[Advanced martial arts + multiple heroines + nearly invincible protagonist + satisfying wish fulfillment + comedy + no System for the protagonist] (When there’s something to be gained, he’ll definitely get his share.)
Luo Fanchen transmigrates, with a golden finger from the start, two parents who are both kings, a chubby friend, and a younger sister who isn’t related to him by blood. He’s got all the makings of a protagonist!
Until... he awakens his talent and starts belching out black smoke. He’s speechless... It makes him look like some kind of ultimate villain...
One day, the usually aloof campus beauty Leng Qingying actually approaches him and even brings him breakfast?! Luo Fanchen has no idea what’s going on, but she keeps getting closer, and each time she goes a little further...
“Is she after my body?!”
My name is Leng Qingying. I was reborn at eighteen. In my previous life, I reached the realm of the Martial Emperor. I thought I would make it to the peak of martial arts, but I died before I could succeed... This time, I’m going to reclaim everything that belongs to me.
Wait, no... Who is he? Luo Fanchen... He clearly never existed in my previous life...
“Ding! Primordial Sign-In System successfully bound!”
“Ding! Beginner mission: Sign in beside the designated person, Luo Fanchen!”
Leng Qingying: ???
I thought it was just an auxiliary tool, but these so-called System missions keep getting more outrageous...
“Ding! Sign in on the bed of the designated person, Luo Fanchen! Mission requirement: Say, ‘Don’t talk. Kiss me!’ Failure penalty: cultivation reset to zero!”
Leng Qingying: ...
Zero it is, then. I can always cultivate again!
She’d rather jump off a building today! She’d die out there before going near him!
“Ding! Reward: Primordial Divine Stone.”
Leng Qingying: Okay, that’s actually pretty sweet. I might as well take it.
I have read the latest chapter so far, and overall it is okay. What is more problematic is that a few inner-court students in Fengyun University dare to find trouble and collect protection money even though they know the identity of the protagonist group. As for the heroine: Luo Li, Jie Yuan and Yuan Chu all appear to have a high opinion of the protagonist, so there are more emotional lines about them than just posting sweet posts. The Empress is a classic cold-blooded reborn empress. Currently, she has little interaction with the male protagonist except for system sign-ins. However, there are currently few chapters and we can look forward to the follow-up (I hope we can see the charming side of the Empress that belongs to the emperor, rather than the kind of Empress who suddenly becomes a love-minded one. I will get tired of eating this type of Empress too much) As for Ling Yuan's appearance, I won't comment on it for a long time. The following are personal suggestions, purely personal preferences, you can refer to them as appropriate I hope the male protagonist can be portrayed better. The current male protagonist is not poisonous but not attractive at all (not doing evil for no reason, protecting relatives and friends should be the characteristics of a normal protagonist, but they are not attractive) I hope that the subsequent emotional development will be more delicate.
I'll give it five stars first. I've read about 20 chapters and there's nothing bad about it. It's more about daily life and can be considered as food. Those who are short on books can read it.
Not bad, it should be considered more everyday.
It looks okay so far
So far, the concepts are all very good, more everyday but interesting.