of the student days in that war era. I think that although the protagonist is elegant on the surface, has no flaws, and has a clear plan for the future, he actually has warmth in his heart. Just like the Sorting Hat said, his ambition comes from the desire to protect the people he cherishes. However, it is still a bit short at present, and I hope the author will update it soon!

Why is it not popular 🔥, this is a perfect article, ahhhhh, my family, I am already obsessed with Lorance, this cunning Italian, you are a perfect author, I will follow you to the death This book is really good. If you have read Gray Tower Notes, you will also like this book. The writing style of the delicious author "Family" is very sophisticated. I immediately became obsessed with Italy after reading it. There has never been a book that made me so obsessed with the charm of language. Lancer is really good at expressing himself. It's a perfect boy. The author invited God to come. The ambiguity between Lancer and Tom is God. This is the best article in the HP series. It is the best. I said, why is it not popular? Why, why, why, why why why why

Writing style: bright and flowing Details: The plot is reasonable and fluctuates with the emotional process. The conflict is not prominent enough, the character creation is stable, and the author's plot and emotional changes are very stable. Characters: The description of key characters is detailed and prominent, and they appear vividly on the paper. However, maybe due to the length factor, some of the characters are a bit stereotyped, but the characters perform their respective roles on stage and perform together to make up for the shortcomings (the flaws do not hide the flaws) Finally, the author's article made me see love. I hope more people will like the author's work (although I don't know why there are so few) [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

A very interesting novel, although it uses the background of HP, it does not involve the main plot. The original character written is very charming. I am very curious about how the author will handle the ending. In the original work, Voldemort objectively does not understand love because he is the product of a love potion. The author said in the text that it should be as non-ooc as possible, so I am very curious. Is the ending really bad? But I hope it is he*^_^* Cheers to the author! I really like this novel you wrote, it's very beautiful⊙∀⊙! Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on＾0＾~

Super pretty! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I really like the protagonist! The main character is super charming! [Blow a kiss] [Send a heart] But baby, you are only a teenager, why are you so strict with yourself? It feels a little distressing to see you. [Almost crying] So beautiful! ! ! ! ! [Love][love]

A very delicate and long-lasting emotion, Lorance was like a rare sunshine in the rain in London. It was so dazzling that Riddle subconsciously chose to observe. During the observation process, he noticed this touch of warmth in the rain. He shivered and realized that it was too late.

It's a... How should I put it... A very peaceful book? The author talks about some things through words, but they are not difficult to understand. They just talk about war, peace and protection in a calm and objective manner. They have each other's positions, but they don't confront each other. They just talk about their own ideas from their own perspectives and listen to the ideas of others. If I had to describe the emotional lines of the protagonists, they are like the sea under the sun. They look plain on the surface, but have turbulent undercurrents. They fell in love at first sight or fell in love over time. Perhaps only they knew what they saw when they first looked at each other. They explore each other. My poor language cannot allow me to describe this book more. In short, I am very grateful to the author for letting us see him.

It's very good to read and review. The writing is very good and has been certified by old bookworms! The character and description of the protagonist are very, very full, and the scenes opposite Riddle are also very interesting. It feels like it was completely written by Riddle himself. . The relationship line is also very reasonable. It is not the kind of love between you and me from the beginning. It is very delicious. From a bit of tit-for-tat to gradually opening up and becoming friends, cb can also take a big bite of cp, which is even more delicious. . . Many of the changes in Riddle's views and psychology are also very practical. Lorance is really a great guiding lover/friend. In short, it is very delicious. Eleven delicious works that can be read with your brain on Tomato. . . I would be really sad if I didn't come to see it. . And I feel like I won't love anything else after reading this one. The author must keep writing! (Knocking on my job)

It's very interesting. I think the protagonist is very smart [laughs]

The protagonist is well portrayed, and through carefully designed words and deeds (which can feel the author's strength), people can feel the protagonist's strong personality. The author's choice of words and sentences are also very interesting. The language is easy to understand, but also very philosophical. He often says some really amazing things. You can calm down and read this book carefully.

Ram, ram it, explode it Lorance's character, behavior, and values are all very attractive to me. This is a person who is not a Holy Mother and has his own selfish motives and interests. There was a very comfortable feeling between him and Riddle A tacit understanding between two smart people The identity of the mafia is also very fascinating. It's really fun to deal with people who don't like it and are provocative in every possible way. Although in the part I'm seeing now, the two people haven't even shared their horoscopes yet, it's already foreseeable that the two people have a tacit understanding when they're together. Update the main package soon, I will follow it closely

Super recommended! ! ! Why is there no rating? Damn it! ! ! Totally worth 9 points+! ! The Riddle in this book is different from the ones I've seen before, with a light feel. The protagonist is a mixed-race young master of the Italian Mafia, and the setting is very novel. The background of World War II is also better integrated into the text. It's not a very profound truth but it doesn't seem superficial either. Go read it! Go read it! !

