Tomorrow*******

The logic is reasonable, the story is realistic and touching, and the protagonist's Originium skills are very symbolic. The core of the failure of the integration movement is that it went astray without correct political guidance and theoretical and ideological support. If Tallulah had clear revolutionary ideas and a clear political program, Black Snake would only be able to stare blankly, no matter how awesome it was. With a protagonist in the integration movement, they might be able to become a revolutionary army in the true sense. The values ​​​​of the protagonist, or the author, resonate with me. An ordinary person like me also needs such a story to warm my mind. For people in that revolutionary era, many blessings are not as good as "getting better", so I wish the author a better life in the new year. The logic of the writing is already excellent, and it would be better to polish the description. It is already very prominent in Tomato, especially in terms of logic, I feel that the author has something, and this kind of thinking ability is worth continuing to cultivate.

The author's theory is very solid. It is not simply copied mechanically, but truly combined with Ark's world view, so that everything can be transferred according to time, place and conditions. And the author's writing style is also very good, as if he really saw the porridge in another world. Seeing the protagonist's theories and actions, it's really hard not to hallucinate that era. I am very curious about how the author will deal with the conflicts with the empire in the future, how he will deal with the main plot, the relationship with Sakaz and the Royal Court, as well as other cadres of the Integration Movement such as the Kingslayer, etc. I am very much looking forward to the next story.

This is a good Ark Red fanfic. The logic is clear and the rhythm is tight. Some of the plots are resonant. The author's description of the self-designed characters is very good. There is not much difference in the description of the Ark characters. It is very promising.

If you have any questions, please be gentle. I know what I said is one-sided, so I can speak boldly. Thinking about this thing is really dangerous in Arknights, a world where "gods" are born in large numbers. Didn't you know that everyone on Ark, from the generals and gods to the soldiers, are sages who have no worldly desires? It's really good to read. It has the flavor of Mao Zhan's Ark Point National Policy and Arknights' top P social articles (that book has been the top-ranked book for a long time), so the author can read it to get some inspiration. Let's talk about the shortcomings. [I understand] It's too slow. This slowness is not a unilateral slow development, but it's the inability to roll the snowball, the inability to withstand a little blow, a thousand people? [Thinking] There are not as many military police and garrisons as Cexico leads a small mobile sector, and it goes too smoothly, which can speed up. Now that the key program structure system is in place, ideas can be spread. Cexico leads you to have an orthodox heir, and Black Snake can use it. After all, Black Snake only wants Ursus to be powerful. If you show him an extremely powerful Ursus, you can attract the attention of one of the Black Snakes, and you can get a lot of good things [Note] And it won't work unless it snowballs. Your idea is much more dangerous than the stupid idea of the Integration Movement. Even the idea of the Integration Movement is being watched by the inner guards. If you don't give it a try, guess how many inner guards you can survive [Laughing and crying] The key is that Arknights doesn't give a clear map, and it maintains the characteristics of speaking Eagle Language (The Riddler). If that doesn't work, just use the Russian map. In fact, it's not much different [laughter]

It is a very good book. Although the writing style is relatively young, the depth of thought can surpass most online novels on the market. It has great potential. However, you must be careful of villains and do not talk about too in-depth content in the early stage, as this may easily result in being reported and blocked.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the novel has no logical confusion. The pace is slow but has no flaws. The behavior, details, and psychology of the characters are quite well grasped. What impressed me most is the growth of the characters. The writing style is quite good. It is at least the best among the Ark novels I have read. I recommend reading it carefully and thinking carefully. Finally, the author is great👍, keep up the good work

This book is written from the perspective of a modern person who does not know any game plots or characters, which is a novel direction. I hope the author can handle the subsequent plot well and not insert it too harshly. As the saying goes, there are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people. Come on! [Praise]

I think the author can go read Land Patrol to make up some basic settings. Some species have different names in the boat.

