Arknights: The Red Northwest

The logic is reasonable, the story is realistic and touching, and the protagonist's Originium skills are very symbolic. The core of the failure of the integration movement is that it went astray without correct political guidance and theoretical and ideological support. If Tallulah had clear revolutionary ideas and a clear political program, Black Snake would only be able to stare blankly, no matter how awesome it was. With a protagonist in the integration movement, they might be able to become a revolutionary army in the true sense. The values ​​​​of the protagonist, or the author, resonate with me. An ordinary person like me also needs such a story to warm my mind. For people in that revolutionary era, many blessings are not as good as "getting better", so I wish the author a better life in the new year. The logic of the writing is already excellent, and it would be better to polish the description. It is already very prominent in Tomato, especially in terms of logic, I feel that the author has something, and this kind of thinking ability is worth continuing to cultivate.

The author's theory is very solid. It is not simply copied mechanically, but truly combined with Ark's world view, so that everything can be transferred according to time, place and conditions. And the author's writing style is also very good, as if he really saw the porridge in another world. Seeing the protagonist's theories and actions, it's really hard not to hallucinate that era. I am very curious about how the author will deal with the conflicts with the empire in the future, how he will deal with the main plot, the relationship with Sakaz and the Royal Court, as well as other cadres of the Integration Movement such as the Kingslayer, etc. I am very much looking forward to the next story.

This is a good Ark Red fanfic. The logic is clear and the rhythm is tight. Some of the plots are resonant. The author's description of the self-designed characters is very good. There is not much difference in the description of the Ark characters. It is very promising.

It is a very good book. Although the writing style is relatively young, the depth of thought can surpass most online novels on the market. It has great potential. However, you must be careful of villains and do not talk about too in-depth content in the early stage, as this may easily result in being reported and blocked.

If you have any questions, please be gentle. I know what I said is one-sided, so I can speak boldly. Thinking about this thing is really dangerous in Arknights, a world where "gods" are born in large numbers. Didn't you know that everyone on Ark, from the generals and gods to the soldiers, are sages who have no worldly desires? It's really good to read. It has the flavor of Mao Zhan's Ark Point National Policy and Arknights' top P social articles (that book has been the top-ranked book for a long time), so the author can read it to get some inspiration. Let's talk about the shortcomings. [I understand] It's too slow. This slowness is not a unilateral slow development, but it's the inability to roll the snowball, the inability to withstand a little blow, a thousand people? 🤔 There are not as many military police and garrisons as Cexico leads a small mobile sector, and it goes too smoothly, which can speed up. Now that the key program structure system is in place, ideas can be spread. Cexico leads you to have an orthodox heir, and Black Snake can use it. After all, Black Snake only wants Ursus to be powerful. If you show him an extremely powerful Ursus, you can attract the attention of one of the Black Snakes, and you can get a lot of good things [Note] And it won't work unless it snowballs. Your idea is much more dangerous than the stupid idea of the Integration Movement. Even the idea of the Integration Movement is being watched by the inner guards. If you don't give it a try, guess how many inner guards you can survive 😂 The key is that Arknights doesn't give a clear map, and it maintains the characteristics of speaking Eagle Language (The Riddler). If that doesn't work, just use the Russian map. In fact, it's not much different [laughter]

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the novel has no logical confusion. The pace is slow but has no flaws. The behavior, details, and psychology of the characters are quite well grasped. What impressed me most is the growth of the characters. The writing style is quite good. It is at least the best among the Ark novels I have read. I recommend reading it carefully and thinking carefully. Finally, the author is great👍, keep up the good work

There are transitions and no delays. The protagonist is not like a superman who can do everything and will discuss with other characters in front of the real situation. I haven't seen any problems so far. There are too few tomatoes in this kind of article, and those with high scores are easy to be blocked, just like the "Red Empire of Another World" a long time ago. This new account is not dead yet and can help me find quality products. Well, I just hope that the people behind me can score better. Finally, I wish the author's writing skills will become more and more awesome.

This book is written from the perspective of a modern person who does not know any game plots or characters, which is a novel direction. I hope the author can handle the subsequent plot well and not insert it too harshly. As the saying goes, there are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people. Come on! 👍

I think the author can go read Land Patrol to make up some basic settings. Some species have different names in the boat.

Because recently, when he went to the temple to ask for a fortune, he accidentally got an evil fortune, and the god who was in charge of the evil fortune was named Shen He. Shen Hedao, named Sima, lived on the river in the grassland. There was no driftwood in that area. Therefore, Sima sinks into the river and does not float wood.