Very nice! I really like the character of the protagonist in this book. He is a very clear-headed person who knows what he wants. It seems to be very consistent with my perception of a family heir. Anyway, I like this book very much! I just can't get enough of the series ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅

Invincible is super good-looking, and the pull between the two protagonists is so exciting to me. The author is very good at writing, and the characters are very three-dimensional. It's absolutely amazing, the dialogue between the two protagonists is very, very, very, very tasteful. The author is truly divine. It's so beautiful. I love this book so much! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's so delicious. The characters are well understood and the writing is amazing. The protagonist is also very three-dimensional, not the kind of flat character who is very superficial and only has a sense of comfort. The little Italian gentleman Amiami and Riddle are sober and testing each other, and there is also a little bit of excitement outside of testing. It feels like the relationship between the two has lasted for a hundred years, and you feel like a moment outside the order. Woohoo, I'm really looking forward to the next development, boss, keep writing! It's really super pretty! It's so cool to watch😇😇😇😇

It's so beautiful. I really like the character of Lorance. I can totally understand why you, Tom, fell in love with it! Tom's character is also very interesting! It's just too little. It hurts me so much to follow the series [I'm about to cry]

My lack of vocabulary can't explain how good this book is. It gives me different feelings from other fans. It has a different starting point and a different emphasis on plot and emotional development, but it is very addictive. Moreover, this book requires thinking and understanding. There are many professional terms or proprietary vocabulary in it. The descriptions of foxes about war, souls, etc. Are really amazing (although I don't understand the theory of the map part, WW, the mathematics is still too supermodel), many times in the book The academic arguments or discussions are all naturally immersed in it, and the two protagonists are also very charming. They are not the kind that must be shown in the development of CP, but can be completely fascinated by any one of them. Reading this article will not be impetuous at all, and want to develop the emotional line quickly, because the characters and the world he constructed are very three-dimensional. When I read it, I wanted to know what will happen in the next time node, rather than how much goodwill the following events will make between the protagonists. Writing this late at night, maybe my words are not very clear and my expressions are a bit confusing, but I am now in a state of ambivalence about finally tying the knot and why. By the way, this book is the first one that appears on my recommendation list. My tomato has finally become sensible. I am so lucky, hahaha. Finally, I hope that the author can insist on finishing this story, rest when he is tired, and don't wear out his body, but he must write it to the ending (this is what readers who have read n books of Bei Gege said), Fox will definitely satisfy the little reader's wish, right?

The author's writing style is very good and very attractive. Keep reading. The characterization of the protagonist is very three-dimensional and does not avoid the description of war. It can make people immersed in the situation. It made me forget to sleep and eat [admiration]. I accidentally tied it.

The emotional line of this book is very delicate, with the feeling of a long flowing stream, and it is centered around the original protagonist. It does not deliberately revolve around any character, such as Riddle. It is very different from some other books I have read before. The author's writing style is really good. I didn't feel it when I first read it, but it became obvious in the middle and late stages. The writing is very delicate. The portrayal of various characters is also very good. Anyway, it is a highly recommended novel. Although this book has just been opened and the book rating is low, I think it will be rated 8.5 Or 9 in the future. Anyway, it has great potential. I hope the author will write more.

The character design of the protagonist is quite novel, the author's writing style is very good, and Tom and Xiao Luo are vividly portrayed. There are not many Internet terms in the Chinese area, which will not make people feel uncomfortable in European and American style HP fans. Although the plot style is daily-oriented, it is full of details. I can see Xiao Luo's different faces in the author's writing, and his IQ is online! It's great to see the growth and emotional changes of Tom and Lo from their daily lives at Hogwarts! The author's Tom is not as violent and dark as other novels. It feels like he is gradually growing up in the life of the protagonist. The anchor point is really delicious! I don't know if the author will write about the next generation, or if it will be finished after they graduate. Looking at it now, it feels like there are a lot of plots that have not been written yet. After getting into the trap, I can't help but refresh it every day.

It's so beautiful, it's totally on my XP, it's always been very stable, Lori is so charming, a completely guiding lover, I'm about to fall in love with him, and the Italian part is also very well written, letting people know the meaning of traveling thousands of miles, and it's so frustrating this year, the part where I helped Lori tie her hair was even more exciting, it's so good to watch it, I heard the author said that it will be finished soon, I feel so reluctant to let go! This book is really great. I feel it is among the top three Lao Fu Tong humanities I have read!

It's very beautiful, with rare logical writing style and ideas, as well as delicate emotional descriptions. Who wouldn't love him? The young couple pulling each other is the best. It also broadens the world outside the UK, and the world view is better.

It's super good-looking, and the main character is very charming and very sensible all the time. The teacher's writing style is also very good, and it is very comfortable to read. I started reading this book as soon as I discovered it. I read directly to the latest update. I clicked on it and found that it was unfinished🥺😭. Looking forward to the following content hehe🥰😘🫶🫶🫶.

It's very interesting, the logic is very strict, the plot is not cliche and the emotional line is very comfortable. The narrative ability is very strong and the writing is very good. I like the creation of the protagonist very much. The whole book is not written around the emotional line, but it is very top-notch. It is the best among the fanfics I have read recently. I highly recommend it. You can give it a try.

Teacher, your writing is so awesome! I like it very much. It's the kind of calm and light writing. It writes in great detail how the protagonist got to where he is now, and it's slow but it doesn't make me feel dragged out. The relationship with Riddle didn't come out of nowhere, it wasn't a sudden love and possession, it was a habit that slowly seeped into life. I like it so much. Teacher, please cook some food. I'm hungry.