There are transitions and no delays. The protagonist is not like a superman who can do everything and will discuss with other characters in front of the real situation. I haven't seen any problems so far. There are too few tomatoes in this kind of article, and those with high scores are easy to be blocked, just like the "Red Empire of Another World" a long time ago. This new account is not dead yet and can help me find quality products. Well, I just hope that the people behind me can score better. Finally, I wish the author's writing skills will become more and more awesome.

Because recently, when he went to the temple to ask for a fortune, he accidentally got an evil fortune, and the god who was in charge of the evil fortune was named Shen He. Shen Hedao, named Sima, lived on the river in the grassland. There was no driftwood in that area. Therefore, Sima sinks into the river and does not float wood.

From my personal point of view, this book can definitely be considered above average among the vast majority of red texts in Tomato. The details in the article obviously refer to the setting of Porridge itself, at least as far as the moss wheat mentioned in it is concerned. If I remember correctly, this was mentioned in the land tour setting collection. I personally haven't seen the setting of Porridge for a long time, but it has been shown at this point, which at least shows that it is not empty talk. There is obvious thinking about theory, and it is obvious that we should be wary of dogmatist errors that are also found in reality. The current progress has also included right-leaning issues, etc., And I will also hold meetings to reflect on the issues, and I have spent a considerable amount of pen and ink describing ideological issues-perhaps this is what red articles should look like, which is much better than those articles about hegemony covered in red, and there is a clear difference. Finally, the level of the text itself is currently higher than that of a considerable number of fan fiction and similar online texts. The latest chapters have spent about 35,000 words describing in detail a baroness who is her own sect and is close to the reality of the Russian Socialist Revolutionary Party. Many assembly-line online novels rarely spend so much ink describing non-protagonist characters, or even the protagonist himself. It is rare to describe a character who is not exactly the same as the protagonist in such a detailed way. Compared to online articles, this is more of a traditional novel approach. The article is obviously not limited to the plot line of official history like some fan fiction. I understand this kind of behavior. Many fan authors think that they are not good enough and feel that they may not be able to control new plot lines that deviate from the official history. Therefore, no matter what, at least they will generally follow the official plot. Judging from the current direction of this book, it has been greatly changed, and there is a high probability that it will continue in the future, continuing this new plot line. The suffering of this timeline should not be as unchanged as the official history. I personally feel that I don't have much knowledge, and I haven't read many Russian literatures that I love. I haven't even read the short story "Chameleon", so I know that my literary quality is not high. But in my personal opinion, this novel shines in my eyes, and I cannot deny that my evaluation is indeed limited by inevitable subjective colors and knowledge reserves. Maybe I did overlook some of the flaws in the text that were covered up by the bright spots. After comprehensive consideration, we decided to give a conservative four-star evaluation to avoid such a high evaluation being not objective enough and making people laugh. Looking forward to more. I haven't seen such high-quality and logically written writing in a long time. The speed and quantity of chapter updates are also amazing. To be honest, maybe I haven't eaten fine rice bran for a long time. After reading this, my first reaction was: I've grown up.

Yes, it's not just that the guns are invincible right from the start, it's just that you just ignore the problem with the gunpowder in the craft world and it can't be opened. But the real red development starts from the ideological point of view. In fact, if the author really wants to promote productivity, he can start with Originium Technology. In my opinion, the biggest production tool in the Arkworld is Originium Technology, which can not only mobilize natural disasters (such as the Witch King), but also provide productivity. For example: Can the Lich King's Court in the Hall of Ten Kings pass the knowledge of Originium Technology through inheritance, like the current advanced version of brain-computer interface? Anyway, we must promote science to promote productivity. I feel that Originium Technology is a kind of science and a very powerful production tool.

