Harry Potter: The Serpent That Swallows the Sun

A very interesting 📖 book, the only one of the HP genre that I have read. The entire article gave me a feeling of the protagonist Lorance. Everything was "just right". It was not so profound that I couldn't understand it, nor was it so simple that I felt that the plot was weak. The content is neat and orderly, rich in depth, and full of wisdom. It is like a knowledgeable elder telling the story of the magical world, but paradoxically, the whole book is full of youthful atmosphere and the calm telling of a politician. Because of a deal, a bloodline, or a world war, an Italian Grindelwald came to Hogwarts and used his own methods to let everyone in Hogwarts know about Solbat and the undefined Lorance. As the author writes in the book, the protagonist, Lorance, has grown up and has all the excellent qualities of a family heir. He is intelligent, rational, and good at dealing with people. But he is very different from Malfoy. He is not arrogant, not contemptuous, modest, and has the oriental temperament of his grandmother [laughs]. The story is interspersed with many thought-provoking issues, involving war, rights, relationships between people, etc. Sometimes it feels like the protagonist is not only answering questions from classmates and professors, but also answering us as readers. Well, a lively and serious story 🤔. Very interesting!

I personally like this article very, very, very much. Among the many HP fanfics I have read, this is the one with the best writing, the best character creation, and the original characters are not broken. First of all, it can be seen that the author is very careful when creating his original characters, and he must have searched for relevant information. The author describes the living habits and behavior of Europeans very well. Take a look at this This article has also given me historical knowledge (the author has integrated the history of World War II very well, and the historical knowledge shared by book friends in the comment area has also benefited me a lot as a liberal arts student). I also like the character of the protagonist very much. Lorance has the ability to handle the overall situation, tight logic, shrewdness, intelligence, hard work, independence, and his good education and sense of responsibility. His playful and appropriate concern for family and friends, and his sense of boundaries when getting along with others are really very comfortable to watch. His determination and clear anchoring of himself are qualities that I envy. He knows what he wants and does, and does not follow others' opinions. He does not care about other people's opinions and his clear anchoring of himself. This is a quality that I envy. It would be great to be friends with this kind of person, because he will guide you and respect you. Likewise, with this kind of person It is also scary to be an enemy, because he is patient and powerful and will make you die silently. He and Riddle stand together without any disadvantage. He can even be the dominant one (a bit like fishing for beauties). Smart and self-aware, he is indeed a cunning Italian who knows how to use his own advantages. The two of them are sympathetic to each other and are really delicious duo! They are really suitable for the two tracks "My wife is my weakness, but my wife is definitely not a kind person" and "Like is to meet the opponent, love is to be defeated". This is simply a state banquet!!!

This is the best Harry Potter fanfic I have read recently. It has excellent descriptions and clear logic. The protagonist is very handsome and is a natural leader. It is very refreshing to watch him grow step by step. The supporting characters also have distinct personalities and their own characteristics. The plot arrangement makes people want to continue reading. All in all, this book is really good. The more I read, the better it gets. I hope it can stay this way until the end. Finally, I wish my wife a happy day every day! The further you look back, the more you can feel that this book is different from other books. War is often a boundary that fan authors dare not touch. It's not that the teachers' writing is not up to the mark, but that it is too sensitive and cruel, too cold and bloody. But this book is just right, integrating war elements into the magical world of Harry Potter. Integrating realistic elements into the fantasy world will undoubtedly make the novel appear more real. As a liberal arts student, I know a lot about these wars, so I was even more shocked when I saw them. It also made me realize that the magical world also exists in the real world, and it will also be affected by real wars. The protagonist has the surname Grindelwald and is of Italian blood. The sensitivity of Germany and Italy during World War II is unquestionable, which makes him receive either friendly or defensive attention in the wizarding world. But the description is just right, and the protagonist accepts all this just right. His handling makes me as a reader very comfortable. It is really a rational action. It's really beautiful. Come on, teacher!

The writing is quite skillful, and there is no feeling that it is written very deliberately just to express something, and it will not make people feel embarrassed or disgusted. The teacher fully demonstrated the character and charisma of the protagonist, I like it very much!

I've always been concerned about fitting two male protagonists into a template of one weak and one strong, but this book doesn't have that at all. All you can see are two souls attracted to each other and close to each other. What happens around the protagonist, the dialogues and actions he performs are very vivid, and you seem to really be able to see the elegant Italian Ravenclaw. I rarely write book reviews, but this is indeed a rare and good book. Because of the author's influence, I now want to learn Italian. Please give the author a boost and keep reading!!

A very delicate and long-lasting emotion, Lorance was like a rare sunshine in the rain in London. It was so dazzling that Riddle subconsciously chose to observe. During the observation process, he noticed this touch of warmth in the rain. He shivered and realized that it was too late.

A very interesting novel, although it uses the background of HP, it does not involve the main plot. The original character written is very charming. I am very curious about how the author will handle the ending. In the original work, Voldemort objectively does not understand love because he is the product of a love potion. The author said in the text that it should be as non-ooc as possible, so I am very curious. Is the ending really bad? But I hope it is he*^_^* Cheers to the author! I really like this novel you wrote, it's very beautiful⊙∀⊙! Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on^0^~

It's simply a stroke of genius! The characterization and language description are elegant and detailed. Such a protagonist is truly indescribably handsome. Moreover, the author has a very deep understanding of the original work. The negotiation at the beginning is really great. The interaction with the classmates in Hogwarts is also very interesting. It reveals a bit of warmth and beauty of the student days in that war era. I think that although the protagonist is elegant on the surface, has no flaws, and has a clear plan for the future, he actually has warmth in his heart. Just like the Sorting Hat said, his ambition comes from the desire to protect the people he cherishes. However, it is still a bit short at present, and I hope the author will update it soon!

Why is it not popular 🔥, this is a perfect article, ahhhhh, my family, I am already obsessed with Lorance, this cunning Italian, you are a perfect author, I will follow you to the death This book is really good. If you have read Gray Tower Notes, you will also like this book. The writing style of the delicious author "Family" is very sophisticated. I immediately became obsessed with Italy after reading it. There has never been a book that made me so obsessed with the charm of language. Lancer is really good at expressing himself. It's a perfect boy. The author invited God to come. The ambiguity between Lancer and Tom is God. This is the best article in the HP series. It is the best. I said, why is it not popular? Why, why, why, why why why why

Writing style: bright and flowing Details: The plot is reasonable and fluctuates with the emotional process. The conflict is not prominent enough, the character creation is stable, and the author's plot and emotional changes are very stable. Characters: The description of key characters is detailed and prominent, and they appear vividly on the paper. However, maybe due to the length factor, some of the characters are a bit stereotyped, but the characters perform their respective roles on stage and perform together to make up for the shortcomings (the flaws do not hide the flaws) Finally, the author's article made me see love. I hope more people will like the author's work (although I don't know why there are so few) 😘[Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]