One Person**********

Ahem... In summary, it's well written. Although the first 20 chapters or so to set up the background and the exercises are a bit boring, the rest of the writing is really good. Compared with other one-person fanfics, there are no intrusions of other abilities (rating +1), forced following the plot (rating +1), novel abilities that fit the background of the person (rating +1), humorous language, and no forced sensationalism (rating +1). It can be said that it is a good book worth reading. I have some immature ideas about the following plot. According to the "cheating son" routine passed down by the master of the land, I can add a female protagonist and write it in the finale, which can also echo the beginning of the story. Regarding the female lead candidates, I think Xia He is good, or Er Zhuang is also good. However, I strongly recommend Xia He (I am Lao Se Pi) [Cool] Finally, I hope the author will not mess up the work or stop updating it. At least it can give this book a good ending. [Blowing kiss]

This book currently feels like the most natural and comfortable one I have ever read among other novels. It is not as stiff as others, but very natural and gentle. The storyline is great and feels convincing, as if the plot is supposed to happen with the protagonist. Highly recommended! ! !

It's well written, it's not deliberately close to the plot, it's very natural.

I want the heroine Chen Duo. Very well written. The plot is relaxed and relaxed. You can incorporate emotions without procrastination.

It's very well written, and it's one of the better fanfics.

The best, the best, the best, this is the best one-person fanfic I have ever written so far. I will say the important things three times again, the best, the best, the best, the best [like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like][like]

So far, it seems to be the best fanfic I have ever read. There is no system, no cheating, everything is within an acceptable range, and the development is also very interesting. It does not revolve around the original protagonist, but has its own world. The occasional intersections are also very interesting to write.

The plot and everything are pretty good. I just want to ask who this single girl is. It seems that Zhang Lingyu is not undressed. Is it Xia or Duo? Just out of curiosity. Mainly, I feel that the male protagonist's doting on Duo is a bit like a brother's doting on his sister, not quite like a man and a woman.

I have read forty chapters so far, and the writing is very interesting. Although there are some places where I still want to fast forward, but overall it is very good and makes people want to continue reading. I hope the author will continue to work hard and just hope that it will not end unfinished. In addition, the author's comments at the end of each chapter are also very interesting. It can be seen that the author really likes this book and is full of love.

The character design is quite good. Although I don't want the protagonist to help Feng Baobao, it is fine as long as it is well written and the volume of each chapter is also very good. It is because of review reasons that the protagonist's skills written by the author may be different from the introduction.

It's well written and funny, and it has its own original content, but there's one thing I don't understand. Did the protagonist watch Under One Person before traveling through time? Why do I sometimes suddenly know about the plot of Under One Person, and sometimes it's like I don't know anything at all? It made me so confused.

It's a rare novel written by one person. I like the character of the protagonist very much. I can accept the heroine Chen Duo or Feng Baobao. But I discovered it too early. It's only 100 chapters. I don't like to keep up with updates, but I don't know why the book's rating is so low. I hope the author will update it and it will become popular [Like] [Like] [Like]

I didn't feel much about the title of the book at first, but after reading it, I realized that this book is really good! The characters are very consistent with the original novel, and unlike the nanny novel, it has its own original plot. In short, it's just a rush!

Well, the background introduction and foreshadowing in the first 20 chapters is indeed not easy to attract readers given the current fast pace, but as long as you stick to it, I personally feel that it is quite interesting, better than most novels written by one person.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, 나는 보았다, Хорошо выглядит, น่ารักจัง, Bonne vue., Gut aussehen., Bonito, so pretty.

The teacher's writing is really good, and the plot is particularly good. I didn't read "Under One Person" at first, but I read it because I read the teacher's book. I wish the teacher more and more traffic! (Compare your heart)

It is very comfortable to watch, the plot is very innovative, and it can be seen that the author has a strong writing skills. In my mind, it is considered a perfect score among fan fiction [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

Ah! ! ! So pretty! I recommend this book. It feels really good in the Under One Person fanfic series. There is no sudden love or romance, and the writing is not beyond recognition. The overall reading is really smooth, and the content is very exciting as I continue reading. I highly recommend it~~~

It's beautiful! The logic is very consistent with the original work. It doesn't have the fuss of reading the original work in advance, and it also shortens the distance between time travel. The plot is relaxed and relaxed, and it's good to watch! The killing is decisive, but it is very humane! In short, I recommend it. The reason for the low rating is because it is a new book. I also feel like the author doesn't look like a newcomer.

The writing is good and I like it very much. The CP relationship in it is good, but the relationship between Xia He and Xia He is not very well written. The later stage is still very good, but there is a little lack of foreshadowing in the early stage when I met Xia He and it is a bit too abrupt, but it is okay. I prefer to read it. But the biggest shortcoming is that the author can be faster [smile]

It is the most beautiful one I have ever seen. Is it followed by the main plot? [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like]

Damn, even though I can't understand Feng Shui stuff like Earth Master, I still have a lot of professional knowledge. At least it's very satisfying for me as a layman. Moreover, Chen Duo's plot processing is very delicate. It is the best arrangement among the few I have seen, and the characters are very suitable. The most important thing in fan fiction is to reasonably create the plot without ruining the characters. This novel is perfect (so far)

The previous story is a little boring, but it shows the mystery and power of the Earth Master with great tension, laying a lot of foreshadowing for the following chapters. But later on, the rhythm takes off and the writing is passable. It is truly a masterpiece. I highly recommend it!

Super exciting. The characters are very vivid and delicate. I have verified it. It is a good book, not like a Tomato book. Does the author have a small account?

The writing is good, but the first paragraph explains the background of the protagonist's abilities is a bit long. If you don't have the patience, I suggest you skip to chapter 20 to read. It won't have much impact. I especially like the part about saving Chen Duo. It's good to read.

It's very interesting, the pace is very comfortable, and the protagonist's abilities are also very interesting. Highly recommended.

Let's look at what high-quality fan fiction is. This is it. The plot is reasonable. The original characters basically conform to the original characters. A protagonist is cleverly and reasonably inserted without destroying the character of the original characters. It is written based on the original characters. It is not as far-fetched as some roadside products. Even if it is missing a little, it is not enough to read. I dare not jump to watch it for fear of missing some details.

It's great, it's very beautiful, but the author updates it twice a day, isn't it a bit too little?

Come back soon for an update. Author, I have been looking forward to the stars and the moon for two months (bushi

This fanfic is the best of all, I hope the author can recover soon and update soon😀