[High martial arts + multiple female protagonists + semi-invincible + cool writing + funny + protagonist without system] (You will definitely eat when you have to eat)
Luo Fanchen traveled through time, and he started with a golden finger. He had two kingly parents, a fat friend, and a sister who was not related by blood, so he was the protagonist!
Until... When he awakened his talent, he was letting out black smoke, and he was silent... Making him look like a villain...
One day... The originally cool school beauty Leng Qingying actually took the initiative to talk to him and even gave him breakfast? ! Luo Fanchen felt confused, but she approached him again and again, each time becoming more 'excessive'...
'Isn't she coveting my body? '
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My name is Leng Qingying. I was reborn at the age of eighteen. In my previous life, I stepped into the realm of Emperor Zun. I thought I could reach the pinnacle of martial arts, but I died before I could make it... In this life, I must get back everything that belongs to me.
Eh, no... Who is he... Luo Fanchen... It was clear that he never 'existed' in his previous life...
[Ding! The original sign-in system was successfully bound!
[Ding! Novice task: Please sign in next to the designated character Luo Fanchen!
Leng Qingying:? ? ?
I thought this was just an auxiliary tool, but this so-called system task is becoming more and more excessive...
[Ding! Please sign in on the bed of the designated character Luo Fanchen! Task requirement: Say 'Stop talking, kiss me! ', The penalty for failing to sign in: your cultivation level will be cleared!
Leng Qingying:......
If it's cleared, it's cleared, or it'll be rebuilt in the worst case!
She jumped from here today! I won't go outside even if I die!
Bite! Reward the Absolute Beginning Divine Stone.
Leng Qingying: It smells so good, don't give it up.
Reader comments
I have read the latest chapter so far, and overall it is okay. What is more problematic is that a few inner-court students in Fengyun University dare to find trouble and collect protection money even though they know the identity of the protagonist group.
As for the heroine:
Luo Li, Jie Yuan and Yuan Chu all appear to have a high opinion of the protagonist, so there are more emotional lines about them than just posting sweet posts.
The Empress is a classic cold-blooded reborn empress. Currently, she has little interaction with the male protagonist except for system sign-ins. However, there are currently few chapters and we can look forward to the follow-up (I hope we can see the charming side of the Empress that belongs to the emperor, rather than the kind of Empress who suddenly becomes a love-minded one. I will get tired of eating this type of Empress too much)
As for Ling Yuan's appearance, I won't comment on it for a long time.
The following are personal suggestions, purely personal preferences, you can refer to them as appropriate
I hope the male protagonist can be portrayed better. The current male protagonist is not poisonous but not attractive at all (not doing evil for no reason, protecting relatives and friends should be the characteristics of a normal protagonist, but they are not attractive)
I hope that the subsequent emotional development will be more delicate.
I'll give it five stars first. I've read about 20 chapters and there's nothing bad about it. It's more about daily life and can be considered as food. Those who are short on books can read it.
Not bad, it should be considered more everyday.
It looks okay so far
So far, the concepts are all very good, more everyday but interesting.
I have read the latest chapter so far, and overall it is okay. What is more problematic is that a few inner-court students in Fengyun University dare to find trouble and collect protection money even though they know the identity of the protagonist group. As for the heroine: Luo Li, Jie Yuan and Yuan Chu all appear to have a high opinion of the protagonist, so there are more emotional lines about them than just posting sweet posts. The Empress is a classic cold-blooded reborn empress. Currently, she has little interaction with the male protagonist except for system sign-ins. However, there are currently few chapters and we can look forward to the follow-up (I hope we can see the charming side of the Empress that belongs to the emperor, rather than the kind of Empress who suddenly becomes a love-minded one. I will get tired of eating this type of Empress too much) As for Ling Yuan's appearance, I won't comment on it for a long time. The following are personal suggestions, purely personal preferences, you can refer to them as appropriate I hope the male protagonist can be portrayed better. The current male protagonist is not poisonous but not attractive at all (not doing evil for no reason, protecting relatives and friends should be the characteristics of a normal protagonist, but they are not attractive) I hope that the subsequent emotional development will be more delicate.
I'll give it five stars first. I've read about 20 chapters and there's nothing bad about it. It's more about daily life and can be considered as food. Those who are short on books can read it.
Not bad, it should be considered more everyday.
It looks okay so far
So far, the concepts are all very good, more everyday but interesting.