It looks good, but now I have a problem, which is the name of the protagonist. The name is very important. A person with the name of Yanguo is making revolution in Ursus and a person with the name of Ursus is making revolution in Ursus are completely different things. Normally, he would be killed by local officials before he could become big (but after all, it is a small animal from Terra, so I don't feel weird about anything happening [laughter])

Very pretty. However, live ammunition weapons such as gunpowder do not seem to be a powerful weapon for the protagonist. Should we consider seizing the heavy industrial towns of Terra and using Terra's weapons technology line to obtain the material cornerstone of weapons? After all, in my personal opinion, the fact that Terra's firearms are underdeveloped does not mean that their technological level is poor or that they lack raw materials (of course the latter is possible). What's more, the Terran people's physical fitness and armor strength have led to the embarrassing status of ordinary firearms, and their actual influence is limited. Naturally, no one invests in large research and development efforts. In contrast, artillery was much more developed in Terra. Artillery has been fully popularized in Terra wars since Gaul. It's because the artillery's impact and armor-piercing capabilities are excellent enough. You must know that with the physical fitness of the Terran people, even snipers and warlocks can easily fight with more than a hundred kilograms of armor (especially the characteristic of the Ursus army is that heavy armor is everywhere, and the shield guards are the best among them. Artillery cannot hit, let alone firearms), and ordinary small wounds can heal quickly. Modern firearms really don't mean much in this case. Of course, the author can consider some "ancestral plug-ins". Ordinary firearms are useless, but the Gauss rifle is absolutely fine, or it is also possible to master the excellent and low-cost etching bullet manufacturing technology (the core reason why Rutland's firearms have high practical value is that their excellent etching bullet technology can really break most armor).

The writing is very good, the logic is detailed, and the characters are well developed (≧∇≦*). It is recommended that readers download this book (*´∀`*). After this book becomes popular, some of the content may make this book removed from the shelves╮(─▽─)╭ Come on! Effort! Ｏ(≧∇≦)Ｏ

The writing is very good, the logic is detailed, and the characters are well developed (≧∇≦*), keep up the good work (ง•̀_•́)ง

Breaking out of the system and having sufficient knowledge reserves and background research is more like a summary of one's own abilities in a unique way than the protagonist of the system. A systematic and conceptualized worldview forms philosophy and forms the power of mankind to pursue wisdom.

Being able to persist in writing until this point proves that the author still has perseverance, not to mention that this subject matter is really valuable. In Tomato, even if the content is not very good, as long as it does not deviate from the outline, I think this book is worthy of five stars.

As I watched, I suddenly had a whim (an old story is told again). After the base or the idea developed to a certain level, it was known to Terra International (whether it was true or maliciously distorted). Is there anyone interested in understanding and exploring? Do these people really exist? Do their ideals and beliefs really exist? Ha, then I took some photos, published some articles, and published a book. Oh, it's so long

Although I have never played Arknights, it does not affect me from reading this book.

Won't you resist the Ursus Council?

Come on! A very well written book, I would have liked to have written it faster. But take your time when looking at the inventory.

The writing is very detailed and well written, which makes it very immersive to read. Author, you must continue to update! Come on come on!

Thank you everyone for your support. Speak freely. Speak freely.

Okay, among so many so-called "red" novels on Tomato, I finally saw one that talks about the difficulties of partial revolution and the continuous improvement of revolutionary methods. I have only read a dozen of them now. If it keeps like this in the future, it will at least be a good one in Tomato. Come on, author. I just finished reading it. I can write a lot, but there is too little. By the way, I saw the name of this book from the wire mod. Someone made a mod for this book on the wire [face covering]. Come on, author, I am waiting for your content to improve the national policy tree.

The content of the novel is interesting, the subject matter is novel, and the characters are interesting It is a rare and excellent product, but its shortcomings are obviously better if it is slightly corrected. Moreover, the author's responses are very positive and timely feedback helps the author to make corrections. Five stars for delivery

There are not many red articles left. Count me as one. Come on, I'm optimistic about you.

Great, people always have ideals... I hope I will always be the same

The writing style is very good, and each chapter has a lot of words. Basically there is nothing poisonous about it. People who like to watch Ark or Red can come in and take a look.

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